
Dreams of a Lost Splendor (Working Title)
繁花遗梦(暂定)
- Status
- Unknown
- Length
- 9k Words
- Genre
- Romance
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 19y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
6Chapters
5Favorites
898Clicks per chapter
11Comments
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Fortunately, it's not that cold.
Please support me. Yingluo's name is so familiar.
To luguo: Your comments are very pertinent. I will try my best to modify them. However, if it is completely in accordance with your style, it will not be accidental. So I am not sure whether I can modify it to your satisfaction. To be honest, I was very moved by the fact that the adults had so many objections to my article but still gave it 2 points. Thank you. Regarding the logic problem of "a few strong lines but a few strokes", well... There is indeed a logic problem, but I haven't figured out how to change it at the moment. Anyway, thank you for your opinions! The adults said that my writing is gorgeous. I was really shocked. How can my writing, which is so useless, be called gorgeous? Look at the sky... I just want to use the preface to set the stage, but this preface is actually dispensable, so it may feel a bit far-fetched. I am really sorry for causing this misunderstanding to adults. In fact, my writing is really very poor. As for (Bodhi has no trees, mirrors are not stands, there is nothing in the first place, where is the dust.) I actually understand the true meaning of this sentence. Many people may not understand the meaning here, but what I want to say is that the reason why I wrote it on the tombstone is just to illustrate the relationship between this sentence and the owner of the tombstone. When the truth is revealed, I will naturally understand. So this point will not change. Finally, I would like to thank you again for your careful revision of the article, thank you.
The autumn wind is bleak, yellow flowers fall to the ground, and red leaves drift. In the quiet forest, birds occasionally fluttered by, casting shadows. His mournful voice made the surroundings even more desolate. A tomb stands alone in the distance. From the surrounding weeds, it is not difficult to guess that the old friend has been dead for a long time. A man in a navy blue robe stood in front of the grave with his hands clasped behind his back. The profound gaze changes with the floating clouds and falling leaves. The drifting eyes are faint, seeming sad but not sad, and there seems to be some fleeting past in the depths of the deep. For a long time, he lamented softly! "Sometimes, it always feels like you never existed..." The sound of sighs melted into the autumn wind, (the man's gown blew up, and his long black hair was messed up. The hair was floating, as smooth as a waterfall, reflecting the blurred colors, and the colors were reflected in the deep eyes, with a bit of mist.) I don't know what you are doing here? ? ? ? The man calmed down his scattered thoughts, smiled, turned and left. Only the lonely tomb is left waiting in the wind for the upcoming changing season, (just like a man's waiting, year after year.) Can it be written in a different way? It is very abrupt. A tombstone was erected in front of the tomb. There was no name or biography on the tombstone. (There were only a few strong lines and a few strokes.) As I have said before, it fully describes the helplessness of the mortal world. ——(Bodhi has no tree, and the mirror is not a stand. There is nothing in the first place, so how can it cause dust.) Please understand the meaning of this sentence before using it.
"A few lines of strong words but a few strokes" Do you think it makes sense logically??? There are only a few strokes in a few lines, should we write them all one by one? The beauty of words is of course very important, but if you deliberately focus on the words, the content will be ignored. Content is the most practical thing. You started by writing about a man visiting a tomb. Too many embellishments make the article seem too empty. I won't watch it anymore, I hope it will be greatly improved. Waiting for next time...
Float, float, float, come in and score a score Nice to say, come on~
It seems that the SF in this chapter is still accidental, come on! Although the update is a little slow, it seems to be very interesting ~
This fairy brother... Hehe... Oh, I can't believe it~Keep up the good work, certain cat!
Come on! A certain cat, I'm very nice to you~ Haha, I actually like Yingluo's personality.
I'm here to support you. Let's take a look. It seems to be pretty good.