Lone Star Gazing at the Moon

Ugly, the heroine has no personality

Thank you! Good looking! I like it so much~! (Sprinkle flowers)

It's really well written...

As the author's first article, although there are mistakes, it is already very good. Please continue to work hard on this basis! : P

Dear author, the genre of this article is not marked correctly. I always wanted to review it, but I couldn't find it in the fairy tale and fantasy categories. = = Damn, are there any new articles?

I don't know if Ah D still remembers me. Two years ago, I came across this story and left you a message, saying that it was the only film that made me want to make it into a movie. Although, after two years, I have read so many stories, some of which make people smile, some of which make people burst into tears, and some of which make people sigh with surprise, this story is always in my heart. Sometimes, when I dream back at midnight, I always seem to see a woman in white, leaning against a towering tree with a smile, her hair fluttering in the breeze. She has a gentle and firm expression that makes people feel warm inside. I don't know why, but I've always liked Yuxing more than the male protagonist.

It would be nice if it could be longer.

The writing and language are all quite beautiful, but the flaws in the plot are too obvious. . . In order to create the tragic experience of the heroine, many plots are too deliberate, too contrived, and too unreasonable. The two things she values ​​most in the world - Mochizuki's life and her responsibility to protect the seal - are both threatened by Wuyou and may be destroyed at any time. Why does the heroine Yuxing not tell the truth to Mochizuki? Is it just for the hypocritical reason of "not letting Mochizuki know that she has turned into a lowly demon"? Is her so-called self-esteem more important than her responsibilities and Wangyue's life?! Even if Mochizuki doesn't find out that she turned into a monster, at least she can reveal to Mochizuki the falsehood of "Wuyou" identity, her attempt to seal it, and the threat she poses to Mochizuki's life. Even if you can't convince Mochizuki, you can at least plant the seeds of doubt in his heart and make him more vigilant when he has no worries. So I say this plot arrangement is too fake. It would be fine if Wuyou is really a good person. Then the heroine, out of love for the hero and "inferiority" for her identity, swallows her humiliation to satisfy the two of them. Although this plot is unreasonable, it is still acceptable. It's so baffling that the heroine knows Wuyou has evil intentions and yet doesn't say anything. After all, the male protagonist is not a fool. Wuyou just looks the same as Xixing. If Wuyou's doubts are revealed, he will not completely ignore it. In order to create the tragic experience of the heroine, and to arrange a huge misunderstanding that will shake the world and make the hero regret it later, and earn countless sympathy and tears from the readers, the plot can be more deliberate, but it should not make such obvious loopholes. It feels like it's entirely designed to make the heroine miserable and miserable. Another example is the cup of poisoned tea. Will the heroine reveal it soon? Or pretend to accidentally drop it or something. There are obviously 1,000 ways to solve it, so why do you have to drink it yourself? Just to highlight your own suffering? What if she dies and seals it? What should Wuyou do if he wants to harm the male protagonist? What an inexplicable behavior. There are several other similar bugs. The author wants to abuse the audience, abuse the female protagonist, abuse the male protagonist, create a tragic atmosphere, etc. It doesn't matter. Please arrange the plot more reasonably! Don't insult the readers' intelligence with such far-fetched and unreasonable plots.

There is no trace of the image of Wu Ya from a thousand years ago. Mouth: □□ The elegant image of the witch from thousands of years ago is gone. My god!!! Are you thinking too much?!!

Lone Star watched the bird four times, Still like it very much. D's classic.