130 Ways I'm Flirting with Him [Reborn in the Stars]

It's not bad, and I feel it's an improvement over the previous one. The writing is very interesting. After reading the author's two articles, I feel that the rhythm is very good, the plot is interesting, the narration is clear, and it can fill in all the pitfalls very well. This is the article I read recently where both logic and IQ are online, haha. However, the author's writing of the big and small strategies is very good, but the overall view is still a little bit worse, and the description of the big scenes is also a little bit worse. For example, when it comes to case trials, social order, and international relations, let alone the interstellar level, there is always something specious. So I feel that the brain is sufficient, but the layout is still a little lacking. I hope the author can add more social experience, such as understanding some judicial knowledge, watching American TV series like House of Cards, and analyzing ancient and modern classic battles when writing about war. I guess you have read The Legend of Galaxy Heroes. Although Silver Mile does not have a long description of politicians, there are many side descriptions. For example, various constraints are everywhere, and Mr. Tian is very powerful in writing. So if you don't have such strong writing power, you still need some positive descriptions, otherwise if you just pass it by, it will really have no sense of existence... Anyway, except for the appointment of star generals, the whole story gave me the feeling that the entire galaxy is in a state of anarchy. People can catch, kill, play, occupy, and do whatever they want to another galaxy... Emmmm, it's not very scientific, really. By the way, I still need to supplement my knowledge of economics. I feel that Ke Junjun is completely a private army. Do you know how expensive it is to raise an army... Where does the money come from to support a massive army? You can just change the clothes. If you don't rely on tax subsidies, where is the source of the income... This can't be achieved by taking some shares in some institutional companies or mining one or two energy stars. For example, is Dad Ma rich? Look at how much our military expenditure is for the whole year, which is hundreds of millions. Let Dad Ma try raising one? Not to mention that it all goes to Ma's father, if he only raises a fully-organized special forces, he will be poor in minutes... After all, the so-called "wealth" is not entirely cash, but also a large amount of stocks, movables and real estate... Well, some people may say that I am too rigorous. Of course, I did not ask the author to calculate everything in detail, or to spend a lot of time writing about it. But I always hope that the author can think more and write more realistically. Some problems only need to be briefly passed, but it adds a lot of realism out of thin air, making it easier for people to be immersed in the situation. Overall, this article is already very well written. I just want to make some small suggestions. I wish you can write well in the future and get better and better!

The second episode is finished ~ This time I think it ended a bit suddenly, but when I think about it, it's really all explained.

I want to see more extras! ^_^

Then why didn't the heroine discover that the president was a robot?

Spread flowers~ I like this idea very much, it's very beautiful! !

Let's talk about heroes over wine, and the overlord will come from my generation. One represents my true love that will last forever!

Little Jiujiu is really a winner among insects

Why didn't you have a baby?,?^?,,

Congratulations on the completion! ! Spread the flowers, spread the flowers, spread the flowers

Extra extra! Remember to take care of your baby