The Struggles of a Female Chancellor

That... I can't help but want to say a few words. Lan writes very hard. It can be seen that he has persisted for so long and is still writing now. But I read the articles written by Lan and found that your style and writing level have remained unchanged from 2011 to 2013. I don't know if Lan will read articles written by others. In fact, reading articles written by others will be of great help to you. In particular, I mentioned the issue of "just saying". It will appear in almost every paragraph of your speech. It appears a lot in a paragraph and it feels like you are copying and pasting. I don't write well either, I just want to raise questions and encourage Lan Lai. Lan might as well try to write about only one person in a paragraph. Add some actions before or after the words. Sometimes the word "said" does not appear and is connected directly with actions; sometimes "so-and-so said:" is placed in front to make the words more varied. Write only what one person said in each paragraph. Try using some other punctuation marks. This makes the article more readable. Well, actually my job is as a magazine editor. I often revise articles. I'm a bit verbose. Sorry...

This, this "just said" seems a bit much... The author might as well not use the word "said." Directly express the dialogue you want to say one by one, and then add some small movements or expressions to make it look better.

When are you going to wear it? . . It's been a long time. .

Yo, yo, I confessed. I don't know how the story will develop next~ Please don't give up.

This joke is funny~ I will try it in the future~ Haha, there are so many people appearing in the second chapter, are they cannon fodder?

Traveling through time and space? Liu Tao time travel or Jue time travel? Looking forward to it

The subject matter of the article is good, and I look forward to its subsequent development.