Swallows in Flight

Damn, the emperor's concubine hasn't been updated yet. Why hasn't it been updated for a long time?

Why don't you update it?

Looking forward to the follow-up, when will the author update~~

Poor Yan, life is so difficult, Your Highness King Yan, do you know? Show up quickly

I saw the update, spread the flowers~

The swallow is flying, and its feathers are missing. The son returned home and was sent far away into the wild. It rained at night, and the autumn was cold. The lush begonias are falling red all over the ground. The woman in gorgeous clothes was leaning on the couch with a delicate tea cup in her hands and a careless smile in her eyes. A maid stood in front of her with her hands tied, tears streaming down her face, and a look of sadness on her face. Just listen to her whisper—— "Your Highness... He has been in ecstasy recently..." Please forgive me for starting with this sentence, because when I read the last sentence, I almost smashed my computer with laughter. There is also the sentence "Your Highness, my Highness" in the previous chapter, and the sentence "I miss you for no reason" caused by "the heart is broken", Xiaoyu is definitely a mascot level! I really want to give her a rhetorical master award, what should I do... Well, let's get right to the point. There is no problem with the plot structure of this article, Girl, and you have excellent writing style, especially in the description of scenery, which should be eye-catching among the blockbuster Jinjiang articles. Your language style is gentle but also cold, and your stories have just the right amount of humor, which can make readers smile from time to time. Occasionally, the description is not concise enough, but it does not matter. As an ancient proverb, your article is already excellent, neither too plain nor too exaggerated. As for why the girl's article is not favored (...), Aside from the issue of the compatibility between your article and Jinjiang, there is no doubt that it is due to updating. Other than that, I can't really find anything more wrong with your article itself. At the beginning of the chapter, the author focuses on describing the emotional line between Fu Yan and Zhu Yunwen. However, the main theme of the relationship between these two people has always been deception and being deceived. Such feelings are sad. How could Zhu Yunwen not know who the "Zhu Zhirao" Fu Yan was thinking about was. Whenever Fu Yan mentioned that night in Canglang Mountain, what was Zhu Yunwen thinking? Didn't his constant vagueness and perfunctory behavior already indicate his attitude? He couldn't stop Fu Yan from thinking about this, so he could only persuade him tactfully, almost begging: Can't every bit of your life in the Daming Palace in the past seven years erase your thoughts about that person? And whenever Fuyan stubbornly brought up the matter, he could only suppress his reluctance and pretend to be a person he hated. Because this is what Fuyan believes is the indelible bond between him and her. Just... "You've only been with that person for a few days, and we've only really lived together for seven years." Zhu Yunwen was gentle and indulgent when dealing with Fuyan, and he was able to handle political affairs as well as a real emperor. Don't look at his young age. Zhu Yunwen grew up in a deep palace, and his scheming cannot be underestimated. However, just like Fuyan felt when he met the King of Yan, Zhu Di, in a restaurant, once he met Zhu Di, the main character, the high and low of the two people became clear at a glance. In front of this fourth uncle, Zhu Yunwen's experience and strength are still not enough. That's why he worries more about gains and losses, wants to protect Fuyan and prevent her from leaving his control, and becomes angry because of Fuyan's contact with Zhu Di. Zhu Yunwen should know Zhu Di better than Fu Yan, who secretly loves "Zhi Rao". What he has seen is the more cold-blooded and disdainful side of the man, which is why he is more afraid of Fu Yan being hurt. On the other hand, Zhu Yunwen also knew the gap between himself and Zhu Di. He was jealous and inferior all the time, not to mention that Fuyan still reminded him cruelly in that way every day. God knows how excited he was when he heard Fuyan personally promised to marry him. Everything in the past seven years seemed to be a confirmation of their relationship. Today, this son had to marry, and he thought he would definitely make Fuyan forget that person. Unexpectedly, she held his hand and intertwined their fingers tightly. Her tone was gentle and soft, but what she said was, "Yunwen, our fate was planted seven years ago." In fact, it is difficult for people to describe this girl Fuyan in a general way. She is not a complicated girl, but her emotions and flesh have the same temperature as ours, making people feel that she is so real. In