When a Cannon Fodder Meets the Villainous Boss

? ? ? I saw tags fighting each other, but in the end it was the winner?

This apprentice was really accepted inexplicably, and he didn't know what to do with the next ambush book.

The ending was so rushed and I felt like a lot of the plot was not explained clearly.

It would be a waste not to write hundreds of chapters with such a big background... Anyway, the ending is too hasty, right? (It's still a bit baffling) I feel uncomfortable watching it.

Although I like this article very much, I have to say that it is poorly finished... Speaking of which, why did Shou take on such a troublesome apprentice, and then go to great lengths to pave the way for him, and make Gong wait for so long? Can you at least explain it to me? Without explanation in this regard, I feel that Shou is a bit like the Holy Mother, inexplicably paying for others... Is it just to prolong the time for Gong and Shou to see each other? Doesn't Weiran know that his senior brother is waiting for him? In short, after reading this chapter, the most annoying thing is the apprentice who appears out of nowhere, which is depressing...

A family of idiots, but there are also smart people. . . . . . . . . . . . . .

The author has a lot of typos, but the plot is very good.

Agreed, why is there a glass shard at the end? It felt pretty good when I watched it, but the ending made me feel very frustrated. The two suddenly separated, and the female cultivator, who had a good relationship, turned against her Taoist companion and herself for the sake of her apprentice, and made her Taoist partner wait alone in the fairy world for hundreds of more years. Ennnnnnnnn... It's hard to describe in a word.

To put it bluntly, if Shou had known early on that accepting that disciple would have cost Gong Shou and the others more than two hundred years (according to what we learned in the previous chapter), I wonder if Shou would have accepted him as his disciple? Don't talk about being soft-hearted. It's been so many years. As a mortal, even a human being in the 21st century, these unnecessary soft-heartedness should have disappeared after so many years, right? Moreover, for the sake of such a disciple, both the attacker and the receiver were injured. What is the origin of this apprentice? It's so headless and has no tail, it can't even be considered a bad ending. The prerequisite for a bad ending is to have a "tail", but this article doesn't have a "tail" at all. Even if it's a bug or something like that, it doesn't matter if you forget about it. Not many people can still remember him. On the contrary, what I was looking forward to was a conversation between Shou and that time-traveling swordsman who meant something...

The author is great. . . Somehow it always feels too rushed, but after all, it's a love story, so it feels relatively bland. The plot design is quite good, there is no pretense style, nor is it some romance-like bloody style, it is more real. However, the two protagonists were too smooth sailing, and the two of them were cheating and crushing each other along the way, which made it a bit too plain to watch. The CP design of Yan Ge is quite unique and can reflect the author's emotional concepts. I also agree with their ending. It is really unrealistic to fall in love, kill each other, and be sadistic. It also weakens the emotions and views that normal people should have. I feel that Yan Wu did a good job. However, sometimes I often feel that there is not enough coherence between chapters. It seems that Yan Wu's final ending has not been written out. This loophole is a bit big. There are also all kinds of typos. This is really amazing. There are very few authors like this. So I was a little confused after reading, and I didn't bother to bother with the typos. It was too tiring. In terms of usage, I feel that the author's plot handling and writing style are pretty good, but it is not attractive enough to capture the readers' hearts.