The primordial universe, a battlefield drenched in blood.
A place where countless souls have been laid to rest.
In a chaotic world, a prophecy is chanted:
The world is about to be shaken.
The place where she was born is not where she belongs.
After crossing a thousand years, will she find the answer?
Though she can see everyone's future, she cannot see her own path.
Is that a blessing or a curse?
The difference between a noble soul and a villain lies in a single thought.
So is she a goddess who will save all creation,
or a fiend who will destroy the world?
Someone murmurs through the fog:
Find the answer for yourself...
I didn't mean to, and it's not that I don't want to revise it.
But after revising a few chapters yesterday, I realized there's just too much to change.
I'll start a major revision after finishing the Xuanwu arc.
I can't keep writing this anymore~ I've started a new story~ If you're interested, go check it out.
I'll keep updating this one little by little~
WindClan? Hand trembles
Something is not right here. I think the heroine should be a very calm type of person. I think it would be better if she stayed calm.
I think the plot is a bit fast, especially the small talk part. I think it would be better to let the male protagonist stay in love for a while longer.
Not bad. Not bad. Keep up the good work~
Finally back, big TAT
Damn... Damn... When will you come back?
It's getting more and more boring later on, and it's a bit baffling~' Come on, author.
This chapter is good, I like it very much. It doesn't involve emotions, but it's still very interesting! Author's reply:
Well, it seems that you still really don't like descriptions of emotions...
"Why are you looking at me like this? What's wrong?" He stroked his haggard face with his right hand and asked softly. How long has it been? How long has it been since I saw him? It seems like a long time. Such a smooth touch makes me miss him.
I have no self-confidence. I am afraid that evil will hate me like that when he knows everything. I am afraid that I cannot bear such cruelty. I can't stand someone I love hating me. This is selfishness... I'll cut the knot quickly and end this relationship that hasn't started yet. If the final outcome is painful, I would rather end it myself than be passive again. The author replies:
Is there anything wrong with this paragraph?
Although some readers and authors may object to this, I still have to say, don't you know that people have preconceived notions? The character of the heroine is explained at the beginning, but the writing is not good enough. The heroine is written as weak and weak. Don't you know that this is very disgusting and despised by others? You are not required to write according to the original character, but you should not let us readers see the heroine's weak and incompetent performance, okay? Because of the virtue of a man becoming a human being, do you think the author has any similarities with the character you mentioned at the beginning? I'm not against having feelings, but just be normal and do it step by step, okay? To be honest, I still like this book very much. It's not bad without the emotional part, but it's very annoying when I see the emotional part. So I still give a brick to the heroine for always being like this! ! ! ! ! ! ! Author's reply:
OK, I understand, let's continue making bricks so that I can calm down and see what I want to write.
See the name? The feeling that reading your book makes me feel! Just four words that are incomprehensible! Author's reply:
Well, everyone said they were baffled when they saw this.
It will be revised after it is written.
WindClan? Hand trembles Something is not right here. I think the heroine should be a very calm type of person. I think it would be better if she stayed calm.
I think the plot is a bit fast, especially the small talk part. I think it would be better to let the male protagonist stay in love for a while longer.
Not bad. Not bad. Keep up the good work~
Finally back, big TAT
Damn... Damn... When will you come back?
It's getting more and more boring later on, and it's a bit baffling~' Come on, author.
This chapter is good, I like it very much. It doesn't involve emotions, but it's still very interesting! Author's reply: Well, it seems that you still really don't like descriptions of emotions...
"Why are you looking at me like this? What's wrong?" He stroked his haggard face with his right hand and asked softly. How long has it been? How long has it been since I saw him? It seems like a long time. Such a smooth touch makes me miss him. I have no self-confidence. I am afraid that evil will hate me like that when he knows everything. I am afraid that I cannot bear such cruelty. I can't stand someone I love hating me. This is selfishness... I'll cut the knot quickly and end this relationship that hasn't started yet. If the final outcome is painful, I would rather end it myself than be passive again. The author replies: Is there anything wrong with this paragraph?
Although some readers and authors may object to this, I still have to say, don't you know that people have preconceived notions? The character of the heroine is explained at the beginning, but the writing is not good enough. The heroine is written as weak and weak. Don't you know that this is very disgusting and despised by others? You are not required to write according to the original character, but you should not let us readers see the heroine's weak and incompetent performance, okay? Because of the virtue of a man becoming a human being, do you think the author has any similarities with the character you mentioned at the beginning? I'm not against having feelings, but just be normal and do it step by step, okay? To be honest, I still like this book very much. It's not bad without the emotional part, but it's very annoying when I see the emotional part. So I still give a brick to the heroine for always being like this! ! ! ! ! ! ! Author's reply: OK, I understand, let's continue making bricks so that I can calm down and see what I want to write.
See the name? The feeling that reading your book makes me feel! Just four words that are incomprehensible! Author's reply: Well, everyone said they were baffled when they saw this. It will be revised after it is written.