How to Take Down the Boss

So cheating. . . What about the ending? I still quite like Hades. .

It's very interesting. I didn't watch it because I had something to do the past two days. I didn't expect that it would be over when I came back. I couldn't bear to let it go!

The side story has nothing to do with the main text, so I didn't write it long. It was originally just to prevent theft, and I didn't think about any plot. I just wrote it here to cheat money. So that's it for now, thank you girls for your support. In addition, if a girl who is a mobile phone addict buys it by mistake, she can leave a zero rating here, leave her reader number and purchase date, and the scumbag author will give a full refund.

The ending was a bit rushed, and the annoying scumbags didn't all get their comeuppance. I was unhappy. . . .

Still have to say, it's not satisfying.

I'm sorry to the author, Diandian, for delaying the order for two days. My mother banned me from the Internet because I failed in the exam. The ban was just lifted. I asked the author to give me a gentle spanking. The following is a serious review, perhaps a bit venomous. This is just one family's opinion, please refer to it at the author's discretion. In the first chapter of this article, Shui Qingqian's appearance was a bit shocking. From Diandian's point of view, the protagonist's appearance is extremely unpleasant: the arrogant guest who was splashed with water is annoying, but Shui Qingqian was not present when the incident happened, and he chose to throw money at him based on Xiaowu's words... For example, when he went out to eat and was poured water all over his body by the waiter, the manager came and sneered at the two thousand yuan thrown at him without asking the reason. Diandian felt that no one would be happy. The article also said that this was not the first time that Xiao Liu made a mistake. At the same time, Shui Qingqian [his sweetheart was seriously injured and unconscious, and coupled with dissatisfaction with desire and pursuit, Shui Qingqian was in an extremely bad mood at this time, and this woman happened to bump into him without knowing her life or death]. This is a typical example of venting anger on strangers. Later, Miss Liu became angry and took action first. The protagonist, as a man, beat the little girl to bleed... In this one scene alone, Diandian doesn't have a particularly good impression of Shui Qingqian. An arrogant protagonist is not necessarily annoying, but an arrogant and unreasonable protagonist is really distressing. Read on, Chapter 3. The character on the scene is still the unlucky guest who was splashed with water while eating, and the scene is about eating bugs in the meal. Diandian remembers that in the author's setting, Nangong Yao, Qian Lian, and Liu Shuiying are not poor people. The clothes Liu Shuiying wore that were mixed with ice silk were obviously not cheap either. Since these three people are not short of money, why is there such a thing as "fake gold"? And because of this "fake gold", this incident was superficially resolved. But in fact, Shui Qingqian did not provide any evidence or explanation at all that "the insects in the food did not come from our store, but you put them in." There is no direct causal connection between "the gold in your hands is fake" and "the bugs in the food are not from our store". They are simply superficial exchanges of concepts... If Liu Shuiying was the one who put the bug in the food, then it must have been done in front of Nangong Yao and Qian Lian, which meant that the three of them came to ruin the place on purpose. But until the three people left, neither Nangong Yao nor Qian Lian said a word to Liu Shui Ying, and even [Qian Lian reached out to hold Liu Shui Ying], which was completely a disservice! ——It's worth mentioning here that Qian Lian's setting is a white lotus, which means she definitely can't stand the scene where Liu Shuiying falsely accuses Shui Qing Qian. If you think about it this way, did Liu Shuiying not put the worms in the vegetables but that there were worms in the vegetables? There are so many inconsistencies between the setting of the scene and the setting of the characters, and the whole plot is completely wrong. In addition to the contradiction between the scene and the characters, there is also the contradiction in the author's girl's choice of words. It's also the third chapter, [He is in a good mood today, so he won't argue with them, but it's really not his style to let them go like this...] This sentence is completely inconsistent. It doesn't mean that if there is a transition word, the first half of the sentence can be regarded as unsaid. It would be more fluent if the first half of the sentence was changed to "I don't want to argue with them." Such mismatched sentences and scenes are everywhere in the article. The use of words and the combination of related words are embarrassing. Here are some examples: Chapter 6 [He is not a good person, and he will not have any thoughts of having his own laws to decide anything. If it is really Lin Ruosheng's fault, he will just watch him die and stand aside] - The contradiction between "he is not a good person" and "if it is his fault, let him die". Chapter 7 [He glanced at Shui Qingqian. This person looked soft and frail, but he was actually a master. —— "Weak and weak" and "is a master" are transitional relationships, and the context of using "ye" is wrong. Chapter 9 [Natural is manipulated by others, often using injured people as bait; plus the three of them are always together, naturally it is very easy to be exposed] - Two "natural" in the same sentence, repeated words, easy to make people feel that the language is lacking (this situation will naturally occur when writing articles, many author girls will have this problem, it will be better to read it after writing and change the repeated words into other synonyms). Chapter 35 [Ye Yuqing walked over and pulled up his shirt, "Ye Yuling, look at it, how did I get all this?"] - The word "this" is a pronoun, and the subject of this pronoun cannot be found in the context. These are all problems with wording, and there are many more to come, so I won't list them all yet. The use of language is not a big problem. The author just needs to read it once and pay more attention to it. Later, I will talk about the little things that the author forgot about after writing and the