Welcome, everyone, to this silly author's new novel: "The Awakening of an Interstellar Dodder Vine"
A little corporate drone transmigrates into the wife of Major General Lailis, though the original owner's marriage was secured through scheming.
The original owner died, and Jin Lulu became the one left holding the bag.
She had two sons without the pain of childbirth, a husband she didn't have to keep company, more money than she could spend, and a grand manor. No more working herself to death around the clock. She could lie flat, starting today.
Unfortunately, this easy life lasted only five years before her husband announced that he wanted a divorce!
She smoked a cigarette and lay awake all night, then finally signed the agreement, dejectedly accepting that her life had failed. She agreed to a series of terms: no appearing in the media, giving up custody of the children, never remarrying… Ten billion bought out the end of her five-year dream of marrying into a wealthy family.
All she could take with her was a pot of newly sprouted purifying soil.
After leaving the wealthy family, Jin Lulu just wanted a quiet life. But the Jin family, accustomed to leeching off her, refused to let go. They arranged a blind date with a rich businessman. The divorce agreement didn't say she couldn't date, and it wouldn't stop her from having children with another man! After all, Jin Lulu had a fertile womb. In an era with an extraordinarily low birth rate, that was her most praiseworthy quality.
Pressure from her so-called family, a storm of public opinion, and other nobles fanning the flames just to enjoy the spectacle... It all left Jin Lulu exhausted.
To find some peace, Jin Lulu spent a fortune, 580 million, on an unpurified little planet, then another 200 million on a shielding system. The planet disappeared into the vast universe. Clutching her nearly empty wallet, Jin Lulu laughed wildly through her tears: I've disconnected from the net! Let's see who can find me now! Less than two months later, Jin Lulu held her growing belly and a little Gun Gun in her arms, at a loss for tears. Life had no limit to its melodrama. Who the hell could have guessed she would get pregnant too?!
Now that she was broke all over again, what could she use to raise her children and support her family?
Just when she was so worried she could spit blood, the sprouting seeds in that pot became a turning point in Jin Lulu's life. Cucumbers, tomatoes, eggplants, green peppers... all kinds of vegetables grew from the ground. Fortunately, natural food was valuable in the interstellar era. Jin Lulu put the surplus vegetables to use by selling what she couldn't eat, and to her surprise, she made a fortune.
The interstellar people's research had taken a wrong turn. They had focused on improving soil and increasing plant survival rates, but by a twist of fate, Jin Lulu discovered a way to alter the genes of seeds.
Hundreds and thousands of years later, legends about Jin Lulu were passed down. People were eager to dig into and discuss her extraordinary life. What they talked about most wasn't her tumultuous, twist-filled love life, nor her several outstanding children, but her contributions to the people of the interstellar age.
She completely transformed interstellar agriculture, ending hunger in the Federation. Abundant food resources greatly reduced the Federation's urgency to compete for resources with other life forms in the universe, and the intensity of warfare fell by a clear 30%. Later, thanks to food exports, the Federation government signed peaceful and friendly trade agreements with extraterrestrial life. The Federation and its people then enjoyed five hundred years of rapid development.
Even more amazingly, once natural food became available to commoners, the interstellar population began to grow explosively.
A thousand years later, a dignified white jade statue of a smiling woman stood before the government offices of XB2528 Star City. Countless people came every year to pay their respects and offer her a dodder vine. Legend had it that this was Ms. Jin Lulu's favorite flower. (Jin Lulu reaches out dramatically: No, that's not it!)
Novel blurb:
In 1990, Jian Yi was still wandering the streets of London, and her greatest wish was to have enough to eat.
When they first met, they were both dressed in shabby, ill-fitting clothes and looked like a pair of poor nobodies. But Harry, I thought you and I were both from the "poor country." Why did you defect?!
Harry, with his survival instincts in overdrive: Uh... Don't pinch me. I'm yours too, so what's mine is yours, right? I'll take care of you!
