Unable to Love You

Didn't I say earlier that the heroine went to the wedding venue? Whose wedding venue is it? There are many places that have not been explained clearly. . .

I would like to ask the author, can I repost this article to "Shivering is annoying"? Author rights reserved.

Dear, Sorry, this comment appears here late! I thought the store would post the reviews, but it turns out that the reviewer needs to come and post them. Sorry~~ Review of "I Can't Love You" by Guns N' Roses ——by Moran Qiancheng, domineering and chaotic leakage First, I couldn't wait to shake the mouse and click directly into the story. Wenwen tells the story of a man and woman who had only met a few times, got married because of a contract, had very little intersection in their lives for two years, and fell in love with each other again after the divorce. It took me three hours to read "Impossible to Love You" written by the author Jun Gun Hua Feng in one breath until the tenth chapter. By rough calculation, I read about 30,000 words. The reading process has always been very smooth. The author's basic writing skills are good, there are no obvious typos, the sentences are smooth and concise, the dialogue between the characters is not stiff, and the story is relatively clear. The male protagonist is cold and domineering, while the female protagonist is stubborn and proud. The character setting is a standard novel, which is quite likable. Click to return to the homepage of this article. The cover looks high-end, and although the copywriting is a bit too literary, it can quickly catch the attention of readers who like "contract marriage". Further down, when I saw the author's chapter points, collections, abandonment rates and other data, I couldn't help but let out a surprised sigh... This article may not be a big hit, but the results should be more than that, right? I think the purpose of the author's submission is also to find out the reasons. Below are some of my personal opinions for the author's reference. Generally speaking, the contract marriage meme is a relatively old meme, and many websites such as Mouxiu and Mouxiang have popularized this theme. But Cinderella stories have never lacked readership. Just look at the recent popular Korean drama "The Heirs". After so many years, "Meteor Garden" is still emerging one after another, and the audience (readers) are still enjoying it. Probably every woman (girl) has such a dream in her heart. Therefore, I think that although the memes are relatively old, the key is to put new wine in old bottles and old trees to bloom new flowers. If new ideas are written based on the original ones, I believe many readers will still be willing to read them. From the 30,000 words I have read, I can feel that the author deliberately designed the plot, but I always feel that the novelty is not enough to stand out among many similar novels and retain readers. Another feeling is that the author Jun's writing style is very concise, but it is more than concise, but I always feel that something is missing. In fact, there are many successful authors who follow the concise style, such as Yi Shu, Zhang Xiaoxian and other famous writers. Their articles are often very well structured and combine conciseness and lyricism well, but it is not easy to achieve this. Let's take a look at the beginning of this article: ——Winter. ——It's snowing heavily. ... This kind of beginning is more common in ancient novels. In modern novels, it looks strange and cold, and the romantic meaning is not strong enough. What is also a bit strange is a description similar to the following: ——What's even more disgusting is that the dead man didn't even help her, but just watched the show. This sentence appeared in the first chapter, and it instantly discounted my impression of the male protagonist. I felt that he was a "man who can be called dead", which is almost equivalent to "a man who is not respectable enough". It is inconsistent with the author's image positioning of the male protagonist. It is also inconsistent with the positioning of the heroine and the male protagonist as "the number of times they have met in the two years after marriage can almost be counted on their fingers" - they are not so familiar with each other yet. There are many more places like this in the article. What left a deep impression was that the heroine pinched the hero's cheek by the way... This was somewhat inconsistent with the personality and relationship settings of both the heroine and the hero. You know, most of Jin J's novels are read by women, so the image of the male protagonist is really important. Scroll further up and click into the author's column. I see that the author is a contracted author of Jin J. When this article was 30,000 words long, he probably hadn't applied for the list yet, right? With the list, I believe there will be many more readers. To my surprise, I discovered that the author has completed almost a million words in total. This is really not easy, not to mention that it is not possible for many online writers without joining V. I couldn't help but click on the author's first article again. By comparison, I found that the article "I Can't Love You" has really improved a lot in terms of the compactness of the plot and the sophistication of the writing. I believe that the author will definitely write better and better and write more excellent articles for readers. Bless. Huai Ting!