A Modern Spinster's Guide to Marriage

There are too many different ways. The author should give more descriptions of his expressions and inner activities instead of just writing this and that. Sweat, I'm here to find fault, I hope the author doesn't mind.

Very well thought out The expression is a little lackluster It feels like progress is going too fast Come on, author

The more I look at the heroine, the more I think she's an idiot and doesn't understand.

Spread some flowers first, keep up the good work

Please comment on me. You can tell me what is bad and what I can improve. Thank you very much!

Fatten the party and come to the bird. . Sister Lan Yi↖(^ω^)↗

By the way, author, the order of your words seems a bit strange to me. I don't know how to say it, let me show it to you. For example: 1. "Thank you, Auntie." Mo Yu quickly said gratefully, "Thank you for everything. You can also wear these undershirts." Aunt Zhao said. "Thank you!" Mo Yu said gratefully, "Don't be so polite. These are from when I was young and I can't wear them anymore." Aunt Zhao said quickly. Mo Yu thanked her and went to change clothes. [The dialogue between double quotes... Is too tight. 2. "Little lady, we're here." Just when Mo Yu was too tired to walk, Zhao Erniu finally said. Mo Yu couldn't help but feel happy and quickly looked up. There was a village not far ahead of them, with only about a dozen households. [The two paragraphs above are obviously different. It is better to read the second paragraph that way. The dialogue is not all packed together, but rather descriptive. The dialogue at the beginning of the paragraph can generally be followed by a description of the character's appearance or changes in expression, or a description of the surrounding environment, which is richer...] Well, if you feel something is wrong, you can ignore it. I like the setting of the article very much, I will read it, I just want to give my opinion, that would be better. The author can look at others.