The Full-Dive Online Game: Leaving Vulture Peak Palace

After reading it, I discovered that it was an article written many years ago. Then I clicked on the author's column and discovered that it was the author of the original work "The Beginning." Maybe my comments below are offensive, but I hope the author will forgive them. I had watched part of "The Beginning" when the drama version was released. Now, comparing the two works that have been separated for many years, I feel "young and astringent". I am not engaged in writing, and I am not that professional, but as a reader, I feel some primitiveness and immaturity of the text from the author's expressions and word choice. This is not a derogatory meaning. This "Escape from the Vulture Palace" is more of an immature portrayal, but there are many initial moments. The original aura of exploration, and "The Beginning" gives people a more intentional feeling. Regardless of the plot progression, just looking at the language or description of some characters' states, it feels more routine. I don't know if it caters to the reader's market, or the author did it at will, so I won't make any comments. "Out of the Vulture Palace" does not have the characteristics of some articles in recent years. It explains things clearly at the beginning, but starts with the characters. However, in the process of explaining the origin of the heroine's mission, it dilutes the reader's sense of involvement. Even if it imposes a description of the heroine's characteristics, it will inevitably make the reader a little confused. Moreover, I personally feel that the entire article does not give me a strong sense of time, and the heroine's growth experience is not that strong. Moreover, there is a place in the article where the heroine chooses to hide it after learning left-rear reciprocal stroke. The main idea here is to prevent people from feeling dirty in their hearts. The word "dirty" impressed me twice, but I feel that the meaning in both places is wrong. I would like to ask if "dirty" should be used here instead of "dirty"? Since I don't quite understand whether the author meant to avoid any resentment, I just wanted to ask. Apart from some imperfect feelings, in fact, some of the descriptions of the fights still amaze me, but the descriptions in some places are indeed a bit abrupt and unnatural. I don't mean that the writing is bad, but some parts are more brilliant, and it feels a little inconsistent, or it feels like I just stepped on the first floor and thought I was going to climb up, but found that the stairs only had two steps. As for the conclusion of the main plot, it always felt a bit rushed, and the part of the plot near the end always felt like it was ending just for the sake of ending. Personally, I even felt that the Battle of Xiangyang was more exciting than the Hidden Mission, and it also made me feel more like an online game than a holographic online game. Especially after Wu Yazi took action, the sense of rush was stronger. Although the heroine and supporting actors gave hearty speeches, I always felt that something was missing. And I always thought that the real-life identity of the heroine could be more closely integrated or interacted with the game, and I actually kept my expectations, but in the end it didn't seem to reflect this much. After looking at the character of the heroine, it seems that the heroine's character is the same type as the protagonist of another book by the author more years ago. Maybe the author just wants to use it to complete that article's wish? These are some of my personal guesses, I hope I don't offend the author. The above are just my humble opinions. In my opinion, although "Holographic Online Game: Leaving the Vulture Palace" may not be the best, or it may not feel that complete, it is considered a success. The author persevered and successfully showed everyone what he wanted. I also saw a lot of the author's emotional projection from it. I admire it very much. It is quite reasonable to read the whole article. I hope the author will get better and better as he writes!

It ended so suddenly, it felt like the story was over just after it started. Well

It's very good, but it's a pity that it's too short and the ending is a bit hasty~

I really like game articles (???????????)

I really like game articles (???????????)

At first, I thought Drunk Lying on the Beauty's Knees was the male protagonist.

Finished spreading flowers! ! It would be great if there are extras, but it's okay if there are no extras. I'm very satisfied with the reading process! !

After reading it, I realized that this article was written seven years ago...

Woo woo woo, no more, sad

After chasing it, there are still some unfinished thoughts