First of all, this is a newbie trying their hand at writing. 1v1, probably a medium-to-long story. I can't bear to marry my uke off, so it's a slow burn, and updates will be at a snail's pace (seriously).
Blurb:
Ling: For the sake of the elves...
Fan: For peace between the elves and demons, my dear, come with me into the abyss of love? (≧▽≦)/~
Aide: Stay away from him, demon. (He casually yanks up a tree and hurls it at him.)
Fan: Foolish elf (╰_╯)#... Of course, my adorable little elf is the exception~~╭(╯3╰)╮
Ling: Aide!! Wait, that direction is the elf's sacred... altar...
Aide: ... (stares blankly at the pile of rubble that might once have been a mosaic)
Very serious! I didn't see any typos
The wind blows, scattering whose picturesque years, who has passed by, whose pride blooms... Like!
My dear, it's not bad, the writing is very good, but did you subconsciously bring your own personality into it? . . . . . This is a rant. . . .
The writing is good, looking forward to it