This Mo Is Not That Mo

Really. . . Not easy

I suddenly got scared after reading the comments... Really

I don't like the male protagonist. I was so in love with a girl before, but then I fell in love with the female protagonist. I feel like I am treating the female protagonist as a substitute...

I watched "This Strange Land Is Not That Mo" today, and I really want to see the story of Zhou Qinbai and Mo Wanni. How long has it been watching?

It's really heartwarming. . . But is there really such a thing in the world? Have you ever??? Beautiful men are only seen on TV. . . . . . O(╯□╰)oo(╯□╰)o Such a warm little article can satisfy the beautiful dreams of those of us who are not beauties. . . . .

Ah, it would look good if you just read the copywriting, right~

Looking forward to seeing the ups and downs in the future

Copywriting Thumbs up for the cover, it's beautiful. But the first of the two paragraphs in the copywriting is inexplicable, probably because it doesn't hit the point of cuteness (actually, I didn't feel anything after reading it + I was a little confused). I like the words in the second paragraph, "Some people say that love is the most difficult thing to meet in the world. And they met it." It feels very beautiful. Text After Mo Mei graduated from university, she came to the male protagonist's company, and the two gradually got closer to the story of being together in the end. The overall writing style is brisk, so it doesn't seem like you'll feel down at all. The character of the heroine Mo Mei can change in an instant, very quickly, while the male protagonist is a bit sinister and sultry. A lot of cute things can happen when these two people get together. So what happened in the middle continued to advance the relationship between the two, until they finally got married. Suggestion About the description: 1. "Bright eyes" should be "bright eyes". 2. "The girl's soft voice floated in the empty air, and finally hit Mo Mei's heart" is a bit too written. Although this sentence is beautiful, it feels too lily when used on two girls. 3. "Will those people choose someone? Rong Momei roared again." ← She must be roaring in her heart~ It's late at night. 4. The end of the first chapter is a bit confusing. I read it twice before I understood what I wanted to express. 5. "After breaking through the initial embarrassing line of defense, there is an open world for her to fly." This sentence is cumbersome. 6. "The facial expression is still flying", is it Zhang Yang~ 7. "A young woman's yearning for love can't escape from such vulgar plots. Parting for life and death, or crying bitterly." This sentence is really too abrupt... 8. "The boss said that the name of the store is to commemorate his childhood dream that was far away. His soul seemed to have penetrated through the layers of mist and reached the peak of 4,300 meters. There were red irises there." The latter sentence has nothing to do with the previous sentence, and it is strange to put them together. 9. "She smiles, as bright as a summer flower. Warm and silent." Please don't use metaphors anymore. Just use metaphors appropriately. If you use them too much, readers will feel so comfortable. OUQ 10. "Then, after going round and round, the project was completed, and the name is still in use today, but the person can no longer belong to him." Delete the "ah"... It's too happy, it should be a sad story. 11. "The memories of the past flooded into her mind in an instant, like a spark that suddenly stopped, or a hurricane that burst out suddenly. She suddenly understood that the original five years were nothing in front of a deep relationship." It is still a question of metaphor. Online novels focus on the readability of the plot, and too much description will be counterproductive. [In fact, the problems described in the following articles are relatively few and almost none, so they are not summarized above. To sum up, there are too many descriptions, especially the metaphors, which are very cumbersome and cumbersome. It might be much better after deleting them. And sometimes I feel a bit like Su Wen, but sometimes I feel it's pretty good. ╮(￣▽￣")╭ ] About the plot: The plot is not bad, from the initial meeting to the final marriage, it is a very sweet story. No more suggestions. Finally Now that Wenwen is finished, I won't ask for updates~ Well, I hope the author will attract more readers~ Dafa BY___good products&somepian

Honestly, I love stories like this. As mentioned in my title, this is the story of being tipsy. People who read it feel as if they have drunk a little red wine, and their minds are soaked with a faint fragrance. Life is already tiring, so don't let novels torture us anymore. Haha, so, I always like this kind of loving articles, it really hit home for me. By the way, how did the author come up with so many heartwarming scenes? I really like the dull feeling of the heroine, and the male protagonist is the kind of person who should be gentle and gentle, and should be sinister. I really like it! There are also various scenes in the extras! Regarding what I said about seeing other people kissing, I really feel the same way, do you? Also, I hope to see such heart-warming stories in the future! Come on! I always feel that Hu Mo is the kind of Prince Charming image we expect. Gentle, elegant, deep and rich. Ah! In short, it was completely ruined. The author has buried a lot of foreshadowing, so it doesn't look so monotonous, haha! The only dissatisfaction is that the text is a bit short. Well, will you write a side story about Zhou Qinbai and Agnes? I'm looking forward to it!

It's very loving, not so much about love, hate, life, separation and death. It's refreshing and fans like it~