Jian Yi (squinting): Who needs you to take care of me? I'll make it on my own. I don't rely on men!
Even if I'm penniless, I'll show you foreigners what I'm made of. Farming is a natural talent of us Chinese! Hardworking people can stay fed anywhere.
Theme: When your heart is at ease, all things are well
Before the fourth grade, I liked it very much, whether it was emotion or plot, but after the Christmas party in the fourth grade, these made me feel very uncomfortable. The heroine was very fascinated by the writing. The heroine was written so well before, but from the party, I can't see the previous heroine, these are nothing. In the first episode, the witch uses Jane's body to fight Harry. This is not a person at all. Where to put Jane, it is really high and low. In addition, some emotional lines are really unnecessary.
It's a bit disgusting. What's the difference between Harry and cheating? Although the body belongs to the heroine, the soul applauding Harry does not. All I can say is that the heroine is really generous.
I can only say that this plot of demons is a big failure, it is really disgusting. Taking over the heroine's body is enough, but also using the heroine's body to do it with Harry... The heroine doesn't know it yet, it is really a huge thunder, Harry quietly shattered, I would rather watch Mary Suwen than this, woo woo.
Ah,,, there are really too many wrong plots, many elements are confused, and the original settings have also been changed.
The first is that Hogwarts has bursaries. Of course, the author explains that Professor McGonagall is willing to help herself. As a private design, I think this is okay.
The second is that during the summer vacation, that is, at the end of each school year, students cannot stay in school, even if they are orphans. Generally, in this case, they can work and board in the Leaky Cauldron, etc.
Third, the Room of Requirements does not appear on the third floor or anywhere. It must be in front of the statue on the seventh floor, walk three times while silently reciting the request in your heart, and then it will appear.
Fourth, wolfsbane potion cannot turn a werewolf back into an ordinary person. It can only make a werewolf lose its powerful destructive power. How can it turn a werewolf back into an ordinary person when it is called wolfsbane potion? It is a potion for werewolves. Remus needs wolfsbane potion because he needs to keep himself sane.
Fifth, I don't know whether the author wanted to omit or forget some places. Even if he wrote about the previous process, the results were gone, or even mentioned.
For example, after they bankrupted Voldemort and Quirrell's tricks in the first grade, Dumbledore gave them extra points.
The second-year basilisk, emmmm, is actually unlikely to fall apart and die based on the heroine's personal strength, but if it must be written like this, okay,
Then there are unicorns. I remember that unicorns don't have wings, so they can't fly. I think some content can't be written randomly. These all have original settings. This directly changes a species. And unicorns generally don't like boys, so it's not right to take the initiative to touch Harry's neck.
Then in the third grade, there is a big bug. Dementors cannot be killed. Even if they can be killed, they are not protected by the God of Call. The Patronus can only drive away the Dementors, but cannot kill them. This bug is really big. I wonder if the author only watched the movie part. When he saw the Patronus in the movie, he came out, glowed, and then all the Dementors disappeared, so he thought they were killed. No. Yes, Dementors cannot be killed, and Patronuses can only drive them away. They can be regarded as a collection of negative emotions. How can negative emotions kill? So I suspect that the author may have written it without checking the relevant content at all. I think it is okay to have some private settings, but these have obviously already been set. Writing what you think directly will mislead many people who do not understand the setting.
Then there is, there is another bug. I don't know if the author wants to write about the process of the heroine and Luna becoming friends, but the prophecy class for the heroine and Harry is only available in the third grade, and Luna is one year younger than Harry and the others. Different grades do not have classes in the same classroom. How could the heroine sit with Luna in the prophecy classroom?
Another thing I think many people have said is that it is impossible for the heroine to meet Harry for the first time in Diagon Alley. This is correct because the letter will not be received until the heroine's eleventh birthday, and the heroine's birthday is staggered with Harry's. Harry only got the letter and went to Diagon Alley on his birthday. That day was July 31st. Before that, he would not appear in front of the heroine in advance. Even if it was because he wanted to write that they met outside school in advance, objective factors cannot be ignored.