contradictions that arise in the subsequent text, the design of the scene, and many unreasonable things. Chapter 3 [In the space ring—the ring is not big, and it can hold a lot of small things. At least you don't need to bring luggage or anything with you every time you go out]—Later (I remember it was in Chapter 27), classmate Shui Qingqian stuffed five beds into this "not big" space ring... Chapter 25 [If you don't love Shui Qingqian, just make it clear and I guarantee that Shui Qingqian won't pester you] - Where is it that I'm not pestering you? Chapter 27 [The flames on his wrists became even hotter because the food was so close but could not be eaten. Ye Yuling could only suppress the flames with all his strength without letting Shui Qingqian see anything, otherwise Shui Qingqian's character would definitely destroy the Xuanbing flames immediately, but he couldn't bear it. Besides, he is the master of the Black Ice Flame, isn't he? If he can't control the flames, what's the point of being a master? If it really comes to that point, he would rather destroy the Xuan Bing Flame. As for other things, he would rather go to Shui Qingqian for help - Shui Qingqian will not harm him. ——The cramming of related words in this psychological description will not be explained in detail. The content... Ye Yuling had just made Shui Qingqian realize that "he and I are equal and do not need my protection." Later, he immediately regarded Shui Qingqian as a place of refuge, with a contradictory mentality. The same is Chapter 27 [When he was a child, he always envied other children eating snacks, but unfortunately he had never eaten them. When he grew up, he didn't want to eat them either. ——Please don't be like this. The desserts made by your Xiaogong are also snacks, and they are obviously very enjoyable to eat. Chapter 35 [Speaking of which, Ye Yu Ling knew these three people, but these three people did not know him - Ye Yu Ling only knew their names and had never met these three people. ——Ye Yu Ling had seen their... He had met Nangong Yao and Qian Lian when they were picking Sulianhua. Shui Qingqian even made Ye Yu Ling jealous when she carried Huang Lianhan back. Furthermore, there were no video cameras in this era. How would you know someone if you had never seen them before? Forty-six [The momentum of both sides was not low. They were confronting each other. They obviously did not use their spiritual power, but the stone benches and tables in the small pavilion soon shattered into powder and disappeared into the air] - It seemed that they even made the people in the underworld vomit blood? Wouldn't it be possible to kill people with momentum? Diandian just realized that this is a stream of consciousness novel, and I'm looking for a worldview... Chapter 49 Shui Qingqian's father said four sentences in total, three of which were: I'm very happy to see you. [I am very happy to be able to see you before disappearing. I'm really happy that I can see you before I die. ——Unable to complain. Chapter 50 [Father is the first person to live forever] [Ming Lingzheng had a lover at that time, named Ruo Xueling. Her mother gave her her father's immortal body, and she became the first immortal person. [My father died, just in front of me, and Ming Lingzheng also became an immortal. [Coupled with the matter of immortality, her body began to age rapidly, but she would not die and would live forever. Four contradictions in four sentences in the same chapter: 1. The first and second sentences are two "first" people. 2. Since Shui Qingqian's father has been taken away from his immortality, why can he live for another hundred years and then be deceived by Ming Lingzheng? 3. Shui Qingqian's father's immortality has been taken away, so why can Ming Lingzheng still obtain immortality through him? Could it be that Shui Qingqian's father is Tang Seng? If you eat a piece of meat, you will never grow old or die... 4. The punishment for a person who obtains "immortality and immortality" is "only old age and immortality", which is a contradiction. I didn't read all of Chapter V of the article by the author girl, so I skipped to buy V to read it (Jita rules do not read pirated articles). If there are any areas where the review is not adequate, please point it out, and I sincerely apologize. Although there are some dissonances in the plot arrangement and world setting, it is generally very interesting. However, the girl's writing style is still polished. I wonder if any readers have said that the girl's writing looks a little awkward. In addition to the problems pointed out above, the girl also lacks her own writing style. Many of the sentences used by the author in the article are very traditional, that is, the same sentence patterns can be seen in many other novels, especially when the author writes psychological descriptions and dialogues. I don't know if the author girl took it for granted after reading too many articles. This situation is very common in the early stages of writing. But when I checked into the author's column, I found that the author had already written a lot of articles. Is it possible to basically write in the girl's own unique style of writing again, making people feel like "Ah, this article is written by XX at a glance!" In addition: Although the title of the novel is BOSS, but after reading it, I didn't feel that Xiao Shou was the original BOSS. And the names of the people in the article... A little bit shows that no one except the protagonist remembers them. At first, I could still remember key words, such as "Yu" and "Ye". Later, when there were more characters, there were more "Yu" and "Ye", and it became completely confusing. The name doesn't just need to look good and be put together... Well, this review is a bit venomous, girl, bear with it! Diandian ran away holding the pot lid. PS. Congratulations on finishing spreading flowers! ★,°:. ☆\ (￣▽￣)/$:. °★. Attack Wenji Pagoda|ChangpingpubyEarly West Point 2013.07.11

Can you say that I actually hope that Pluto thing dies?

Hello, author girl, this is Tanzi, the secretary of Jita Review Shop, and I'm about to comment. Hmm... The girl can go to the store first and get a review before deciding whether to post it below. It showed that she was very uneasy. She was holding the lid of the pot and looking at Nai pitifully [Hey...]

... This is too fast! Not satisfied yet

Brother Ye's brother is really complicated.