Water of a Lifetime

What a hasty ending, it ends for the sake of ending!

The story is very good, but the narration is too hasty. It seems that it is just to tell the story in a hurry, and the emotion is not enough. Come on~

But the name is good. The water of life is tears!

I am always hurt over and over again, but I feel that the injury is not serious, and the reasons for forgiveness are even more ridiculous! If a man asked you to change his mind for such a reason, would you? If it were me, even if I knew it was wrong to be with someone else, no matter how much I loved someone, I would not tolerate his repeated deceptions, even though they were well-intentioned!

The heroine is a bit pretentious, and that's why their relationship has to be tested again and again~~ It's boring

This is absolutely trivial. .

It's still far-fetched. I feel that this kind of relationship is not just about forgiveness, but it will build up tomorrow's happiness. It will still become hurt one day in the future.

The ending is still very good, although the process is a bit far-fetched, overall, it is still good.

I support the opinions of most readers~ The author does write well, but it is still just good~ I need to work harder~ It feels like she is a little girl switching between several men, which makes us dizzy, and the reasons are far-fetched~ The transition is a bit stiff~ But I think everyone (including myself) is saying this to improve writing skills for adults. I hope I am angry~ Come on~

The opening plot is very familiar, but the process of how the male protagonists and supporting actors fall in love with the female protagonist is not explained clearly. Love is a bit incomprehensible. But overall not bad.