The story of a frail farming girl who escapes her cage one step at a time, only to... never become a strong, independent woman.
The writing is decent, though the story structure is a little immature, and the logic... While writing, the author was pelted with rotten eggs from every direction. Trembling with anxiety and desperate to please everyone, I lost my rhythm and learned my lesson the hard way. So if you decide to keep reading, you're welcome to follow my growth as a writer. If you can't bear it, just quietly click the X and leave. I'm fragile-hearted, and things are already miserable enough. Seeing accusations that I've swindled everyone out of their money and virtue is just... I couldn't live with myself.
A few things to know: 1. The romance is faithful, and it absolutely has a happy ending, so rest assured and dive in. 2. This is a farming story, so it starts slowly, and the heroine is weak. If that's not for you, just click the X. Thank you. 3. I'll resume updating daily or every other day and try to finish before the New Year (I mean the Lunar New Year). 4. I'm a science major, and this story is set in a fictional world, so please don't nitpick too much.
[From the Heart]:
I've seen comments from readers who seem to dislike stories with weak heroines. I'm sorry about that. I originally wanted to write something realistic. In ancient times, women generally weren't the ones in power, aside from figures like Wu Zetian, who seemed to live freely and boldly. Of course, transmigrated heroines are an exception: they can do whatever they like because they all have a golden finger. I've been trying to make everything in the story reasonable, but now I see that I've overlooked how readers feel. I admit I'm not very good at figuring out what everyone likes, and my characterization skills aren't strong enough. But since I've started this story, I'll keep writing it properly.
Some readers have said this story affects their mood, and I'm sorry about that. But I absolutely won't accept the claim that I'm deliberately trying to disgust readers. I haven't tried to disgust anyone. The Yang family in the story is based on real people. No matter how much everyone dislikes all the unfairness and emotional and physical suffering, these people really do exist.
I just want to leave behind some words with all my heart. Even if I stumble along, even if my journey isn't pleasing to everyone, I've still put my feelings into it. If you really don't like it, just click the X. I'll keep working hard in the future.
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What nonsense article, you have the nerve to publish it and sell it, wasting more than 140 points, just like feeding the dog, it is really unscrupulous.
I think this article is good. The author doesn't need to be discouraged.
Abandoned article, negative points, so disgusting
The heroine is too cowardly, too stupid, and has a strong sense of servitude. She still misses such a home. She always felt uncomfortable watching it but still endured it. However, after reading this chapter, I couldn't bear it anymore. Isn't the heroine smart? Why is she bullied like this? There is also a male protagonist who wants to hide and actually becomes an actor. How humble an actor is, and there is a risk of being recognized when an actor appears in public. Aren't you afraid of arousing the covetousness of high-ranking officials? It's really uncomfortable not to give negative marks. Author, you disgust me.
Is this Nanzhu? I don't like it T_T
I read more than 20 chapters and finally read the last update. I really couldn't help but want to vomit. The author's writing is okay, but the heroine is really not likable. The Virgin is too much. She was beaten and scolded by her stepmother and used as a maid for so many years, but she was moved by being a little gentler to her. From the description in the article, she is also a smart and beautiful person. It makes me want to vomit blood! Also, how did the heroine, a little girl from the countryside, spread her reputation to the ears of a famous matchmaker in the city? Of course, this is not the point. The point is that I am very curious about whether the Yang family's Feng Shui is so nurturing. Everyone said that Yang Qing traveled through time to learn from his master and it will probably take up a lot of space in the future. After the second sister left, I haven't seen it, but I guess it's an important figure. Yang Ying sold herself as a maid and became a concubine. The remaining Yang Lian and Yang Xi probably have their own fortunes. I think the name of the novel can be changed to the Yang family. It seems that Yang Youcai can rest in peace after his death. All the children are promising. Of course, author, this is just a complaint on my part, so please don't take it too seriously. I just don't like writing the whole story around the Yang family, and I'm also very dissatisfied with the attributes of the heroine. Overall, I don't find it cute. I've only read more than 20 chapters, and I don't know much about the content. Please forgive me if I'm wrong.
Put a stamp on the blackboard~Escape~
The more I watch it, the more suffocating and uncomfortable it becomes. Does the slow heat make the heroine suffer more?
Wen Xin didn't notice this article, but it was quite poignant. The more delicate it is, the more frustrating it is. I hope that the scumbag father and stepmother will die soon, and that the heroine and second sister can live a good life.
Come on jelly! Support you - -
What nonsense article, you have the nerve to publish it and sell it, wasting more than 140 points, just like feeding the dog, it is really unscrupulous.
I think this article is good. The author doesn't need to be discouraged.
Abandoned article, negative points, so disgusting
The heroine is too cowardly, too stupid, and has a strong sense of servitude. She still misses such a home. She always felt uncomfortable watching it but still endured it. However, after reading this chapter, I couldn't bear it anymore. Isn't the heroine smart? Why is she bullied like this? There is also a male protagonist who wants to hide and actually becomes an actor. How humble an actor is, and there is a risk of being recognized when an actor appears in public. Aren't you afraid of arousing the covetousness of high-ranking officials? It's really uncomfortable not to give negative marks. Author, you disgust me.
Is this Nanzhu? I don't like it T_T
I read more than 20 chapters and finally read the last update. I really couldn't help but want to vomit. The author's writing is okay, but the heroine is really not likable. The Virgin is too much. She was beaten and scolded by her stepmother and used as a maid for so many years, but she was moved by being a little gentler to her. From the description in the article, she is also a smart and beautiful person. It makes me want to vomit blood! Also, how did the heroine, a little girl from the countryside, spread her reputation to the ears of a famous matchmaker in the city? Of course, this is not the point. The point is that I am very curious about whether the Yang family's Feng Shui is so nurturing. Everyone said that Yang Qing traveled through time to learn from his master and it will probably take up a lot of space in the future. After the second sister left, I haven't seen it, but I guess it's an important figure. Yang Ying sold herself as a maid and became a concubine. The remaining Yang Lian and Yang Xi probably have their own fortunes. I think the name of the novel can be changed to the Yang family. It seems that Yang Youcai can rest in peace after his death. All the children are promising. Of course, author, this is just a complaint on my part, so please don't take it too seriously. I just don't like writing the whole story around the Yang family, and I'm also very dissatisfied with the attributes of the heroine. Overall, I don't find it cute. I've only read more than 20 chapters, and I don't know much about the content. Please forgive me if I'm wrong.
Put a stamp on the blackboard~Escape~
The more I watch it, the more suffocating and uncomfortable it becomes. Does the slow heat make the heroine suffer more?
Wen Xin didn't notice this article, but it was quite poignant. The more delicate it is, the more frustrating it is. I hope that the scumbag father and stepmother will die soon, and that the heroine and second sister can live a good life.