
Underworld: Sunshine (GL)
黑夜传说之日照(GL)
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 24k Words
- Genre
- Baihe (GL)
- Updated
- 14y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
10Chapters
83Favorites
9.0Score
2.6kClicks per chapter
5Comments
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Reader comments 4
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It's very interesting. After watching Underworld, I really like the heroine. She is very handsome, but I don't like the male protagonist very much. I really hate him. But I really like Vera here, both heroines are great. It's a pity that the article is too short. It would be better if it was longer. These are the first two parts. Skip the third part. There is also the fourth part. It would be good to let them have a child (don't worry about the two female protagonists, because I think the child of the protagonist in the movie is probably created in the laboratory using the genes of the two people. Otherwise, why does the female protagonist not know that she has a child and has never felt that she is pregnant before?), And it is also very good to continue writing. It's rare to see Underworld's Lily colleagues, what a shame!
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!
Isn't Serena very good... Selena feels a little weird...
At first it looked like a translation, but when it came to the fighting scenes it changed back, but the dialogue was still very much like a translation. I fully admit that the love between the two of them is very beautiful, but maybe it's because I don't understand it, so I feel it's a bit unnatural... Undoubtedly, Vera has been very fond of Shalian from the beginning and is very dependent on her. This can be used as a nesting plot to catch the only person who can be caught, so it is possible that this dependence will eventually turn into love. But Shalene seemed to fall in love with Vera suddenly. Although she allowed Vera to rely on her, her love was really a bit abrupt. But overall, this is a good article. The plot is very tense and the fighting scenes are also very shocking. It shows a natural momentum. Please update other articles and look forward to your new work.