I Returned After Quick Transmigration

I feel tired after seeing this...

I think the ending here is a little rushed. Some characters could be explained again.

Well, he ate the leftover soybeans and drooled over soybeans...

The world view set in the novel is too big, and it is a pity that there are not millions of words to enrich it, because the most complicated branches of building the world view have been skipped in the front, which will make the whole thing unharmonious when added later. Of course, it can be gradually improved at this time, but it takes a lot of effort and energy. In addition, the author's condition cannot support it. It is really a pity. I hope that I can start a super long novel with this theme after I have recovered a lot.

It would be better if it ends with Donghuang and Mengmeng returning to Earth hand in hand

Although the ending is not satisfactory, I understand that the author has worked hard, so come on!

I had forgotten who Heidou was from. I've been following this article for too long

It's so good that I can't bear to finish it.

Congratulations on the completion, spread the flowers ~ looking forward to finishing the Empress

Isn't Heidou sleeping at the place where he and the heroine met?