Bringing a Manor to the Red Mansion

There is also the relationship development between Cong'er and Qixi. There is not much written about how they got together. Overall, this article is very disappointing.

The setting and description of this article are quite good. Anyway, I read it in one sitting. But as someone said before, it was obviously anticlimactic. The ending was too rushed. Although it makes people endlessly daydream, many things were not explained. It feels so regretful. Unless there is a next step, I feel that it will not continue. Even if I write a sequel, there are many foreshadowings laid in the past that cannot be detailed.

Originally this was a very attractive time travel fanfic. It started well, but after stopping for a while, it became sloppy, and it was obviously anticlimactic. Yun Shu and Jia Yun, who were heavily described before, are nowhere to be seen. When Jia Cong was assassinated, there was no explanation of who did it. In the end, the dialogue became less and less, and it was basically a hasty statement and a hasty talk, which was a pity. . .

The ending is heart-wrenching to watch. It seems that I haven't been able to live a good life. . .

It's over so soon. . But also happy. . Like one By the way, is Baoyu dead? First, Baoyu died without treatment, and then there was him in Baicao Tower?

Zhuang Sheng dreamed of butterflies? Wear it back!

The King of Beijing is much stronger than the coward Jia Baoyu. How could Sister Lin, a really talented woman, fall in love with such a weakling? !

Qixi will recover, and the Jia family will be in bad luck. They have been waiting for a long time!

Just ignore the battle with the gods, that's what stallions like at point X╮(￣▽￣\")╭ We still want to see the love between Brother Cong and Qixi. The story of Mei Xiao being rescued is very good\\(^o^)/~

Uh, this is so amazing. It's easy to outdo the master. . .