Inheritance in the Reborn Future

"It's fishy and unpalatable. If you catch one with many thorns, it will be even more troublesome." The word "unlucky" should be changed to "unlucky."

In Chapter 26, the heroine mentioned that wild amaranth blooms all year round. However, at that time, the research institute had not yet completed research on some of the living habits of wild vegetables. The strangest thing is that according to the character of the hero portrayed by the author, he should be more suspicious. At that time, he did not react to the heroine's words. There are many more problematic little details like this.

Why don't you start a Korean entertainment fanfic? It's not anyone's fault, I just like watching this lately! There is no limit to the protagonist!

Well, when I saw this article, I was attracted by the background setting and character setting in the copy! I don't want to talk about the background setting. I left a comment earlier and complained about it. I feel sorry for it, so I will praise it here! As an angry young man! Don't doubt it! It's a pity that many handicrafts in China have been lost over the past five thousand years. I really wish that an ancient person had traveled through time to pass on his craftsmanship, so I was a little moved when I saw the topic of inheritance. I have read a lot of things that have been passed down through time travel to the future, mostly art, especially novels, so it is a bit novel to see the word "inheritance of farming culture" written in large letters. In addition, I am also very curious about how the author explained clearly the loss of farming culture and the difficulties of inheritance, so. . . . I continued to read the copy with a curious mind. The settings of the facial paralysis officer are in line with my taste. Since it is so in line with my taste, don't jump into the trap carelessly. The male protagonist is an officer with facial paralysis. Seeing that the cuteness of facial paralysis is not so obvious now, it can be seen that he probably wants to write about a person who treats outsiders as ruthlessly as the autumn wind sweeps leaves, and treats his lover as warm as spring? (Heavy fog!) Hey, as a pure and paralyzed officer who is not very good at expressing his feelings, but has no way of trying to please a girl, his tangled mentality of wanting to please a girl while not being too obvious for fear of her not being able to notice her, and being too overtly afraid of scaring her away should be very cute! However, I felt that the writing was a bit bland, and the interaction with the heroine was also written dryly. . . It's cute, but it's not strong enough. Next is our lovely heroine. Well, I think the heroine is just the most ordinary cute girl who is not very smart, but not stupid either, and is content with a plain and uneventful life. But after seeing it later, I felt it was a bit pretentious. Hey, he kept saying no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no. Could it be that it's all the moon's fault - -. . . If the facially paralyzed officer said master! I will only eat the bones you give me from now on, which impressed the heroine. At that moment, she had the girlish feeling that we would be this person for the rest of our lives! (Something is wrong...) Then this happened. . . In fact, I can still understand it (let go of that facial paralysis and let me do it!) The most crucial interaction between the male and female protagonists has arrived! Hey, the interaction between the male and female protagonists should take up a large part of this novel. I don't know if it's my misunderstanding, but it always feels dry. The author always writes some narrations that are a bit like comments. Maybe he is afraid that we will not understand the deeper meaning of the interaction and the cuteness of the interaction. . . Like in this chapter, it is said that the heroine has already regarded the officer as being with her! Although it was later said that the mother-in-law and the others felt it, it was still a bit stiff, and it felt like they were relying on the psychological activities of the mother-in-law and the others. And maybe it should be the part where the officer recited the love words he searched online? I have a similar feeling. There are many meanings in that love words, but the heroine didn't hear it. Well, that slightly monotonous statement can be expressed in the officer's tangled psychology and the heroine's inexplicable psychological activities. It can also make it more cute! Hey hey, the officer is worried in his heart. Does the girl understand? If you don't understand, can you read a straightforward sentence? I searched a lot. It's terrible to be uneducated! Hehehe, maybe it's because I've read too many cute articles recently. QAQ, please don't hit me. To attract readers, you need cuteness and excitement! Overall, Captain Facial Paralysis is quite delicious! It will be more delicious if you think about it yourself~~ Now that I see the whole article, I feel that it is ordinary, well, there are not many interesting points, you can take a look! (Thumbs up) - -Hey, in the end, I hope you won't write about pesticides such as insecticides and herbicides. I often want to write about the level of machinery and technology in the future! The cliff can be used to make machines for weeding and pest control! - - I feel like it's less than a thousand words. Do you want to tell a joke or something to add some water to it? I'm so hesitant. . .

Keep bubbling! In other words, I feel that the author's detailed setting of the article is a bit rough! Since the heroine can access information from the previous earth era, does that mean that the information on planting can actually be found? Moreover, it was originally because of fixed concepts and difficulty in germination, so they did not think about natural planting. But on this new planet, don't they have some ideas when they see those plants growing in the soil? Moreover, when the heroine bought the land, she mentioned mixed planting with soil and water. Doesn't it mean that they actually have this idea too! So I think the background setting is a bit strange, o(╯□╰)o my opinion! Please don't get whipped! By the way, I couldn't sleep at night and thought about a lot of things QAQ, but I just remember this point that always made me feel very awkward.

Didn't the heroine lose her memory? How do you know that the fruit is nourishing and strong and can be used as medicine, but the captain, who has always doubted the heroine, didn't think much about it when faced with such a big doubt@=_=. The concept of this article is quite good, but the arrangement of these details is too rough. If the author puts more thought into this aspect, the article will be outstanding.

The author, after all, there are too many in the article, and sometimes I thought I was reading a junior high school composition.

Before I knew it, I had conquered many chapters...

Bubbles... The Ten Thousand Years Diving Party can't help but come to support you... This article is still very good. I like the plot and concept very much, and the characters are also very good. Although some details of the plot need to be strengthened, overall it is still very good. It has a fresh and refreshing twist~↖(^ω^)↗, worth paying attention to! To be honest, I am a person who is very picky about articles, so what I have to say is that your writing skills really need to be improved (I hope you won't be angry when you see it~)... Well, I saw a lot of illogical statements and descriptions of bugs. Some places were not described clearly, making it impossible to understand the author's true intentions... However, these problems were more obvious in the first few articles, and were obviously much better in the later articles. Maybe it's because the writing went smoothly later on, and I feel that the author is making progress, huh! Therefore, the author can consider re-editing the first few articles when he has free time, and correcting the parts of the text that do not make sense. This article will be better~ They say that everything is difficult at the beginning. This also shows how important the beginning is for an article. I saw someone leaving a message saying that this article has many collections but few comments, so I couldn't help but leave a message... I like this article very much. I hope the author will write it well. There are many divers like me who support you!

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