The Rose Court

He raised his eyes and saw that D had opened another pit. He said unkindly, "Seven domains~~~~~"

Please, one, one, pit, one, one, pit, ground, fill... To be honest: I feel that the starting point of the structure of this story is very old-fashioned. The story of falling in love with a vampire - not having the heart to kill - and dying together has been written by many people, especially the story of a vampire and a human falling in love and dying together... It is generally difficult for people to have a deep love for a story that can guess the ending. If you really want to write it, think about how to shine in the details...

Not simple, not simple, quite a grand script.

This seems to be a big project. I don't quite understand how to write a script, but it feels very professional. But if you can finish writing according to this outline, it will be considered a success. ^^

I've spent a month collecting everyone's comments here. As you can see, I am writing this here to urge myself to finish writing the script of this important musical and to achieve an ideal, not for points. So if you have love, please actively write your thoughts. I will keep thinking and improving. In the end, I probably hope that I can really finish writing this script and create music again. Thank you to everyone here who continues to read articles and encourage DD. Everyone, I may be naive. Keep saying that you are looking for something pure. But in JJ's world, a world where people write and read articles, there are indeed pure things. Again, bow.