
The General
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To be honest, I actually disliked the male protagonist in this article.
The ending is hasty... Not very satisfying...
Happy Mid-Autumn Festival, Dayin (^_-) By the way, the number of words in the side stories for a family of three is not as high as that of Huang Sang←_← Brother Six is very good, you can also write ^_^
This article is a romance, and the author also worked very hard to write it. I really can't bear to find fault with the plot. But there is something I really can't figure out, so I'll mention it anyway. Growing up, I have seen so many blind women. The man is blind and has never seen any of them. Road blindness is different from color blindness. This is not a congenital problem and can be solved through patrol training. Unless one has memory problems, memorizing directions will not be a difficult task. The so-called sense of direction can be trained. Without him, it's just repeated memories many times. There are always accidents in the world. Maybe there are one or two men who don't remember their way, but it is unreasonable to place it on Fu Rong. If this problem doesn't affect the plot and is just a couple's fun, then that's it. It also happens to affect the plot. Fu Rong is a general, but he doesn't know the way, so it makes no sense logically that he can be a general. A blind general on the battlefield may have died countless times. I really don't understand how someone who doesn't even know the road can arrange a march and fight? I have never heard of a general who can win a battle without making good use of the terrain. If there is something wrong with your memory, it will be even less possible to become a general. This is a flaw. Problems like road blindness and face blindness, if placed on a high-ranking official, would be like being a color-blind driver. Doesn't it work at all? Of course, reading a story is just for fun, so don't get too hung up on the details. But the basic context must be reasonable. The plot must be logical. Sorry, I have a few comments. Sorry for any disrespect.
I still feel sorry for the Emperor QAQ. I still hope that the emperor will have a good outcome. I don't have the face to say I'm back. I always logged in automatically in Australia, and I forgot my account name two months after I returned home. Then... I disappeared. Until now, when I came back, the computer automatically entered and I logged into QAQ. Don't be angry with me QAAAAQ Don't not love me QAAAAQ I'm sorry QAAAAQ Silently catch up on various automatically subscribed books.
I... Feel a little sorry for the Emperor QAQ
So in the end, we didn't say what happened to Huang Sang.
Open a new article! Looking forward to it!
I don't really want to read it because I already know almost everything in the article.
To be honest, I really don't want Huang Sang's side story, but I'm a little curious about how he was willing to let Xiao Fenfen and Rong Rong go, so I'd better write a small side story to deal with it←_← By the way, why did that scholar have a portrait of Xiao Fan←_← I'm waiting to read the second half of the chapter. The family of three loves this extra chapter so much. It's so cute O(∩_∩)O