Link to my new book:
Huh? What’s going on? Weren’t you supposed to take my soul? How did I suddenly get reborn in another world again? And it’s the world of Hunters, of all places! Wait, I’ve even become the Zoldyck family’s child bride... What a life full of misfortune!
I finally finished my exams. Starting today, I’ll do my best to update regularly!
Remember to rate the book when you read it! P.S. You have to leave me at least five words, or the System won’t count it.
Thanks, everyone! I hope you enjoy my book.
I tried to find a picture of the heroine online. It’s a photo of an SD doll, so it’s not quite the same. Just use your imagination!
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So beautiful! 0.0 Keep up the good work!
The writing is good, but the description of the characters' emotions is terrible. After seeing the heroine's actions, I felt a sense of disgust in my heart. I want this and that. I hate heartthrobs the most. But giving up hatred is a very wise move, applause. But that stubborn and unrealistic feeling of wanting to protect Kurapika made people very uncomfortable. You may need to describe the psychology of the characters in more detail. Hunters are a dangerous world. Betrayal exists from the beginning. People in Meteor Street should not have feelings of blood ties.
The writing is good, but I personally feel that Yi Mi's character deviation is a bit too big, and she doesn't look like someone who will fall in love at first sight. Of course, this is just a personal feeling.
Take it away~~~Keep working hard~~
Well, to be honest, the picture I found of the heroine really looks like the heroine in "Rose Girl"!
Pack up the bird and take it away
It's very beautiful. I'm looking forward to your new works.
The writing is really good. Come on!!!
Why does the system say I didn't get a score even though I clearly got a score? It's really weird??
I really want to continue reading