Also, when it comes to destroying the Horcrux that destroyed the Resurrection Stone, it was written as the Resurrection Stone. When it falls, it is written as Slytherin's pendant. Is it true that no one has seen such a big bug? I looked at the comment area and no one has noticed the same thing.
The sixth thing is that the Quidditch World Cup four years ago was not held after the school started, but was held during the summer vacation. I think it seems to be written that they started school and then submitted an application to leave school to watch the game? This is not very realistic, and it is not a competition that is held after school starts. He has a fixed time. Moreover, the Death Eaters were paraded on the street while resting at the venue that night after the game, not the evening before the game the next day. But if this was a private design, it would not make sense that it was a private design, because the author wrote the words in the original book, "Not Irish." Why is this sentence there? Because the result of the game was that Krum of Bulgaria caught the Golden Snitch and ended the game. Game, but it was the Irish team that won, but because Krum ended the game for his teammates, the Bulgarian team shouted loudly. Although Ireland won the game, it was a bit embarrassing, so they were unhappy, so when there was chaos at first, people thought it was the Irish who were making trouble, but then they found out that it was the Death Eaters, that's why they said this.
Finally, there is the OOC about Cedric. Cedric is not so utilitarian. In the original plot, he was the one who gave up voluntarily. It was Harry who persuaded them to get the trophy together. Moreover, Harry can actually recite a spell and prevent Cedric's death even if the trophy flies unexpectedly. Although I think the author said it is for the plot promotion, but this, is a bit too instrumental, promoting the plot for the sake of promoting the plot. (This may be a private setting that I am personally dissatisfied with.)
I know that the author is generating electricity for love, and they are all free chapters. I have read so many that I probably shouldn't say anything, but if you think of the article as a house, then the most important thing for a house must be the foundation, and the setting of the article is the foundation of the house. If the setting is confusing, it will cause The whole article is about the instability of this house. Many settings are not arbitrary. They are interconnected. If the original setting is changed, it will be rectified, but if it cannot be rectified, it is equivalent to the connection node being broken, and many places will read very wrong.
(Phew, the above is a summary of what I have read so many chapters. In fact, I ignored some of the settings that were changed at first, because I knew it was to serve the plot. I actually quite like this kind of strongest heroine. But as I read more and more, including Cedric's personal OOC, I felt that not only was the foundation of this house unstable, but it also didn't even feel like a place to live. Good, there are too many wrong things that I can't ignore, which affects my reading experience, so I wrote this long review and said goodbye first. I hope everyone still has a good reading experience, and I also hope it can help friends who have not understood the original work to see the original setting from the long review. Because I love this magical world very much, I may be a little fussy about these details.
I would like to express my apologies to the author. In some places, my words are relatively straightforward and I am not being specific. I also want to say thank you to the author. Thank you for your enthusiasm for generating love. It is very enjoyable to read most of the previous paragraphs and ignore some minor bugs. )
After giving in, the whole character collapsed.
From the moment the protagonist started falling in love with Harry, the protagonist collapsed. [He was still working hard as a worker before and now? ? ? ]
Then he was inexplicably captured by Lao Fu, and then he was marked by the Black Devil and now he is married to Crouch? ?
I'd really like to thank you
Although, what did the heroine do to win Voldemort's trust? No matter whether he deceives the Ministry of Magic or fishes out Dumbledore, aren't he still working against Voldemort? (After all, the current Ministry of Magic is very easy for Voldemort to control. When the leadership team changes at this time, don't you know whose side you are on at a glance?) After watching it for a long time, I still don't feel that there is anything that the heroine has done that can be praised by Voldemort? If the heroine is referring to the Ministry of Magic driving Dumbledore away, wouldn't the latest news be that Dumbledore cleared his name and then summoned the heroine? In addition, the heroine escaped with Harry last time, but this time she came back and declared her loyalty to Voldemort like nothing happened. Voldemort actually believed that... Even if Voldemort's brain was split, wouldn't he be treated like a fool?
