A Reborn Future on Planet Nuoha

After watching Remaining Claws, to be honest, I was a little disappointed. How should I put it? It was a bit tasteless, tasteless, and a pity to throw away. The writing was very good and attractive at the beginning. I don't know if it was the same for others, but it really attracted me, so I decided to continue reading. However, when I read and added V, I obviously felt that the quality had dropped a lot. At the beginning, the setting and the framework were very good, but I didn't know what to ask. After adding V, it became more and more rough. I felt like I was not in the mood to continue writing, and the code was all perfunctory. The emotions of the characters are too pale, there are also big gaps in the connection, and the storyline is relatively boring. In layman's terms, it's a mess. But the bad ending is the end, right? It's much better than digging a lot of holes and not filling them. [People with obsessive-compulsive disorder can't afford to be hurt if they don't give up after watching it! This is the first time I read this author's article. I hope to see more exciting articles from the author next time. Not nitpicking, I just habitually leave my thumbs up every time I read an article.

In fact, for those of us who read books~~some of them are plots, and some are drag dramas~~And it's huge~~You have too many chapters of your stories, which makes people feel uncomfortable~~It means that I am about to turn into a negative fan~~

Yan Rourong's matter has been solved in a few strokes, and I feel like I haven't written enough...

I don't know if I'm used to the previous pace, but I always felt that the last two chapters were a bit fast and I finished them a bit hastily…>< It's a pity that I didn't see the bad guy being tortured I still like the previous pace better, and I think there could be a second part again!! For example, two people showing off their affection, or a hilarious family drama with a negative emotional intelligence score, or the story of Xiaokang in a mercenary group, or fighting side by side with the general on an interstellar journey~~ There is also the heroic appearance of Xiaohu when he grows up~~ and the active foreshadowing in the blood, the little buns of the two, the little buns and so on... I think your writing style is very smooth and the plot is also great~~ Every time the finishing touch "TAT" makes the emotions and embarrassment more vivid, I like it very much!! I really like the little theater of the adults, the little verbosity, the sweetness, the sweetness and so on. Haha It's a pity that I only discovered such a great article now... TAT Come on, adults~~ I will support Xinwen

It turns out Le Kang likes Sailor Moon...

So warm!!!!!!!!!

The writing is very good. I like this kind of writing very much. It is clean, a little wordy but very warm. But why write about the Kazakhs? ^ ^

I haven't written about how Yan Rourong's matter was resolved yet!

It's over, congratulations, congratulations, lick the melon seeds and watch slowly. Well written...

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