
The Smiling, Proud Wanderer: The Young Deputy at Mount Song
笑傲江湖之嵩山小衙内
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 147k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Updated
- 13y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
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45Chapters
279Favorites
7.3Score
1Nutrient gifts
3.8kClicks per chapter
257Comments
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I like the protagonist very much~haha. Some time ago, I read so many articles about wives and slaves that I almost vomited. Hehe However, the protagonist always seems to have a knot in his mind. This knot seems to have existed before time travel, that is, to find someone to fall in love with and then live his life. I hope the protagonist can find someone with whom he can tolerate and like each other. Rather than someone who only allows him to be unilaterally tolerant. From this point of view, neither Lin Pingzhi nor Dongfang Invincible fit the bill. If it is Lin Pingzhi, then the protagonist is destined to tolerate and care for Lin Pingzhi, but may not be reciprocated by Lin Pingzhi, and even has to always take care of Lin Pingzhi's sensitive and delicate heart ╮(╯▽╰)╭ too tired. . . The feeling is gone. If Dongfang is undefeated, he must be cautious. . . . After all, such people have a tight string in their hearts. I look forward to the other half arranged by the author for the protagonist~ I haven't figured out who it is yet, but as one person said in the comments, he talks and laughs freely and is so heroic! This is the Swordsman~!
Before, I felt like the cp was constantly changing with every chapter I read. Now it seems that Lin Pingzhi is finally out, the cp has developed a bit towards the leader, and the plot has become a little clearer. If the leader was a cp, I feel like Linghu Chong would be cannon fodder. The author is probably hesitant. If there is a spark between the leader and the pig's feet in the future, Linghu Chong will definitely be hated by the leader, which is a bit tragic. Nowadays, the behavior pattern of pig's feet is a bit like that of a male protagonist. He talks about being an adulterer, but he can't let it go in his heart. He also takes advantage of Linghu Chong, which makes him feel a bit cheap, which is very unpleasant from a reader's perspective. The author is great. There are always many female readers of this kind of writing. She fell in love with Linghu Chong and even insulted him. She scolded Lin Pingzhi and Linghu Chong. This felt a bit like a ruffian and a gangster, which was a bit too much. It's best not to do this later. Some small suggestions and personal awkwardness, haha~
I always feel that the protagonist is there for the characters in the novel, just like playing a strategy game. There is no sense of reality at all. I hope the author can make a slight change. Now the protagonist is like eating from a bowl and looking at the pot.
I feel like there are too many articles about the leader... A bit of aesthetic fatigue... But Brother Chong and Brother Lin from the growth department are more fun~_~
Between Zuo Ting and Linghu Chong, it was probably Linghu Chong who defeated him. Linghu Chong didn't look like he was suffering.
The ending was a bit sloppy, I can't say it was a bad ending, it just seemed like the ending was sped up.
Is it over? ! I need some quiet time...
Good article, please update it.
Although I am a leader, I hope Np in a very unkind way = =
This CP is becoming more and more confusing. . .