
[Western Fantasy] Forging the World
[西幻]炼世
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Haha, I like this ending, Lao Shi and Shenlan, Ansu and Shaluo... [Huh, I just stubbornly think they are not the same person]
Yeah, this dream still needs to be terminated by Ansu, right? Ajiu is so diligent today
Speaking of which, I still feel a dreamy rush to return home in April.
Ah, as soon as I saw "Your Majesty", I wondered if it was Tong En? And then, sure enough... This poor little soy sauce guy finally has his own destination? I was still thinking, who will April's husband be? After Sora's death, will she meet another person she likes again? [Please forgive me, I am April & Sola CP Party] Seeing this ending, I suddenly felt that this is a good thing, so please be happy!
I originally wanted to give Ah Jiu a long review after the article was finished, but because I was addicted to gaming, I never found the time to write it until I had a seemingly long holiday during the Qingming Festival... (I was smoked) I haven't written a long review for a long time. As always, I can't express my thoughts very well. I'll just accept it~ In fact, Western fantasy novels are a genre I rarely come into contact with, but Ah Jiu's consistent writing style made me willing to sit down and read it. It can be said that her writing style feels Japanese-style, and the description is delicate, giving people a very clean and comfortable feeling, and reading it is like a spring breeze. But it seems that for this reason, my personal emotional involvement is slightly insufficient. There doesn't seem to be too intense an emotional outpouring, and the reading has less emotional fluctuations. Of course, it may also be because I read this article intermittently. Every time I read a later article, I have to take some time to recall the content and the relationship between the characters. Otherwise, it will be a bit confusing, so I feel a little less emotional about the plot of this article. In terms of the feeling of the article, benevolent people have different opinions. As I became more and more accustomed to speed reading "shuangwen", I gradually lost the ability to read carefully, and now I am trying to slowly pick it up. Leaving aside Ah Jiu's usual good writing style and style, let's turn to the characters and plot of the article. The entry point is naturally Lelo. She is an "artificial product". She first wakes up in a state of "amnesia", then embarks on a journey, grows up, and finally becomes clear about her own existence and becomes a real "person". This article is connected by her growth experience, using "searching for memory" as a clue to guide the development of the entire article. What develops simultaneously is her "emotional awareness". In fact, as the plot of Ah Jiu unfolds, it can be gradually felt that Sarao's emotions were relatively weak at first. Later, she gradually got to know her companions, and her emotional system began to gradually improve. But on the other hand, I think the lack of emotional impact on the characters may be due to this reason. After all, although it is in the third person, the description focuses on Lelo, so naturally it focuses on expressing Lelo's emotions, which is a bit thin. Another issue is her "love". Perhaps because this article is not about romance but more about fantasy adventure, there is very little space for interaction with the male protagonist. It can be said that Orfas is the most unfamiliar male protagonist among all the novels I have read. Although he has always been entangled in my heart, the number of times he appears in front of me is very few. All I can recall about his plot are the beginning, the injuries in the middle, and the final adventure. He didn't even react when he died. [Being drawn] Since the issue of the male protagonist is brought up, let me expand on it. When I chatted with Ah Jiu before, I knew that the male protagonist was supposed to be Tong En who was forced to grow up, but in the end the plot just ran on its own and ended up with the teacher. In fact, this is probably what everyone expected. After all, the teacher is a very cute setting. From this point of view, he is in an insurmountable and transcendent position. (Embarrassed) But I personally still like him very much, because it seems that in the early stage, his personality seems to be more obvious than the teacher [= =] However, in the later stage, the teacher is gradually improving, so naturally this little prince (he is obviously a king) will not get his rose. Actually, I am a beauty lover. For example, I love the mixed-blood elves and thieves in it, so I won't talk about them one by one here. [The truth is that she is lazy] Finally, I want to complain about the ending. At first, I thought the teacher would come back after he died, but it turned out that he really died and came back as a reincarnation! I suddenly felt tired and fell out of love... Well, overall this is still a HE. Although this article is a puzzle adventure article based on the clue of "searching for memories", Ah Jiu also wanted to tell me that this article killed a lot of her brain cells, saying that my IQ was not high, so I died many times in the middle, and some foreshadowings were buried deep enough to make people feel uncomfortable, which reduced the sense of touch and the reader's desire to explore. But no matter what, I still love the growing little Zara and am willing to accompany her on adventures. I love this article and Ah Jiu the most. I also wish Ajiu to improve his handling of plots and emotions in his subsequent works and bring us more wonderful works. It seems that because my literary appreciation is becoming more and more mechanized, my emotional expression in this long review has weakened, and I no longer have the lyrical feeling of the long review back then. I don't know if Ah Jiuxi is not used to my current style, but I still hope that I can accept it. Xiao Ge will love you forever>3<
Hahaha, Julius can be so calm sometimes~ Well, I'm very curious about who April will marry. The next episode should be released soon~~
= =There is still a subtle feeling of excitement when I see Lao Shi...
= =There is a subtle feeling...
Ouch, what a wet person! ! ! That last sentence breaks my heart...
... I don't want to say anything anymore, my mood continues to be low...