this article, Fuyan is the only character who the author has given a key psychological description. Because of this, we know a lot about her. What Fu Yan is obsessed with is Zhu Zhirao, whom she only met once in Canglang Mountain, but the person who actually loves her is Zhu Yunwen, the eldest grandson of the emperor, who has been with her for seven years. She mistakenly regarded Zhu Yunwen as the person of her heart, although subconsciously she had been unable to convince herself. But after all, they are people who have been friends for seven years. Fuyan is not without feelings for Zhu Yunwen. Even if the feelings are not entirely on the level of love, she has already put Zhu Yunwen in a position that she can't let go of. However, whether "Zhu Zhirao" or Zhu Yunwen was more important in her heart, she couldn't explain it now that she didn't know Zhu Di's identity. In Chapters 4 and 5, Fuyan was worried about Zhu Yunwen who was marching outside, so he rushed over to think of ways to help him. The description in this paragraph is very interesting. Perhaps it is this kind of daily life with a little excitement but no trouble that made me temporarily let go of the emotional entanglement between the hero and heroine and smile along with the author's words. Here, against the military spies hiding in the dark, Fuyan adopted a simple method, a method that left everyone speechless—— "You two must guard this tent and don't allow anyone to come in or out! Want to know what's inside? No, no! His Highness the Emperor Changsun told you not to tell anyone. I will never tell you that what's inside is a document!" Guard: "..." The author is very good at using dialogue to show the character's personality and give the story a strong visual sense. In this sentence, we can seem to see such a girl, with a serious expression and exaggerated tone, standing in front of the tent and pretending to explain her work to the guards. When Zhu Yunwen asked helplessly about her "fishing law enforcement", Fuyan just raised an eyebrow and instead questioned the professional ethics of the spy. I think her eyebrows should be a little cunning, but also serious, because she is doing things for Zhu Yunwen, the destined lover in her imagination. So this feeling becomes even more sad when all its true colors are revealed. After a stormy night, her new boudoir's tent was warm, just when she was marrying her husband, Fuyan finally knew that Zhu Yunwen, who had lived with her for seven years, was not her lover. It's not that she has never doubted it, it's just that she is afraid of this affection and doesn't want to guess anymore. Fuyan knew that Zhu Yunwen loved her, but she was not sure whether she loved him or not. The illusory "Zhu Zhirao" occupied too big a place in her heart. Fuyan herself had had a premonition. She hesitated several times when facing Zhu Yunwen's feelings, not to mention that she once asked "Yunwen, are you really Zhirao?" And "Are you lying to me?", Although she did not hear the answer in the end. I don't think she needs an answer. She is actually asking herself, over the years, which one has she regarded as more important, that snowy night in Canglang Mountain or the seven years in the Daming Palace? Zhu Yunwen didn't deliberately deceive Fuyan. Just because he frowned every time when Fuyan mentioned Zhirao, and because of his poor and helpless acting skills, he couldn't completely hide Fuyan. Of the two of them, one reluctantly disguised himself as a romantic and political rival, while the other had been watching his acting carefully and intently, deceiving himself and others sadly and sadly. Therefore, we cannot blindly accuse Zhu Yunwen of cheating, because in the end it was Fuyan's own decision. She didn't want to wait any longer and chose to believe in Zhu Yunwen. They all brought it to this point. To reach this point, no matter the reason, they are willing to do so at this moment. The old emperor once said, "Everything with appearances is false. If you see all appearances without appearances, you will see the Tathagata." I don't know much about Buddhism, so I dare not comment on this foreshadowing. The girl's words should be quoted from the "Diamond Sutra". The original text seems to be "All appearances are false. If you see all appearances that are not appearances, you will see the Tathagata." All living beings are nothing more than mirrors, flowers, water and moon, arising and passing away in an instant, and are illusory and unreal; what you see now, what you think is "real" will eventually perish. I think this sentence is inexplicably suitable for Fu Yan's situation, but I don't know what the old emperor wanted to convey to Zhu Yunwen. In contrast, whether it is Zhu Yunwen or Fu Yan, both of them are a little hesitant when dealing with their own feelings, which makes Zhu Di's character extraordinarily decisive. I would like