[Harry Potter] Lance Potter

I have read an article about Harley's sex change before, and the cp arrangement is so reasonable that I can't refute it - Cedric

When I opened this article, I didn't expect that I would like it so much. At the beginning, I thought it was quite ordinary, both in terms of writing and plot. But the more I read the more I became more and more fascinated, it can be said that it is a success. There is no doubt that the plot of this article is impeccable. Anyone who loves HP will be moved by the fact that it continues and details the world view and values ​​of HP. Whether it is the main protagonist or the small characters, every detail is described in detail. The theme of love and courage in the original novel is also the only one that I have read in HP fan fiction that has been written seriously. It is a complete and heart-stirring novel. It can be seen that the author really put a lot of effort into the plot structure. The plot of this article progresses probably on the eve of the war, about 80% of the way through, when we arduously walk through the deepest part of the eternal night and rush to the morning sun. It is an eternal regret that we did not see the ending. However, fortunately, the plot also leaves a trace of hope for people to imagine. On the emotional line, Rand CP's emotional concentration is very, very, very high. It is very crazy and has a two-way emotional line. Although the emotional line certainly does not account for more than 30% of the entire article, I really enjoyed the whole process. The incarnation was super Super happy cp brain, leaving aside the plot, the relationship between the two is very sweet. It can be said that they are completely cruel and steadfast. They are a match made in heaven. They are sweet and easy to make love. I kind of forget the last time they had such a good time. In terms of character, Gong Lance is a first-rate character who has a spiritual sense of age, superiority, chaotic neutrality, internal self-interest and self-preservation, external rational sage, and strong dom control both internally and externally. The handsome Su Qiang is simply promax, and one of the top 3 Gongsu I have seen. Even though it was mentioned briefly in the article that he was a month younger than Draco, I couldn't bear it. I pretended to be blind. I couldn't tell if I didn't read this sentence! He's only the same age for only one month! Even when he was severely tortured in the plot, he was completely handsome, strong and miserable without losing any sense of sophistication. Moreover, Lance's way of pampering his wife is even more delicious. This kind of pampering is bottomless doting, but at the same time, he completely puts her in a lower position, takes her under his wings to protect her, and is completely self-centered. It seems that he is not respectful enough or equal. For the Malfoy family, which has a legitimate hatred, Lance kidnapped Draco so early that his father-in-law's family had to hold their noses and cooperate with him. He cruelly forced Draco to choose him completely, preferring to break away from the family and put his lover above his family. However, because Draco gave up revenge on the Malfoy family so easily, he made this option that was not fair to other supporting characters. I really like this kind of emotional line that seems immoral but crazy enough. The upper and lower positions are really good. One is willing to fight and the other is willing to suffer. Draco knows clearly what Lance does behind his back and how bad he is, but he is just a lover. Seeing how much control Lance has over him, his own desire for exclusivity is also satisfied to death. Although Draco's character is obviously OOC from the original, I admit that it is a match made in heaven and it makes me happy. I was very happy to read this novel in the first half. The plot of the protagonist went smoothly, and the emotional line was almost a slapstick and awkward love story. The subsequent plot started to be abusive, and the protagonist and supporting characters were tortured very miserably. I didn't hate Voldemort that much when I read the original novel, but the author did write it very well. My heart kept shaking while reading it. Near the end, the protagonist group finally ushered in the stage of taking off. Lance's plot was ruthless, hateful, handsome and strong, but at this stage the author gave up. I will always regret it... No matter what the teacher chooses, I will always wait for this article. I will put it in my favorite favorites and wait for news one day.

