
[Carved Mark Fanfic] Xiaoye Reborn
[刻痕同人]小夜重生
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 54k Words
- Genre
- Romance
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 8y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
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11Chapters
12Favorites
10.0Score
1.1kClicks per chapter
26Comments
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From a reader 12 years later Even the Blue Angel, whom I only got to know a year ago, is almost as familiar as The Undertaker. The mark... It really left a mark in my heart. Thanks to the author for his exquisite writing, it can be used as the if line of the original work. The feeling of Xiaoye here has even surpassed that of the original version. The portrayal of Xuanyun and the little girl is also deeply engraved in my heart. For Xiaoye, this is the best ending... In the past year, I have played almost all the works of Blue Angel that I can find starting from the notch. The ones that impressed me the most are Notch 1 and Black Flower and Red Goat (I got into Blue Angel from black and red. Baby Li Sha is really an angel ≥≤ ) It's a pity that I can't resonate with the three characters (but maybe I was too hasty at the time...), But I was really honored to meet the Blue Angel, Lisha, Ximing, Qinyin, Jie, Xiaoye, Xiaofei, Lingyue, and Ye Xueyin. Although Blue Angel and Bingli have greatly transformed, they still offer their most sincere blessings
I decided to give a long review to Xiao Ye's article. After being tortured again, I found that the ending is really happy. I used to think that it would be good if Xiao Ye and the little girl stayed in that space all the time, but now that I think about it, I may feel that this is better in the short term, but as time goes by If so, on the one hand, God knows what the mentality will be like after killing countless people, on the other hand, what will happen in a long time is very unstable. As expected, it is the happiest to die after being redeemed when the feelings are the most vivid, although the death of the little girl was so cruel. T However, I am extremely lucky to be able to feel happiness that I have never experienced before in this space. That's why I decided to commit suicide after I hurt Xiaoye and Xiaoye chose to save Xuan Yun. But this only made Xiaoye even more sad. Then, because the brain output function is not enough, I think it is better to let Xiaoye stay in my mind, so I decided to turn to another direction! In this space where you either kill or be killed, morality is a very subtle thing. Killing, whether forced or voluntary, has become as necessary for survival as water and food. No, crazy people use madness to escape their own conflicts just because of the existence of morality. And numb people may just bury these things deep in their hearts as spiritual self-protection. Although it is a bit one-sided, it is just speculation anyway. Well, in order not to write an argumentative essay and come back, from this aspect, it is precisely because of Xiaoye's kindness that she is in such pain. The little girl and Xiao Ye should be somewhat similar. For example, they both stained blood for the people they care about. For example, Xiao Ye's sister wants to protect Wei, and Xiao Ye wants to protect Xuan Yun. However, there are differences after all. The little girl accidentally hurt Xiao Ye and chose to commit suicide, while Xiao Ye chose to kill her sister. So Xiaoye is definitely the stronger one, but if Xiaoye and the little girl get along for a longer time and their relationship becomes deeper, I wonder if the little girl will become the second Xiaoye... Ouch, I always felt that the above had a very weird feeling, so I thought it would be better to automatically filter it out in my head... Then, compared to the happy ending, I was really impressed by the little girl's ending, it must be because it was so sad! Although the appearance of Xuanyun is an opportunity for Xiaoye to get out of the past and obtain redemption, the death of the little girl still made me want to throw him out before the little girl did anything... The little girl and Xiaoye redeeming each other and protecting each other is really a bit of heart-wrenching warmth! Then, although it is a bit repetitive, but! Um! Although Xiaoye believes that she is a bad person and her gentleness and kindness are false, it is precisely because of her kindness that she admits to the crime of murder and is constantly punished mentally. I feel that true consciencelessness is never the kind of person who can have a thousand reasons to excuse himself but still admits that what he does is evil and suffers deeply for it. Sometimes I wish that Saya didn't have to endure these painful things, but if that were the case, there would be no game without this story, and even if it wasn't a story, there wouldn't be so many things that could be changed if used. Oops, my mind is already blank, um, so that's it! !
