Blurb
A brief lifetime of entanglement, schemes, manipulation, and affection. This is how we have all made our way through life.
[About Those Three]
"Mu Guang, you need to understand that nothing in this world matters more to me than you. Honestly, compared with you, I couldn't care less whether your father lives or dies," Lu Xiu said coldly.
Ji Muguang shook his head. "I mean, I hated him so much that he was all I could see, in my heart and in my eyes."
Zhuo Yingkong's eyes were bloodshot. "Tell me, what happened between you two six years ago?"
About this book: Though it is still part of the Golden Years series, this novel will stand relatively independent.
Actually, I really like Du Ruo's character!!
Just keep at it, the article is overall good
Already collected, I will keep it and read it slowly. I will leave a long comment if I have the chance~ Haha, I like to express my opinions.
It took so long to post the review and the author didn't push me. It really makes me wonder whether my character is too good or the author has simply forgotten about it... In short, before I start the review, I would like to apologize to the author for my advanced procrastination. [Take a bow. Overall, this is a pretty good piece of writing. From the title to the copy, it is all in a relatively concise style. There is nothing special to say, but the number of words in the chapters is slightly less. Generally, 3000+ would be more appropriate. Although the plot is not novel, it involves revenge, two men fighting for a woman, etc. The author's narrative sequence is relatively well-arranged, and the use of interjections is quite appropriate. However, it starts with just waking up from a dream. It is better to write a few sentences about what the dream is about, whether it is memories of the past, or meeting the future and Lu Xiu's charge. The characterization is a bit ordinary. Ji Muguang's image is relatively delicate, and her psychological understanding is quite good. It can show that she cannot forget Lu Xiu, and she always harbors resentment, but she is moved by Zhuo Yingkong, and she has always been conflicted and painful. However, the images of the two men are relatively simple. I think the character's personality should be consistent with his experience. Lu Xiu has already mentioned his life experience. Illegitimate children are very hard-working, so it should be normal for him to be more ruthless and smile and then stab him in the back. Even if he loves Mu Guang very much, now His aura is a little too weak... But it can be seen that he has already taken action against Zhuo, and I am still looking forward to making him a stumbling block. Of course, I think it would be better if the method is more sophisticated. It would be more touching to make you grateful after he has tricked you. The main reason is that his attitude towards Ji Muguang was not the most appropriate, which made it impossible for me to have a clear understanding of this person's character. As for Zhuo Yingkong, his image seems to be relatively thin, which gives me the illusion that he will behave as the plot requires him to be. His experience is not very clear. If his family background is not bad, he is not arrogant at the moment. If he is someone who worked hard by himself, he is less capable and a little less capable. And a very important point, I think this guy's level difference is too big when he faced Lu Xiu? As a successful person who at least runs one of the best companies in the city, even if he is a partner with Lu Xiu, a foreign company, he should have a few painless confrontations in secret to assess the level of both parties. And won't he get suspicious? Lu Xiu tried to drive a wedge between them over and over again. He chose to believe that Mu Guang was fine, and he should at least feel a little uneasy in his heart - otherwise he would have been driven to death in the end... In short, it is difficult for me to make an exact position on him. The writing style is generally literary and artistic, and it is more consistent with the slightly tangled setting. However, from my observation, this style is not very popular in Jinjiang. Readers prefer the easy-to-complain style? But I don't think it's appropriate to change the style halfway. If the author can endure the loneliness, just keep writing in this style. After all, this is the only way to truly convey what you want to express. I don't know how long the author plans to write this article. If it is more than 100,000 words, the current pace feels a little slow. Judging from the current development, there are quite a lot of conflicts. If the pace can be accelerated, the conflicts between Lu Xiu and Mu Guang, the conflicts between Lu Xiu and Zhuo Yingkong, and Zhuo Yingkong's reaction one day when he knows the facts will be very eye-catching. Although the current narration seems to make the emotional line more delicate, in fact, tightening the plot will not affect these. Overall, I quite like this work, including this sad little piece of literature. I hope the author can continue his efforts and finish it! (By the way, it's unscientific for me to delay commenting for so long and you haven't updated it much!
Little fresh rush, in front.
Send flowers, send flowers, send flowers
I found it, points must be given, write well
It seems like a storm is coming... Like...
Do you want this, all kinds of kisses!
. . . . I actually forgot to give points. Hand pumping. . . . .