Wuhu! What a happy family, but a bit anxious (Snape's kind eyes JPG)
It's great. I'm so happy that little Mattie was born under the expectations of her parents and not at the Death Eater base.
Ah,,, there are really too many wrong plots, many elements are confused, and the original settings have also been changed.
The first is that Hogwarts has bursaries. Of course, the author explains that Professor McGonagall is willing to help herself. As a private design, I think this is okay.
The second is that during the summer vacation, that is, at the end of each school year, students cannot stay in school, even if they are orphans. Generally, in this case, they can work and board in the Leaky Cauldron, etc.
Third, the Room of Requirements does not appear on the third floor or anywhere. It must be in front of the statue on the seventh floor, walk three times while silently reciting the request in your heart, and then it will appear.
Fourth, wolfsbane potion cannot turn a werewolf back into an ordinary person. It can only make a werewolf lose its powerful destructive power. How can it turn a werewolf back into an ordinary person when it is called wolfsbane potion? It is a potion for werewolves. Remus needs wolfsbane potion because he needs to keep himself sane.
Fifth, I don't know whether the author wanted to omit or forget some places. Even if he wrote about the previous process, the results were gone, or even mentioned.
For example, after they bankrupted Voldemort and Quirrell's tricks in the first grade, Dumbledore gave them extra points.
The second-year basilisk, emmmm, is actually unlikely to fall apart and die based on the heroine's personal strength, but if it must be written like this, okay,
Then there are unicorns. I remember that unicorns don't have wings, so they can't fly. I think some content can't be written randomly. These all have original settings. This directly changes a species. And unicorns generally don't like boys, so it's not right to take the initiative to touch Harry's neck.
Then in the third grade, there is a big bug. Dementors cannot be killed. Even if they can be killed, they are not protected by the God of Call. The Patronus can only drive away the Dementors, but cannot kill them. This bug is really big. I wonder if the author only watched the movie part. When he saw the Patronus in the movie, he came out, glowed, and then all the Dementors disappeared, so he thought they were killed. No. Yes, Dementors cannot be killed, and Patronuses can only drive them away. They can be regarded as a collection of negative emotions. How can negative emotions kill? So I suspect that the author may have written it without checking the relevant content at all. I think it is okay to have some private settings, but these have obviously already been set. Writing what you think directly will mislead many people who do not understand the setting.
Then there is, there is another bug. I don't know if the author wants to write about the process of the heroine and Luna becoming friends, but the prophecy class for the heroine and Harry is only available in the third grade, and Luna is one year younger than Harry and the others. Different grades do not have classes in the same classroom. How could the heroine sit with Luna in the prophecy classroom?
Another thing I think many people have said is that it is impossible for the heroine to meet Harry for the first time in Diagon Alley. This is correct because the letter will not be received until the heroine's eleventh birthday, and the heroine's birthday is staggered with Harry's. Harry only got the letter and went to Diagon Alley on his birthday. That day was July 31st. Before that, he would not appear in front of the heroine in advance. Even if it was because he wanted to write that they met outside school in advance, objective factors cannot be ignored.
Also, when it comes to destroying the Horcrux that destroyed the Resurrection Stone, it was written as the Resurrection Stone. When it falls, it is written as Slytherin's pendant. Is it true that no one has seen such a big bug? I looked at the comment area and no one has noticed the same thing.
The sixth thing is that the Quidditch World Cup four years ago was not held after the school started, but was held during the summer vacation. I think it seems to be written that they started school and then submitted an application to leave school to watch the game? This is not very realistic, and it is not a competition that is held after school starts. He has a fixed time. Moreover, the Death Eaters were paraded on the street while resting at the venue that night after the game, not the evening before the game the next day. But if this was a private design, it would not make sense that it was a private design, because the author wrote the words in the original book, "Not Irish." Why is this sentence there? Because the result of the game was that Krum of Bulgaria caught the Golden Snitch and ended the game. Game, but it was the Irish team that won, but because Krum ended the game for his teammates, the Bulgarian team shouted loudly. Although Ireland won the game, it was a bit embarrassing, so they were unhappy, so when there was chaos at first, people thought it was the Irish who were making trouble, but then they found out that it was the Death Eaters, that's why they said this.