Reading your articles always makes me feel pain and happiness. I watched the finale again... Xiaoye finally died full of happiness~~~Why is she suddenly so happy now...(Wasn't she tortured before? Probably because I think this is better than living. Well, it's already the greatest degree of happiness anyway. There is always good and bad in the world, and whatever happens to you depends on fate. Xiao Ye was indeed unhappy, but her final encounter made her not the unluckiest one. I feel better this way. By the way, Yi, are you revising your essay?… By the way, I just realized now that I didn't leave a comment here. It seems that I left it on the post bar before... By the way, I came here to read what you said...
Happiness? Cure? … I doubt this... But it seems that there is really no better ending... T T... But... Xiaoyi is still cruel... Summary... = =
This ending. . . . . . . . . I always feel so uncomfortable. . . . . Is this GE? It's more like a TE. To be honest, I feel like I was deceived by the introduction - -. . . Alas, can't you be happier?
I've been struggling with various things recently, so I haven't been able to finish reading Xiaoyi's article. But today I finally finished reading the full article. How can I put it, it's really indescribably touching. When reading this article, I cried as the author of Kick. Well, I cried just by reading these words. This is true. This is also the first fanfic article created by a player in the Kick series that made me cry. Cute little Tsubasa, you are really too strong. And this article can really be seen as a perfect supplement to the story of Notch 1 and Notch 2. All the plots and concepts involved in the original work in the game are consistent with the original work. There are no story paragraphs in this fanfic that are inconsistent with or contradictory to the original work. Therefore, even if this fanfic of Tsubasa-chan is the orthodox official follow-up to Notch 1 and Notch 2, no one will doubt it. Compared to the later story of Xiao Ye and Xuanyun, the story of Xiao Ye and the little girl really moved me more, because both the image of Xiao Ye and the image of the little girl are consistent with the characters in the original work in terms of temperament and setting, so it really makes me, a writer of incisive characters, have a deep sense of immersion when reading the story of the two of them. In fact, the little girl in the original work of Keshen is the character that Xuan Yun and Qiuye met in Keshen 2. She was a girl who was deeply hurt by the world. She had never experienced happiness, and she did not know what happiness was. But even so, she is looking forward to her own happiness from the bottom of her heart. She is afraid of loneliness and being alone, so she will give everything for the person she loves deeply. Such a girl is the cutest, most pitiful and kind-hearted existence. This article by Xiaoyi vividly expresses the kindness, pity and cuteness of this little girl. Whether it is helping Xiaoye share the pain or the final part of committing suicide, I was very moved. There is no deviation from the image of the little girl I wanted to create in Score 2, so Tsubasa-chan, you are so strong. After meeting Xuanyun, the story with Xuanyun also surprised me, because Tsubasa-chan's way of unfolding the story is very different from mine, so the development of the story in this article was not what I expected. However, I can only lament that Tsubasa-chan's handling of the characters' personalities is extremely accurate. Whether it's Saya or Xuan Yun, what they will do on certain occasions is exactly the same as what I envisioned in the original work. It's just that this time, the world has completely changed. Xiaoye protected Xuanyun from the girl's knife, thus starting a relationship and bond with Xuanyun. It has to be said that everyone's destiny is composed of countless accidents. Maybe if one step is different, then every step after that will be different. So Xiaoyi's article also allowed me to see another possibility between these two people. This possibility may really exist according to their personalities, so maybe in some unknown world line, Xiaoye will eventually be with Xuan Yun. It's hard to say, because these two people are really only one step away from understanding each other and hating each other. "Love is patient and kind; love does not envy; love does not boast, is not arrogant, does not act rudely, does not seek its own, is not easily angered, takes no account of wrongdoing; does not rejoice in unrighteousness, but rejoices with the truth; it bears all things, believes all things, hopes all things, endures all things. Love never fails." Perhaps in a world of despair, everyone has lost ethics and morality, but in this world, as long as love and bonds still exist, many things can still be done. Dedicate everything to the people you love and fight until the last moment for the things you cherish. These things that seem impossible in a distorted and dehumanized world actually do exist. No matter when, as long as there is still love and warmth in your heart, some things will never change. As long as your heart is warm, hell is also paradise.
Liar! Liar! Liar! Liar! Not HE at all. I shed tears!
This existence that is both sadistic and healing...
Such a gentle girl! ! ! Ouch! Hug Tsubasa-chan and rub her. I like gentle girls the most. . Was cured
The rhythm of togetherness! ! =W=!!