Hey, You Arrogant Guy!

Have you given up on this article? I've been waiting for a long time. I'm crying.

All kinds of burning eyes~~

Attack the girl and start a trap! Bang bang bang bang [This is the sound of applause!!! For this article, I summarize what I want to say in five points. One, writing style. In fact, I personally think that the girl's writing style is quite good, but some of her words and sentences may be a bit inappropriate. For example, "prosperity" means that a person rises to a very high status all of a sudden. It may not be consistent with our domestic situation to describe Gu's father's position in the central government as a meteoric rise. But the girl's delicate writing is undoubtedly a highlight. If the article did not deliberately show the protagonist's wealthy family background and status as a high-ranking official, the article would not look so cool. If you want to highlight their family background, there is actually no need to repeat what brand of car and so on... Two, perspective. This article is narrated in the first person, but there is not much psychological description of the heroine. Does she resist or dislike her brother? Do you like them but can't love them, or is it just a brother-sister relationship? She doesn't have much of a sweet and warm feeling about Gu Han, so the character description feels a bit stiff. Because the first person is convenient for detailed psychological description and setting up foreshadowing/suspense, etc., But if there is no such meaning, it would be better to use the third person. Third, personality. I actually can't understand the protagonists of this article. For example, the heroine who was paralyzed at the age of 9 and still goes to college normally at the age of 17. I really think that such a person is so amazing. I =mouth=... And girl, your character Gu Han is a high-ranking student, but he shows off his car and wealth and is domineering and arrogant in school. Does it really matter? I can understand the blatant arrogance of Gu Fei, who is also a senior official, but if the male protagonist really has such a childish and arrogant character, this is not a positive energy. There is also the brother. The brother portrayed in the article should be relatively mature, but his fight with Gu Han and his possessiveness and control over the heroine are so obvious. In fact, he is not considered sinister. There is also Xiao Sun. In fact, I feel that this character is a bit baffling. She has such friction with a high-ranking child, is beaten and bullied, and still has to fight against it. She is already a college student, and adults should have adult rationality. [Otherwise, this child is either mentally ill or has princess disease and doesn't know what's going on! Finally, there is the heroine. As for the setting of the heroine, I thought it was a bit deserted at first, which I liked! But as I looked at it, I started to feel indecisive and pretentious. The breakup was all because my brother was unhappy. Gu Ying was self-pitying and had a bit of a willful personality. It was really... As for some backgrounds, I actually haven't read many high-ranking articles, but I'm in college, and the adult world doesn't use fighting to express anger. Since the protagonists have extraordinary identities, their thoughts and the color of their stomachs are destined to be. Of course, sometimes the little details are quite cute. Fourth, emotion. In fact, my biggest doubt is why Gu Han fell in love with the heroine because the heroine is beautiful? The heroine ignored him? Because the heroine is a bit arrogant, but has a quiet and sensitive personality? Or did the heroine save his life [just kidding]? How can a young man who has been wandering around this colorful world for several years fall in love with her in less than a month? Moreover, when did the heroine fall in love with Gu Han? Why can't I see the heroine's heart move at all? And why would the heroine, who seems to have been through a lot and should be very smart, agree to fall in love with a second-generation ancestor? After all, the heroine is from a high-ranking family! Five, plot. In fact, aside from some immature expressions, the plot of "Girl, You" is still good. It also grasps some small foreshadowings well, but many details of emotional changes are not touched on. A novel is more than just fun. If you don't have sophisticated writing, you must use novel plots to catch people's attention. Now the article looks very thin, and it is also the beginning of the plot. I hope you can grasp it well, come on! The above is purely a personal opinion. Everyone has their own taste. If you don't agree with my opinion, please don't be angry. I wish you success! Come on, come on, come on, hey!!! ~ [Yuanfang, what do you think_Long Commentary Wenpu: Mr. C]

Haha, Gu Han confessed to the heroine~~~\\(≧▽≦)/~ Lalala likes the author's delicate writing style very much. The "Lolita" mentioned in the article seems to be very good. I will go and take a look when I have time~~ Great support to the author~~

When Xia Han said "If you can't fight, just run away", the heroine felt like a black line for an instant, and she laughed so hard... Haha, this article is so cute~~ Big boost for the author~~O(∩_∩)O~~

Why do I think Xia Han always has ambiguous feelings towards the heroine? ←_←

Thank you to the author. The article is good, but one update per day is too little. I finished reading it in one go. Please add more ~\\(≧▽≦)/~ La La La