(Bakuman) A Love That Lasts

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The word "sound and color" is really wonderful!

Did you beat your wife on purpose in the end?

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… Is it third person or first person QAQ and then it feels like there are too many dialogues QAQ come on!

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A certain glutinous rice dumpling that was about to start crawling and crawling... Fell back into the hole again. Ahem, just kidding, although Mr. Tangyuan expressed that he really doesn't want to start school, he still has to face reality, so let's get to the point. At first glance at the title of the 19th National Congress of the Communist Party of China, Tangyuan immediately classified it as a literary and artistic title. But I have to say that although the title... Is very literary, I still didn't understand it. Maybe it's about the freshness of two children staying together for a long time? With such doubts, I looked at the copywriting. The normal copywriting is a short excerpt of a conversation, talking about the daily life of love between Xiaojiu and Eiji. The literary copywriting is also very beautiful, but if I have to evaluate it, maybe I will support the first one. Well, personal preferences are different, so don't worry about it. The big beginning is very interesting. Tangyuan likes this kind of opening scene very much: intercepting a very small fragment of life and processing it, and magnifying it in front of the reader. The effect is better than reading the article at the beginning (the person enters the online game mode), bah! It is much better and more acceptable to narrate a large section of the background at the beginning. But some people also think that it is not necessary to introduce the characters at the beginning, but to express a person's identity and background by depicting the details of the characters. This depends on the author~ The details of the language, demeanor, and movements of the characters in the author's article can vividly portray the details of a person. From the large text, the characters of Eiji and Ajiu can be clearly seen - Eiji is very cheerful, and Ajiu is a calm and stable good boy ~ Such a personality Ge is always very loving - at least Tang Yuan. I don't like both of them to be calm~ Don't you think the atmosphere is too depressing? I also don't like both of them to be cheerful~ (This person has been beaten to death) What kind of atmosphere is it to prevent the world from being chaotic? So a complementary personality would be better, ahem, it's purely a personal opinion. Then the glutinous rice balls were rolling along with the plot. When I saw "Sixth Ward Jiu got up at three o'clock and looked at the game screen. He was secretly calculating how much money he made this month", I thought about it and went back ~ Look at Ajiu's age - 11 years old... Orz. Big, an 11-year-old child makes money from computer games~ I admit that the facts can be exaggerated in the novel, but... This is too exaggerated - Eiji debuted at the age of 15, and before his debut, his home was remote - that is to say, Xiaojiu's home is remote... I can't make up my mind. Then, Tangyuan, whose face was filled with blood, continued to scroll down the screen - well, the interaction between Eiji and Ajiu was quite loving - but what happened to "Dear"?! The two of them are childhood sweethearts and childhood sweethearts (?) And are very sticky (...) I can understand that their families are close to each other, but I always feel that - an 11-year-old child is a little speechless when he says this (I am blown away by pia~)... Am I too out of the world? I didn't even react yet, and then——the Iron Man Advent appeared. Emma, ​​could it be that I am on the wrong CP? That's not right - isn't the CP in the copywriting solid? Could it be the second male lead? I have to say that I have done a good job in this area. The novel - it should have the feeling of "there is no way out after mountains and rivers, and there is another village with dark flowers and dark flowers" (I am so happy that I used a poem here~). As an author, you should let readers have this kind of roller coaster ride~ However - there are still some small flaws in this place~ Tangyuan looked at the 9898 and silently counted the strokes - and found out that it was a Chinese stroke... Shouldn't the background of the story be Japan? Is this also 9898 in Japanese? Can't understand... But me! Hair! Now! Xiaojiu's daily life is so loving! From Da Da's writing style, I almost saw another version of myself appearing in the article "You are enough", and Da Da Da's paragraphing is also very powerful. I was a little sad when I saw the graduation part... The author's atmosphere rendering is quite good! It's just——Why do I change my pronouns whenever I want? Either use Ajiu's first person voice at the beginning, or use third person voice throughout the whole story - otherwise it will read very strangely like this! And - when I saw the new wife's mother's side, I sprayed coke all over the screen, okay? I almost thought my new wife had changed her gender~ I can only say that my ability to understand is still lacking~ When I saw Ajiu realize that he likes Eiji, I suddenly realized that this guy is actually a natural idiot. He appears to be smart, calm and capable, and his emotional intelligence is at the first level - poor ~ ahem, actually this is normal... No one is perfect and things like this are much better than YY novels. Well, good job! But Eiji knows! Hahaha, there must be something shady between the two [you are enough] What if they both have low emotional intelligence? Let's serve it cold! Feelings are a matter between two people. If neither of them can realize how far apart the world is, forget it! Well, I'm here to support you~ Seeing this, I like Eiji more and more, what should I do [face covering], no matter what, please continue to work hard~ I will be behind you [are you the spirit behind it] to support you, I love you~ Wochao Changping Shop [Tangyuan] Produced by

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The writing is great! Keep up the good work, author, and stop being fooled!