to ask how much weight that snowy night in Canglang Mountain and the startling glimpse seven years ago hold in this man's heart? He is not a person who can devote his body and soul and give his feelings at all costs. From the beginning to the end, he is the aloof and powerful King of Yan. Of course, he is not a heartless person, he just buries his feelings too deeply and puts them too far back. This man is too calm, decisive and cold-blooded. His world is too big for him to let go. His heart is always bigger than Zhu Yunwen, so he can be the emperor. Therefore, he could treat Fu Yan who was unaware of it as a drama and attract Zhu Yunwen to fight with him in the palace; he would weigh the pros and cons more, deliberately anger Zhu Yunwen, and let the emperor see this scene and then let it go. Zhu Di might really like Fu Yan, but he didn't show it. Zhu Di is now obsessed with Fuyan, and I think the real affection and interest are mixed. It has to be said that Zhu Di is much sharper than Fu Yan, and much more decisive than Zhu Yunwen: just saying that he and Fu Yan only met a few times, and he captured the fact that she may be the woman he met in Canglang Mountain is enough to be impressive. Later, he did not hesitate to send his subordinates to search for all the information about Fuyan, and went to verify it in person. This do-it-yourself, resolute and resolute style of conduct also amazed readers. Although I haven't seen the development of the later chapters, I think that if Zhu Di really fell in love with Fu Yan, his feelings as the King of Yan and as a man must be different from others. His love will not be like Zhu Yunwen's slightly childish, thin and long-lasting love. He must love vigorously, letting his feelings burn others and himself. It's a pity that he didn't find out that Fu Yan was the woman he met, so we can't see such an emotional King Yan yet. On the surface, Zhu Di was not affected much by this emotional entanglement. It wasn't until Juan Fuyan and Zhu Yunwen got married in "Confusion" that Zhu Di showed his only gaffe since his appearance. However, even in this situation, he was still able to control himself, which only meant that he suppressed himself deeply enough. He allowed his emotions to grow and roar in his heart, but never showed his feelings to others easily. Zhu Di is a very decisive person (please forgive my lack of words). Unlike all the boys and girls who fall in love, he seems to be particularly clear about feelings. So he said, "Since she has made her choice," he would not pursue Fu Yan's identity anymore. When he learned that Fu Yan was married to Zhu Yunwen, Zhu Di gave up his efforts to continue to care for this woman. I think Zhu Di is not as worried about gains and losses as Zhu Yunwen is, because he has never received support. Although he had Canglangshan's desire to heal his wounds and the private seal as proof, he didn't know that Fuyan had always kept him in mind. Due to various combinations of circumstances, they had passed each other in a hurry seven years ago; but now, when he vaguely found out that Fu Yan was the woman he met back then, she was already married to someone else. Zhu Di has always appeared in a high profile in the emotional entanglement between the three of them. He is strong and restrained. He is very interested in participating in the disputes between the emperor and his nephew, but he looks coldly on his own memories. He sighed regretfully for missing Fuyan, but he didn't feel the pain because he hadn't had time to fall in love with her yet. I don't know when the romantic entanglement between these three people will be resolved, and it may not be clear until the end. I am very much looking forward to how the author will develop next. When the girl updates again, I will definitely come and leave a comment. In the flood of new articles in Jinjiang, it is not easy to find a good article. I hope you can persevere and time will bring everything to you. Writing is a process of continuous attempts, setbacks and gradual progress. Its benefits to a person are endless. I wish you will gain a large number of readers who will follow you sincerely. Tiny little tail~: The author has beautiful writing, but the punctuation is flawed. Although it will not particularly affect reading, it would be better to revise it a little when you have time. The above is just one family's opinion. ——Illegal gathering | Produced by Changpingpu BY Xiaoya

What should I do if I like Zhu Di but don't like the heroine?

Cheating just after getting married?!

Zhu Di, you are so careful, hurry up and identify Fu Yan!!! Are these two people related or not?

Throw flowers! I like Zhu Di, but Zhu Yunwen in this article is also outstanding! A little shaken, but Zhu Yunwen's deception of other people's feelings is really a death-defying rhythm! No zuo no die, you will definitely suffer in the end.