Alluring the City

Score and scatter flowers!!!!!!!

The ending is too rushed, but the writing is good

Indeed, it was rushed. .

This is a good story, but the author is too fluid in some places, especially the ending, which should have been more perfect. It feels like the author ended it just for the sake of the ending. It's a sudden turn of events, but the previous one is really good. I'm looking forward to your new work. I hope the next one will be better.

The ending is a bit rushed.

Why is no one watching? Very beautiful

I like it very much, it looks good, haha

It's quite romantic, and it satisfies the vanity of a young woman who is loved by two outstanding men. The writing is very smooth, but the ending is a bit rushed, I like it.

Thanks! After I have been searching for so long, I saw your article, and I can only say thank you, because my writing skills are not good, and I am worried that the comments will affect the article, haha

I have read the ending elsewhere, and this article is quite interesting