As an amnesiac corpse driver, this woman only wants to quietly go about her strange profession. But ever since she picked up a bizarre rabbit, her already turbulent life has become even more eventful. On top of being a good pet owner, she keeps finding herself moonlighting as a tomb raider, an otherworldly master, a yin-yang expert, a famous courtesan, and a government official's concubine. Before she knows it, she has even become a princess consort.
This is a lighthearted story and entirely fictional. If anything seems inaccurate, just ignore it.
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With support, keep up the good work.
It seems interesting, let's keep reading. . .
Is it going to end so soon? I hope Weiwei's next article will be longer.
First of all, Xiaomei really wants to apologize to Weiwei. I have been busy recently (well, this is not an excuse) and have a lot of lists (this is not an excuse either), mainly because of Nai's style. In fact, on the day Weiwei placed the order, Xiaomei came in to take a look. But when Xiaomei saw the synopsis, she was instantly frightened. Forgive me that Xiaomei has been particularly sensitive to things like ghost movies and ghost stories since she was a child, so she has never really seen such things in her many years of life. Ying Ying Ying, hide your face and run away... When I glanced at the copy, Xiaomei discovered that the entire article was not just a simple description of the life and experiences of the corpse exterminators. Colorful adventures unfolded in the originally ordinary life, and from then on there were ups and downs that were unpredictable. That's why it's so interesting and unpredictable. And this kind of thing turned out to be because of meeting a rabbit. Xiaomei suddenly thought of a topic that was very popular many years ago. When applied to Weiwei's work, it was "everything caused by a rabbit". As the text says, this work is really light-hearted with a touch of sadness, funny and can make people feel depressed somewhere. In the article, whether it is the heroine who travels through time and becomes a corpse chaser, or Mr. Rabbit, they are both extremely hilarious characters. Weiwei's writing style is naturally revealed. The relaxed and joyful description technique has the power to make people feel happy. When reading, you can feel the happy atmosphere Weiwei wants to give from between the lines. This is a style that Xiaomei hopes Weiwei can maintain. Next, Xiaomei weakly made some suggestions. If Weiwei felt that her words made sense, then Xiaomei would naturally be happy. 1. Maybe new authors will have this common problem, that is, when they write their first article, they don't pay much attention to the grasp of the entire story and the characters. Such an obvious problem will appear in that the foreshadowing of the story or the links are not delicate enough. 2. The article is described in the first person. Xiaomei always feels that if it is described in the first person, the image of the protagonist should be more vivid and vivid. Whether a character's image can be more vivid and three-dimensional in the minds of readers cannot be achieved just by relying on one aspect. It must be embodied in different ways, directly or indirectly. Only then will the characters described in this way appear to be flesh-and-blood and multi-faceted like real people. 3. The description of details is also crucial. An excellent work is not just because of how ups and downs its plot is, how gorgeous the author's writing is, or how popular the subject matter of the work is. Each work has an independent story, and each story will bring readers a different feeling. If you want to attract readers, the plot alone is not enough. Just like when we go to eat Western food, if there is only steak without juice, no matter how good the steak is, it will become unattractive. By the same token, if the plot of the story is steak, then the description and expression of every detail is the sauce that will be poured on the steak. Excellent authors know how to work hard on details, because this can make readers feel more immersive when reading, and this kind of description that can be brought in is the most attractive to readers. 4. Although the entire story has almost been told, there has been no problem in retrieving the theme. However, Xiaomei suggested that Weiwei should pay attention to the connection between each sentence and the connection between paragraphs in future writing. Finally, Xiaomei said hard and cute Weiwei, "Come on!" I hope Weiwei can continue to maintain such a relaxed and cute style and become stronger and stronger in the future writing journey. -The Brothel Twelve Square Xiaomei-
The heroine is too versatile. . . . . . . . And a little Mary Sue
Drive away the corpse... By the way, a few years ago I saw on a certain channel in Hunan that corpses were being expelled from the Xiangjiang River. By the way, driving corpses seems to be a specialty of Xiangjiang River... I remember talking about the characteristics of corpse chasers at that time... 1. Must be a male (the corpse has strong yin energy, and the male yin energy is strong enough to shock. If it is a female, it may be OVER) 2. You must be ugly (you cannot be too handsome~~~~~~~~because ugliness is so evil that it can shake the body) 3. You must be strong (sometimes people have to carry corpses on their backs... 4. You must be able to distinguish the direction clearly and be courageous (the corpses are chased at night, and those who sleep during the day say. One person... And a pile of corpses) 5. Must be short (forgot the reason) 6. One person must have enough to eat and the whole family will not be hungry (you cannot have parents, you cannot get married and have children. The yin nature of the corpse is heavy, bad and evil, and it cannot affect others. As long as you have family, friends, and blood relations, it will be affected. In the mild case, you will have bad luck and a miserable life, in the worst case... Forget it, everyone can go to Baidu by themselves~~~) 7. Forgot (Go to Baidu...)
The writing is very cute and there are many things to watch~~ However, writing in the first person seems to have a "God's perspective" problem~~ By the way, when I wrote in the first person before, I was also criticized for the God's perspective. . . But this is not my highlight, let's keep watching!
Very cute~~ Obviously this prince is a bit of a moralist, wow~~ I like the scene where the unscrupulous girl teases the moralist the most.
Could it be that Prince Rui'an traveled through time and space in Tu Zhi's body?
Are you sure you can write about the corpse exorcists very well~~Haha!