Finally, there is the OOC about Cedric. Cedric is not so utilitarian. In the original plot, he was the one who gave up voluntarily. It was Harry who persuaded them to get the trophy together. Moreover, Harry can actually recite a spell and prevent Cedric's death even if the trophy flies unexpectedly. Although I think the author said it is for the plot promotion, but this, is a bit too instrumental, promoting the plot for the sake of promoting the plot. (This may be a private setting that I am personally dissatisfied with.)
I know that the author is generating electricity for love, and they are all free chapters. I have read so many that I probably shouldn't say anything, but if you think of the article as a house, then the most important thing for a house must be the foundation, and the setting of the article is the foundation of the house. If the setting is confusing, it will cause The whole article is about the instability of this house. Many settings are not arbitrary. They are interconnected. If the original setting is changed, it will be rectified, but if it cannot be rectified, it is equivalent to the connection node being broken, and many places will read very wrong.
(Phew, the above is a summary of what I have read so many chapters. In fact, I ignored some of the settings that were changed at first, because I knew it was to serve the plot. I actually quite like this kind of strongest heroine. But as I read more and more, including Cedric's personal OOC, I felt that not only was the foundation of this house unstable, but it also didn't even feel like a place to live. Good, there are too many wrong things that I can't ignore, which affects my reading experience, so I wrote this long review and said goodbye first. I hope everyone still has a good reading experience, and I also hope it can help friends who have not understood the original work to see the original setting from the long review. Because I love this magical world very much, I may be a little fussy about these details.
I would like to express my apologies to the author. In some places, my words are relatively straightforward and I am not being specific. I also want to say thank you to the author. Thank you for your enthusiasm for generating love. It is very enjoyable to read most of the previous paragraphs and ignore some minor bugs. )
? Is this relationship too far ahead of its time...
Before the fourth grade, I liked it very much, whether it was emotion or plot, but after the Christmas party in the fourth grade, these made me feel very uncomfortable. The heroine was very fascinated by the writing. The heroine was written so well before, but from the party, I can't see the previous heroine, these are nothing. In the first episode, the witch uses Jane's body to fight Harry. This is not a person at all. Where to put Jane, it is really high and low. In addition, some emotional lines are really unnecessary.
It's a bit disgusting. What's the difference between Harry and cheating? Although the body belongs to the heroine, the soul applauding Harry does not. All I can say is that the heroine is really generous.
I can only say that this plot of demons is a big failure, it is really disgusting. Taking over the heroine's body is enough, but also using the heroine's body to do it with Harry... The heroine doesn't know it yet, it is really a huge thunder, Harry quietly shattered, I would rather watch Mary Suwen than this, woo woo.
