The Fox of Shangqing

Halfway through, I felt something was wrong, so I jumped straight to the ending. ... Why do I feel so frustrated? (Want to curse) Author, seriously, are you sure your heroine has not been tampered with by Heaven? When Kong Xuan placed a ban on the heroine, the heroine felt offended and tried hard to kill Kong Xuan's reincarnation. Moreover, even after so many years, the heroine was still brooding about this matter and did not give Kong Xuan a good look at all; Back then, Cihang hurt the heroine because of the Wuzhishan incident, and the heroine also wanted to take revenge. After arriving at the Heavenly Dao, after working hard for so long, Tongtian didn't fall asleep, and the plan was not realized. Human Heavenly Dao just said it, and there was no struggle. He didn't even mention the way to become a saint without killing three corpses as mentioned in Hongmeng Ziqi! The whole ending is anticlimactic and full of perfunctory atmosphere! It feels like a person trapped in the swamp of fate and struggling desperately, suddenly lying down and giving up. Was your heroine manipulated by Heaven? Or have you been brainwashed yourself? Or is it that the struggling spirit in the author's heart was vented in the later stages of writing the article?

It took me a day to finally finish reading it, and I felt so depressed and uncomfortable. Even though they were together in the extra chapter, I still felt a little regretful, even though I didn't know why. In addition, the large text is very interesting, and I am also following several other books.

Although many people have a happy ending, and the heroine finally gets what she wants, but I feel that the heroine's saving the world is calculated by heaven, and I feel unhappy. Also, this article is more of a two-person role, without the vividness and richness of a group portrait, but the writing is good and the plot structure is also good. If it is a slow-paced, delicate and ups and downs medium-length novel, it will definitely be?, The emotional climax of the high-energy plot is not enough foreshadowing and rendering.

Really, when a woman pursues a man, the relationship only breaks through when the heroine joins the path. The heroine had a one-sided crush on Tongtian before.

I feel that everything is a plan of heaven. In order for heaven to bring a chance of life into harmony, Hu Xiaoyu will fall in love with Tongtian and sacrifice everything for him.

I watched the finale, and it actually ended when I was in elementary school. However, I am still shocked after watching it now in college. I usually watch male protagonists with too many emotional dramas, but this male protagonist gave me just the right feeling (it would be better to add a little more on this basis). I really like this kind of fairy male protagonist who is as gentle as jade.

Thank you for your hard work. The writing is great. It's great.

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It would be nice to have more extra love

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