The story of Yin Li, a prickly, stubborn girl who has lost her way, and Song Qingshu, an innocent young man and the pride of Wudang, as they travel the martial world.
This story focuses on how difficult it is to pair up two people for a happy ending, and how, because it was just too difficult, they got a tragic ending instead.
In short: In the martial world, life is as cheap as grass. Treasure every moment as you go.
※ This barely follows the original story.
※ I don't bash Wudang, Wuji, or Zhao Min. Although they only have cameo roles here, the author loves them dearly!
※ This story references the novel. The terms "doctor" and "mother" are used as they are in the original novel of The Heaven Sword and Dragon Saber.
The revisions are done. Time to mull things over and start a new story~ Thank you all for your continued support!
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Pull it down, just write the heroine to death like this, or such a stupid way to die, the author is a stepmother, please clear it up
How should I put it, the plot took a turn for the worse. I originally thought it was a cookie, (?_?), But the ending, how should I put it, I actually felt comfortable watching it.
I really hope they can be together in this life.
Because it is a mobile phone, I am not sure whether it can be segmented.
In the past two years, few authors have had the courage to write BE. After reading a lot of "bad" comments, I roughly understand this.
I think there is nothing unacceptable or understandable about this ending.
Song Qingshu is an eighteen-year-old boy, and he is only twenty-years-old at the end. Anyone who has watched Yitian knows that he is not a very smart person - later, his views have become distorted. Zhou Zhiruo is not a good person either. After all, he accidentally killed Zhu Er on the island and cleverly framed Zhao Min for this. It is normal to do such a thing under the coercion of extinction. After all, A Li in the article is a demon witch.
Frankly speaking, I have no interest in some novels stating that they should be BE but take the line of HE.
Compared with the ending, the extra story has quite a few flaws, but considering that it is set in the fictional world of martial arts, that's all. I might as well write in a side story that Song Qingshu's ideal was implemented in the early stage and failed in the later stage. I'm really full of malice, no good, no good.
Fan fiction is a matter of opinion, and there are a thousand Hamlets in the eyes of a thousand readers. Big cheers for the author!
Ah ah ah ah, why did Yin Li die in the ending? Why not let Yin Li and Song Qingshu be together?
That's it! . . . .
What is the purpose of writing a fanfic? In order to give the cannon fodder a good ending, I might as well not write this article. I feel uncomfortable after reading it. I still like cool stuff, and it's best if the fan fiction is sweet, otherwise it's really meaningless.
The sad part is the last sentence.
But it's okay to make the world a better place.
Is this what he is? …
The heroine dies, how can this be called fighting for life? How could the fight for life be lost?
The emotional line is the part that troubles me the most. Author, if you don't want Yin Li and Song Qingshu to be together, you don't have to write it, instead of making these two people so stupid that it's horrible to watch! As a person, you may want to show that Song Qingshu may be very resourceful in the end, but I didn't see it at all. I just think this person is very heartless! Although Yin Li died, Song Qingshu was held accountable, which seemed to be unjust. But I really don't think it's too stupid to care about Zhou Zhiruo's affairs. If the responsibility is to be determined, Yin Li will account for 40%. Song Qingshu 40%, very stupid! Zhou Zhiruo 20%, very cunning! But I admire women with high IQs.
Finally, I really want to write you a long review, but I just can't figure out how to write it. Whether your article is bad or not, it's okay. I have to say that it is okay, but the whole article is inexplicable and confusing. The character creation is quite interesting at the beginning, but in the end it is inexplicable. The storyline was okay at the beginning, but ended up being anticlimactic at the end. I feel that the author should make an outline before writing, and the editor should also review it carefully. Is this really a good idea to make her start from the beginning to the end?
Pull it down, just write the heroine to death like this, or such a stupid way to die, the author is a stepmother, please clear it up
How should I put it, the plot took a turn for the worse. I originally thought it was a cookie, (?_?), But the ending, how should I put it, I actually felt comfortable watching it.
I really hope they can be together in this life.
Because it is a mobile phone, I am not sure whether it can be segmented. In the past two years, few authors have had the courage to write BE. After reading a lot of "bad" comments, I roughly understand this. I think there is nothing unacceptable or understandable about this ending. Song Qingshu is an eighteen-year-old boy, and he is only twenty-years-old at the end. Anyone who has watched Yitian knows that he is not a very smart person - later, his views have become distorted. Zhou Zhiruo is not a good person either. After all, he accidentally killed Zhu Er on the island and cleverly framed Zhao Min for this. It is normal to do such a thing under the coercion of extinction. After all, A Li in the article is a demon witch. Frankly speaking, I have no interest in some novels stating that they should be BE but take the line of HE. Compared with the ending, the extra story has quite a few flaws, but considering that it is set in the fictional world of martial arts, that's all. I might as well write in a side story that Song Qingshu's ideal was implemented in the early stage and failed in the later stage. I'm really full of malice, no good, no good. Fan fiction is a matter of opinion, and there are a thousand Hamlets in the eyes of a thousand readers. Big cheers for the author!
Ah ah ah ah, why did Yin Li die in the ending? Why not let Yin Li and Song Qingshu be together?
That's it! . . . .
What is the purpose of writing a fanfic? In order to give the cannon fodder a good ending, I might as well not write this article. I feel uncomfortable after reading it. I still like cool stuff, and it's best if the fan fiction is sweet, otherwise it's really meaningless.
The sad part is the last sentence. But it's okay to make the world a better place.
Is this what he is? …
The heroine dies, how can this be called fighting for life? How could the fight for life be lost? The emotional line is the part that troubles me the most. Author, if you don't want Yin Li and Song Qingshu to be together, you don't have to write it, instead of making these two people so stupid that it's horrible to watch! As a person, you may want to show that Song Qingshu may be very resourceful in the end, but I didn't see it at all. I just think this person is very heartless! Although Yin Li died, Song Qingshu was held accountable, which seemed to be unjust. But I really don't think it's too stupid to care about Zhou Zhiruo's affairs. If the responsibility is to be determined, Yin Li will account for 40%. Song Qingshu 40%, very stupid! Zhou Zhiruo 20%, very cunning! But I admire women with high IQs. Finally, I really want to write you a long review, but I just can't figure out how to write it. Whether your article is bad or not, it's okay. I have to say that it is okay, but the whole article is inexplicable and confusing. The character creation is quite interesting at the beginning, but in the end it is inexplicable. The storyline was okay at the beginning, but ended up being anticlimactic at the end. I feel that the author should make an outline before writing, and the editor should also review it carefully. Is this really a good idea to make her start from the beginning to the end?