
The Abandoned Child of the Stars Strikes Back
星际弃子逆袭记
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 182k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Updated
- 12y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
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Finished? ? ? ? ? That's it! ! !
The home of this story should be interstellar. A running account of the virtual world is enough, why bother writing it in such detail? In this case, there will never be any progress in the interstellar world.
It can only be said that the author is playing a big game of chess. I think even if it is a quick passage, the attack and reception are both done at the same time. Don't tell me that the fox is the attack until you see it later. ˊ_>ˋ In the context of a big world, it is not good to write a copy that is too long...
In fact, this is fine, but Small World is too long!
This copy is too long, and the main text has been replaced. I look at the future reality, and I have no patience for the copy.
It was originally rebirth plus time travel, and then it was interspersed with the content, time travel, and games. It seemed like it was messy in the wind. There were too many branch lines, the main line was unclear, and it was difficult to watch.
Author. . . . . . . . Too much. . . . . . . Please continue to update daily. . . . . . . Please be thick and long. . . . . . . . . Please add more. . . . . . . . Yeah. . . . . . . . .
It's very confusing. If you want to write a calm and shrewd protagonist, why do you always have him do inexplicable things, whether he is talking to himself or yelling like a madman, I only see a fool. Is it really okay to have such huge mood swings?
The author is so awesome. . . . The author is so awesome. . . . The author is so awesome. . . . The author is so awesome. . . . The author is so awesome. . . . The author is so awesome. . . .
She didn't want to lose the boy she regarded as her brother, nor did she want to break his heart. . . How can it be broken? . .