Ah,,, there are really too many wrong plots, many elements are confused, and the original settings have also been changed. The first is that Hogwarts has bursaries. Of course, the author explains that Professor McGonagall is willing to help herself. As a private design, I think this is okay. The second is that during the summer vacation, that is, at the end of each school year, students cannot stay in school, even if they are orphans. Generally, in this case, they can work and board in the Leaky Cauldron, etc. Third, the Room of Requirements does not appear on the third floor or anywhere. It must be in front of the statue on the seventh floor, walk three times while silently reciting the request in your heart, and then it will appear. Fourth, wolfsbane potion cannot turn a werewolf back into an ordinary person. It can only make a werewolf lose its powerful destructive power. How can it turn a werewolf back into an ordinary person when it is called wolfsbane potion? It is a potion for werewolves. Remus needs wolfsbane potion because he needs to keep himself sane. Fifth, I don't know whether the author wanted to omit or forget some places. Even if he wrote about the previous process, the results were gone, or even mentioned. For example, after they bankrupted Voldemort and Quirrell's tricks in the first grade, Dumbledore gave them extra points. The second-year basilisk, emmmm, is actually unlikely to fall apart and die based on the heroine's personal strength, but if it must be written like this, okay, Then there are unicorns. I remember that unicorns don't have wings, so they can't fly. I think some content can't be written randomly. These all have original settings. This directly changes a species. And unicorns generally don't like boys, so it's not right to take the initiative to touch Harry's neck. Then in the third grade, there is a big bug. Dementors cannot be killed. Even if they can be killed, they are not protected by the God of Call. The Patronus can only drive away the Dementors, but cannot kill them. This bug is really big. I wonder if the author only watched the movie part. When he saw the Patronus in the movie, he came out, glowed, and then all the Dementors disappeared, so he thought they were killed. No. Yes, Dementors cannot be killed, and Patronuses can only drive them away. They can be regarded as a collection of negative emotions. How can negative emotions kill? So I suspect that the author may have written it without checking the relevant content at all. I think it is okay to have some private settings, but these have obviously already been set. Writing what you think directly will mislead many people who do not understand the setting. Then there is, there is another bug. I don't know if the author wants to write about the process of the heroine and Luna becoming friends, but the prophecy class for the heroine and Harry is only available in the third grade, and Luna is one year younger than Harry and the others. Different grades do not have classes in the same classroom. How could the heroine sit with Luna in the prophecy classroom? Another thing I think many people have said is that it is impossible for the heroine to meet Harry for the first time in Diagon Alley. This is correct because the letter will not be received until the heroine's eleventh birthday, and the heroine's birthday is staggered with Harry's. Harry only got the letter and went to Diagon Alley on his birthday. That day was July 31st. Before that, he would not appear in front of the heroine in advance. Even if it was because he wanted to write that they met outside school in advance, objective factors cannot be ignored. Also, when it comes to destroying the Horcrux that destroyed the Resurrection Stone, it was written as the Resurrection Stone. When it falls, it is written as Slytherin's pendant. Is it true that no one has seen such a big bug? I looked at the comment area and no one has noticed the same thing. The sixth thing is that the Quidditch World Cup four years ago was not held after the school started, but was held during the summer vacation. I think it seems to be written that they started school and then submitted an application to leave school to watch the game? This is not very realistic, and it is not a competition that is held after school starts. He has a fixed time. Moreover, the Death Eaters were paraded on the street while resting at the venue that night after the game, not the evening before the game the next day. But if this was a private design, it would not make sense that it was a private design, because the author wrote the words in the original book, "Not Irish." Why is this sentence there? Because the result of the game was that Krum of Bulgaria caught the Golden Snitch and ended the game. Game, but it was the Irish team that won, but because Krum ended the game for his teammates, the Bulgarian team shouted loudly. Although Ireland won the game, it was a bit embarrassing, so they were unhappy, so when there was chaos at first, people thought it was the Irish who were making trouble, but then they found out that it was the Death Eaters, that's why they said this. Finally, there is the OOC about Cedric. Cedric is not so utilitarian. In the original plot, he was the one who gave up voluntarily. It was Harry who persuaded them to get the trophy together. Moreover, Harry can actually recite a spell and prevent Cedric's death even if the trophy flies unexpectedly. Although I think the author said it is for