It can be said that this article... Completely hammered me into the world view of Malfoy and I couldn't get out. Unfortunately, when I read it, I found 200+. I thought it was finished and it was still a free article. I jumped in at once. It wasn't until I finished reading the last chapter that I realized that it was a broken chapter. (╥_╥), The author is great and I will always wait for you to come back [Bi Xin]

This is my first time commenting in Jinjiang. I didn't even find the comment entry at first. Alas... I really like this article. I remember the first time I read this article was in 2023. It has been three years now. I have read it three times intermittently in the past three years. This is also the first time I have read an article so many times. I put it in my memo and never want to forget it. Now I've started reading it again... Actually, I don't want to read it so many times. I'm afraid I'll get tired of reading it too much, but I'm also afraid of getting tired of reading it. This article is so good, so I almost forget about it every time before reading it... I really like it. I have always felt that the emotional line is very good. Lance is not a good person in the popular sense. He has a dark side and is a complex character like Draco. Because of this, their feelings must be complicated and entangled with each other. I still remember the first time I read the confession between Lance and Pansy, I was very shocked that Lance was so scheming and so confident, and Draco's monologue later. It turned out that he was attracted to Lance from the beginning. It's like the lid goes with the pot. They are both very confident and confident in their own importance in each other's hearts. They are both indispensable to each other. I like it so much... I also like the character of Lance very much. He is not as enigmatic as other books, but a character who grows up with a boyish spirit. He has things to fear and things to love. He divides his love between Snape, Harry and Draco. I hope he can love himself more... So many people who love Lance, including me, hope that he can be happy. At the end of this comment, should I also say that it doesn't matter if the teacher writes or not, happiness is the best, but this is a bit difficult... I secretly hope that the teacher can come back and finish it (but being happy in this life is not inconsistent with finishing it), I still want to see Lance's ending, a complete ending that belongs to him and Draco, and I also hope that the teacher can Bring an end to this article that you have put a lot of effort into, but I still hope that the teacher really wanted to come back and write it. Which is better, a bad established ending or an unfinished ending... I really hope that the teacher can end it with a perfect ending... Lance and Draco are really suffering... I really hope they can be happy... It doesn't matter, I will always wait for you, teacher. No matter how many years, I will keep it in my memo and never forget it... Until one day Chapter 271 (But teacher, please don't be burdened [please])

Teacher, I have been waiting for that possibility. [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] This book has been with me for a long time. I have read it countless times but I am still obsessed with every character. This is a book with flesh and blood. I don't think it is not suitable for now [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] I will have no regrets if I can see the update in my lifetime. . . [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] Really, I came back to read after a break [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] I miss the teacher and everyone in the book [Crying] [Crying] [Crying]

This article has been collected for 80,000 yuan. Oh, if it reaches 100,000 yuan, will the teacher consider coming back to fill in the gaps? I also agree with the annual update.

When I read the original book, I didn't understand how Ginny fell in love with Harry, but I figured it out when I watched the second "Chamber of Secrets" movie... You, an eleven-year-old girl, were troubled by strange things. One day, you were even taken away by a giant monster. You fainted in extreme panic... .. When you wake up: Ha·Lee, the popular figure on campus·the protagonist of the story you have heard since you were a child, is sitting next to you, looking embarrassed but handsome (Harry in the Chamber of Secrets was really handsome at that time, and his appearance was at the peak of his appearance in Azkaban). You suddenly realize that it was your idol who saved you. God, how can you not fall in love with this?

It's been four years and I still can't let you go [crying] [crying] [crying] My HP is a masterpiece

The article stopped here, and I couldn't help but think about Lance 3.0, Which failed to appear, and how Lance would gather forces to defeat Voldemort and reorganize the Ministry of Magic. From the campus life at Hogwarts to the transformation and rebirth of the entire magical world, it is a pity that this picture cannot be a complete picture. I do not agree with the author that this novel is out of date. The foundation of the classic work and the wonderful ideas will live forever. It may just no longer fit in today's increasingly single and demanding literary environment, but I also understand the author's distress and choice. Best wishes to the author, and best wishes to all the characters I love in this HP world!

Although comments are useless now, I still want to say, don't bl sub-cp. It's fine to stick to the original work or just don't write cp. Bl sub-cp is too terrible.