
The Biography of Empress Dowager Fu
符氏皇太后传
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Well, the introduction, can it be simpler, don't give out so many spoilers, make the page cleaner, don't crowd the words, at least make the font bigger, don't make people dizzy, and there is this kind of story that makes people know the ending as soon as they read the introduction, and it is also a romance story, pure chat and pure sleep, Qingshui palace abuse story, it is ambiguous, and it whets the appetite, and sticks to the bottom line in the end, it makes people feel depressed! Don't leave the male protagonist dead, leaving only the female protagonist in the tragic story. This makes people feel that life is hopeless and they will die lonely! Is there any! Even if you are going to die, don't tell the readers. This will reduce the readers' interest in reading the article. Well, this is purely a reader's tendency to choose the articles they read. Except for readers who specifically want to read this kind of article, I don't think there are many such people!
Damn, can you change the writing style? For example, writing in the third person can not only expand your horizons to read and understand the text, but also avoid the suspicion of talking to yourself, and make everyone in the text more vivid. If the whole text is always written around one perspective, it seems too self-centered. Sometimes you should let others understand the person's personality and behavior.
Big, come on! ! !