the plot promotion, but this, is a bit too instrumental, promoting the plot for the sake of promoting the plot. (This may be a private setting that I am personally dissatisfied with.) I know that the author is generating electricity for love, and they are all free chapters. I have read so many that I probably shouldn't say anything, but if you think of the article as a house, then the most important thing for a house must be the foundation, and the setting of the article is the foundation of the house. If the setting is confusing, it will cause The whole article is about the instability of this house. Many settings are not arbitrary. They are interconnected. If the original setting is changed, it will be rectified, but if it cannot be rectified, it is equivalent to the connection node being broken, and many places will read very wrong. (Phew, the above is a summary of what I have read so many chapters. In fact, I ignored some of the settings that were changed at first, because I knew it was to serve the plot. I actually quite like this kind of strongest heroine. But as I read more and more, including Cedric's personal OOC, I felt that not only was the foundation of this house unstable, but it also didn't even feel like a place to live. Good, there are too many wrong things that I can't ignore, which affects my reading experience, so I wrote this long review and said goodbye first. I hope everyone still has a good reading experience, and I also hope it can help friends who have not understood the original work to see the original setting from the long review. Because I love this magical world very much, I may be a little fussy about these details. I would like to express my apologies to the author. In some places, my words are relatively straightforward and I am not being specific. I also want to say thank you to the author. Thank you for your enthusiasm for generating love. It is very enjoyable to read most of the previous paragraphs and ignore some minor bugs. )
After giving in, the whole character collapsed. From the moment the protagonist started falling in love with Harry, the protagonist collapsed. [He was still working hard as a worker before and now? ? ? ] Then he was inexplicably captured by Lao Fu, and then he was marked by the Black Devil and now he is married to Crouch? ? I'd really like to thank you
Although, what did the heroine do to win Voldemort's trust? No matter whether he deceives the Ministry of Magic or fishes out Dumbledore, aren't he still working against Voldemort? (After all, the current Ministry of Magic is very easy for Voldemort to control. When the leadership team changes at this time, don't you know whose side you are on at a glance?) After watching it for a long time, I still don't feel that there is anything that the heroine has done that can be praised by Voldemort? If the heroine is referring to the Ministry of Magic driving Dumbledore away, wouldn't the latest news be that Dumbledore cleared his name and then summoned the heroine? In addition, the heroine escaped with Harry last time, but this time she came back and declared her loyalty to Voldemort like nothing happened. Voldemort actually believed that... Even if Voldemort's brain was split, wouldn't he be treated like a fool?
Wuhu! What a happy family, but a bit anxious (Snape's kind eyes JPG)
It's great. I'm so happy that little Mattie was born under the expectations of her parents and not at the Death Eater base.
Ah,,, there are really too many wrong plots, many elements are confused, and the original settings have also been changed. The first is that Hogwarts has bursaries. Of course, the author explains that Professor McGonagall is willing to help herself. As a private design, I think this is okay. The second is that during the summer vacation, that is, at the end of each school year, students cannot stay in school, even if they are orphans. Generally, in this case, they can work and board in the Leaky Cauldron, etc. Third, the Room of Requirements does not appear on the third floor or anywhere. It must be in front of the statue on the seventh floor, walk three times while silently reciting the request in your heart, and then it will appear. Fourth, wolfsbane potion cannot turn a werewolf back into an ordinary person. It can only make a werewolf lose its powerful destructive power. How can it turn a werewolf back into an ordinary person when it is called wolfsbane potion? It is a potion for werewolves. Remus needs wolfsbane potion because he needs to keep himself sane. Fifth, I don't know whether the author wanted to omit or forget some places. Even if he wrote about the previous process, the results were gone, or even mentioned. For example, after they bankrupted Voldemort and Quirrell's tricks in the first grade, Dumbledore gave them extra points. The second-year basilisk, emmmm, is actually unlikely to fall apart and die based on the heroine's personal strength, but if it must be written like this, okay, Then there are unicorns. I remember that unicorns don't have wings, so they can't fly. I think some content can't be written randomly. These all have original settings. This directly changes a species. And unicorns generally don't like boys, so it's not right to take the initiative to touch Harry's neck. Then in the third grade, there is a big bug. Dementors cannot be killed. Even if they can be killed, they are not protected by the God of Call. The Patronus can only drive away the Dementors, but cannot kill them. This