"Would you let me die on the battlefield?" The guard asked lazily by his ear. "Let ten thousand arrows pierce my heart, or have me hacked to pieces. Then take half my armor back and give it to my father..."
"Don't you dare," the emperor said viciously.
The guard chuckled. As his body was about to be torn apart, he held the emperor even tighter. "I'll die for you, Your Majesty."
"Even if you die, it'll be for yourself!"
The guard laughed brazenly. His laughter echoed through the silent camp, passing the mocking ears of those who could not sleep, sweeping over the vast wasteland where soldiers of ages past lay buried, and reaching all the way to the heavens.
A middle schooler's cringey old writing. The prose is childish, so please don't roast me.
Theme:
This writing style... I fell to my knees when I was in junior high school
▄█?█● Kneel down, junior high school, I don't deserve it. Have been abused
... When I was in junior high school, I was very hesitant.
Now, I found it! Qiqi always likes to use the so-called black history to blind us human beings with fish lips╭(╯^╰)╮
If it is true, then you will like to use gorgeous words to package your literature.
His handsome writing style is astonishing, even in junior high school~
I really didn't understand it, I need an explanation.
Hahahahaha, the writing is so good that it reminds me of the time in junior high when I would write about my family members who were sick and had gray hair, and I would wash their feet and hair.
Was it really written in junior high school? ? How many books do you have to read to have this vocabulary? Cry
It's not a problem with the writing style, it's a problem with the structure.
It's a bit too wordy and overly lyrical.
But don't underestimate yourself, because it seems that you have tried your best at that time.
It's a bit late to leave a message now. I blame me for not looking at the posting date.
This writing style... I fell to my knees when I was in junior high school
▄█?█● Kneel down, junior high school, I don't deserve it. Have been abused
... When I was in junior high school, I was very hesitant.
Now, I found it! Qiqi always likes to use the so-called black history to blind us human beings with fish lips╭(╯^╰)╮
If it is true, then you will like to use gorgeous words to package your literature.
His handsome writing style is astonishing, even in junior high school~
I really didn't understand it, I need an explanation.
Hahahahaha, the writing is so good that it reminds me of the time in junior high when I would write about my family members who were sick and had gray hair, and I would wash their feet and hair.
Was it really written in junior high school? ? How many books do you have to read to have this vocabulary? Cry
It's not a problem with the writing style, it's a problem with the structure. It's a bit too wordy and overly lyrical. But don't underestimate yourself, because it seems that you have tried your best at that time. It's a bit late to leave a message now. I blame me for not looking at the posting date.