The first time Xiao Longnu saw her, she was a fifteen-year-old girl. Her faint smile moved Xiao Longnu's heart.
The second time they met, her beauty was breathtaking, and the gentle sound of her flute drew Xiao Longnu in.
The third time they met, she wept until the world seemed to fall apart. Xiao Longnu's heart ached, and she swore to protect her from then on.
After reading a few Condor Heroes fanfics where Sister Long was always the bottom, I thought it over and decided to make Sister Long the top.
The heroine of this story is an amnesiac transmigrator who doesn't know martial arts. She's definitely not powerful, and aside from Sister Long, she won't take anything away from the Yang brothers.
Since someone said the heroine is a Mary Sue, ╮(╯_╰)╭, I'll do the responsible thing and advise everyone to read with caution! Read with caution! Read with caution!
Also, if there's anything you don't like, for the sake of a healthy online environment, please don't make personal attacks when you complain.
Theme: Perseverance is fine, but obsession is not.
I finished reading it in one go, and I just want to say that in fact, the little dragon girl on TV should fall in love with a woman like this, but Master Jin Yong arranged a Yang Guo for him, so we can't see the other side of Long Er. Yu in the article is indeed a good match for Long Er! Hmm, nice looking. . .
Haha, although it's a bit unkind, I still want to say: Well done!
The two great descendants of the Ancient Tomb Sect are both from the bottom. It's so sad.
I write this kind of article just to disgust people. It's really a spoof. Please be careful if you haven't read it. I couldn't watch it without reading. All kinds of dog blood, cow blood, sheep blood, pig blood, chicken blood, duck blood, blood! Blood! Blood! Be careful, be careful, be careful, say important things three times.
Good-looking, Long Er is so domineering and handsome.
I finished reading it in one go, and I feel that the author wrote it very carefully. Although some places are a bit abrupt, the flaws are not concealed, and the overall article is still very good~
Huhu, it looks good
I just want to say, don't finish the article so quickly! ! ! I also want a side story
Spread flowers~ It's hard work!
Some things, one mistake, everything is missing. In the original novel, Xiao Longnu made a 16-year agreement in order for Yang Guo to survive. Sixteen years later, when Yang Guo discovers that everything is false, how desperate will he be? How depressed should it be?
Her lover has been dead for sixteen years, but she has been living quietly for sixteen years. If Yang Guo is replaced by Xiao Longnu herself, and Xiao Longnu is deceived by Yang Guo's sixteen-year promise and suffers from sixteen years of lovesickness, but in the end she finds that Yang Guo has died, what should she do?
Fortunately, the two can meet each other in the original work, but how can everything in the world be as perfect as expected? Or, if you unknowingly hurt someone's heart, how could that be what you wanted?
Some people sacrifice themselves to protect their loved ones; even if they keep their loved ones safe, they don't know that that is not what their loved ones want. He or she just wants to live and die together, to die in the same year, the same month, and the same day, that's all. . .
Xiaoyou regretted it, but according to the general plot arrangement, how could the two get back together so quickly? I'm afraid this is just the beginning, the beginning of the 'punishment' that Xiao You will suffer on the way to find Xiao Longnu. . .
Thirteen, you think so? Hahaha. . .
As mentioned earlier, Xiaoyou accidentally rescued Liu Yuebai indirectly, which led to a plot that was not in the original work. However, I still want to see more of the previous emotional scenes between Li and Liu, because when Li Mochou died, she was still talking about Lu Zhanyuan. Based on this speculation, Liu Yuebai, who was supposed to die, did not win Li Mochou's heart at that time, but met Li Mochou after being indirectly rescued by Xiaoyou, and fell in love again. . .
I hope Thirteen can arrange the relationship between Li and Liu in a more reasonable way, so as to avoid the preface being incorrect and the sequel not being consistent with the original work, which would be bad. . .
Finally, I still hope that Thirteen's thoughts will flow freely and his writing will be like a god, and I look forward to his masterpiece. . .
I finished reading it in one go, and I just want to say that in fact, the little dragon girl on TV should fall in love with a woman like this, but Master Jin Yong arranged a Yang Guo for him, so we can't see the other side of Long Er. Yu in the article is indeed a good match for Long Er! Hmm, nice looking. . .
Haha, although it's a bit unkind, I still want to say: Well done!
The two great descendants of the Ancient Tomb Sect are both from the bottom. It's so sad.
I write this kind of article just to disgust people. It's really a spoof. Please be careful if you haven't read it. I couldn't watch it without reading. All kinds of dog blood, cow blood, sheep blood, pig blood, chicken blood, duck blood, blood! Blood! Blood! Be careful, be careful, be careful, say important things three times.
Good-looking, Long Er is so domineering and handsome.
I finished reading it in one go, and I feel that the author wrote it very carefully. Although some places are a bit abrupt, the flaws are not concealed, and the overall article is still very good~
Huhu, it looks good
I just want to say, don't finish the article so quickly! ! ! I also want a side story
Spread flowers~ It's hard work!
Some things, one mistake, everything is missing. In the original novel, Xiao Longnu made a 16-year agreement in order for Yang Guo to survive. Sixteen years later, when Yang Guo discovers that everything is false, how desperate will he be? How depressed should it be? Her lover has been dead for sixteen years, but she has been living quietly for sixteen years. If Yang Guo is replaced by Xiao Longnu herself, and Xiao Longnu is deceived by Yang Guo's sixteen-year promise and suffers from sixteen years of lovesickness, but in the end she finds that Yang Guo has died, what should she do? Fortunately, the two can meet each other in the original work, but how can everything in the world be as perfect as expected? Or, if you unknowingly hurt someone's heart, how could that be what you wanted? Some people sacrifice themselves to protect their loved ones; even if they keep their loved ones safe, they don't know that that is not what their loved ones want. He or she just wants to live and die together, to die in the same year, the same month, and the same day, that's all. . . Xiaoyou regretted it, but according to the general plot arrangement, how could the two get back together so quickly? I'm afraid this is just the beginning, the beginning of the 'punishment' that Xiao You will suffer on the way to find Xiao Longnu. . . Thirteen, you think so? Hahaha. . . As mentioned earlier, Xiaoyou accidentally rescued Liu Yuebai indirectly, which led to a plot that was not in the original work. However, I still want to see more of the previous emotional scenes between Li and Liu, because when Li Mochou died, she was still talking about Lu Zhanyuan. Based on this speculation, Liu Yuebai, who was supposed to die, did not win Li Mochou's heart at that time, but met Li Mochou after being indirectly rescued by Xiaoyou, and fell in love again. . . I hope Thirteen can arrange the relationship between Li and Liu in a more reasonable way, so as to avoid the preface being incorrect and the sequel not being consistent with the original work, which would be bad. . . Finally, I still hope that Thirteen's thoughts will flow freely and his writing will be like a god, and I look forward to his masterpiece. . .