bug is really big. I wonder if the author only watched the movie part. When he saw the Patronus in the movie, he came out, glowed, and then all the Dementors disappeared, so he thought they were killed. No. Yes, Dementors cannot be killed, and Patronuses can only drive them away. They can be regarded as a collection of negative emotions. How can negative emotions kill? So I suspect that the author may have written it without checking the relevant content at all. I think it is okay to have some private settings, but these have obviously already been set. Writing what you think directly will mislead many people who do not understand the setting. Then there is, there is another bug. I don't know if the author wants to write about the process of the heroine and Luna becoming friends, but the prophecy class for the heroine and Harry is only available in the third grade, and Luna is one year younger than Harry and the others. Different grades do not have classes in the same classroom. How could the heroine sit with Luna in the prophecy classroom? Another thing I think many people have said is that it is impossible for the heroine to meet Harry for the first time in Diagon Alley. This is correct because the letter will not be received until the heroine's eleventh birthday, and the heroine's birthday is staggered with Harry's. Harry only got the letter and went to Diagon Alley on his birthday. That day was July 31st. Before that, he would not appear in front of the heroine in advance. Even if it was because he wanted to write that they met outside school in advance, objective factors cannot be ignored. Also, when it comes to destroying the Horcrux that destroyed the Resurrection Stone, it was written as the Resurrection Stone. When it falls, it is written as Slytherin's pendant. Is it true that no one has seen such a big bug? I looked at the comment area and no one has noticed the same thing. The sixth thing is that the Quidditch World Cup four years ago was not held after the school started, but was held during the summer vacation. I think it seems to be written that they started school and then submitted an application to leave school to watch the game? This is not very realistic, and it is not a competition that is held after school starts. He has a fixed time. Moreover, the Death Eaters were paraded on the street while resting at the venue that night after the game, not the evening before the game the next day. But if this was a private design, it would not make sense that it was a private design, because the author wrote the words in the original book, "Not Irish." Why is this sentence there? Because the result of the game was that Krum of Bulgaria caught the Golden Snitch and ended the game. Game, but it was the Irish team that won, but because Krum ended the game for his teammates, the Bulgarian team shouted loudly. Although Ireland won the game, it was a bit embarrassing, so they were unhappy, so when there was chaos at first, people thought it was the Irish who were making trouble, but then they found out that it was the Death Eaters, that's why they said this. Finally, there is the OOC about Cedric. Cedric is not so utilitarian. In the original plot, he was the one who gave up voluntarily. It was Harry who persuaded them to get the trophy together. Moreover, Harry can actually recite a spell and prevent Cedric's death even if the trophy flies unexpectedly. Although I think the author said it is for the plot promotion, but this, is a bit too instrumental, promoting the plot for the sake of promoting the plot. (This may be a private setting that I am personally dissatisfied with.) I know that the author is generating electricity for love, and they are all free chapters. I have read so many that I probably shouldn't say anything, but if you think of the article as a house, then the most important thing for a house must be the foundation, and the setting of the article is the foundation of the house. If the setting is confusing, it will cause The whole article is about the instability of this house. Many settings are not arbitrary. They are interconnected. If the original setting is changed, it will be rectified, but if it cannot be rectified, it is equivalent to the connection node being broken, and many places will read very wrong. (Phew, the above is a summary of what I have read so many chapters. In fact, I ignored some of the settings that were changed at first, because I knew it was to serve the plot. I actually quite like this kind of strongest heroine. But as I read more and more, including Cedric's personal OOC, I felt that not only was the foundation of this house unstable, but it also didn't even feel like a place to live. Good, there are too many wrong things that I can't ignore, which affects my reading experience, so I wrote this long review and said goodbye first. I hope everyone still has a good reading experience, and I also hope it can help friends who have not understood the original work to see the original setting from the long review. Because I love this magical world very much, I may be a little fussy about these details. I would like to express my apologies to the author. In some places, my words are relatively straightforward and I am not being specific. I also want to say thank you to the author. Thank you for your enthusiasm for generating love. It is very enjoyable to read most of the previous paragraphs and ignore some minor bugs. )
? Is this relationship too far ahead of its time...