It's unfinished, the setting is very good, the characters are thin, the superheroes seem to be basically just Tony and the captain, the logic is not flawed, but there are indeed some places that are confusing, it's too fast, just like a flash card, the story ends in a swish, swish, swish, and the emotional development is very awkward, like it's for love. Love and love are mostly tools. It's like an expanded version of the outline. It's a pity. The author's writing style is good, but there are some inconsistencies in the article (not many). From the comments, it should be caused by the intermittently updated article. Alas, it's a pity. It is a good story, but it is not well told.
Baby, here I come! Very good, come on! ! !
The characters are well written and the plot is very interesting. Please update.
! ! ! Suki! !
Ahhhhhhhhh how could this be happening, so cruel, cardiac arrest (?_?)
Where did the male and female protagonists meet (｀⌒?メ)
The two sets of teammates of the protagonist are really hard to describe. . This kind of person can also pass the level
Cats can't seem to drink milk
"Strange men are dangerous." That's quite right, but he is dangerous and charming. H can see through the heroine's heart, but what about the author's? Recalling the author's male and female protagonist types, I fell into thinking.
It's unfinished, the setting is very good, the characters are thin, the superheroes seem to be basically just Tony and the captain, the logic is not flawed, but there are indeed some places that are confusing, it's too fast, just like a flash card, the story ends in a swish, swish, swish, and the emotional development is very awkward, like it's for love. Love and love are mostly tools. It's like an expanded version of the outline. It's a pity. The author's writing style is good, but there are some inconsistencies in the article (not many). From the comments, it should be caused by the intermittently updated article. Alas, it's a pity. It is a good story, but it is not well told.
Baby, here I come! Very good, come on! ! !
The characters are well written and the plot is very interesting. Please update.
! ! ! Suki! !
Ahhhhhhhhh how could this be happening, so cruel, cardiac arrest (?_?)
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Where did the male and female protagonists meet (｀⌒?メ)
The two sets of teammates of the protagonist are really hard to describe. . This kind of person can also pass the level
Cats can't seem to drink milk
"Strange men are dangerous." That's quite right, but he is dangerous and charming. H can see through the heroine's heart, but what about the author's? Recalling the author's male and female protagonist types, I fell into thinking.
Wow go! I got a big red envelope!