[SD] Summer in the Sun

That's right. I think Yanghei is the kind of person who understands everything but is very measured.

If possible, I would like Rukawa Kaede to drive him away from me, and then let him take responsibility for me. After that, we will fall in love for a long time and live a shy life hahh

Oh my, you are so young, you are so young, even though you are in a supporting role, you still shine. Nice article

Before writing the review, I went to check out Chuan Xia Sang's order. After reading it, I remembered myself when I took the order, haha. At that time, Dudu said that Anjiang had an order. I took a look and thought, eh! SD, Mito Yohei, you can taste it, pff~~ So I yelled: "Take it!" Hehe. Let me tell you secretly, there is a girl in the shop who wants to grab an order from An Jiang~ She said, "Just wait for An Jiang to transfer the order~" Well~ the reason is the same as the reason why I accepted the order readily! We are all fans of SD, and we also like Mito Yohei, and the phrase "you can taste it" struck me, hehe. So, the first paragraph is all nonsense [This cliffhanger is not just to make up the word count! The cliffhanger is not! I read the list and said that if there are deficiencies, please point them out in detail, so I will analyze a few points in detail below. However, because of this, and I am very busy at the end of the semester, you know, I have not read the full text when writing the review. Please forgive me. Well~ If there are love articles, please believe that An Jiang will become a fan~~ Then leave a message or something, maybe next time it won't be in the name of a store clerk. [So, I started to comment after a paragraph of nonsense. That's enough. Lie First of all, the copywriting is a style that An Jiang likes very much. It is short, beautiful and can express emotions, so GJ! To tell you the truth, An Jiang is incompetent as a copywriter, so I won't give you a review. But let me complain about the cover - why Mao is not Yohei but Rukawa Kaede! ! Although Rukawa Kaede is very cute. [Thinking] All good articles have a beginning. The first chapter written by Chuan Xia Sang is really good. The first sentence of each chapter is a format that An Jiang likes. And the suspense set up in the first chapter - why does the girl get up at three o'clock every day? It plays its role very well in making readers want to read on. And the description of the first chapter is very delicate, such as "The water in March is still very cold, and it hits the face so cold that you can even feel the tiny pores shrinking rapidly, but Nanxia enjoys the trembling feeling of this moment, which makes her feel very real." Such words make An-chan very comfortable to read, and the point about Sakuragi being dumped is also well restored. It can make people think of the original painting and make people laugh, so it is completely OK! However, please note: "But this habit is to never stop updating despite lightning, thunderstorms, heavy rains, and earthquakes!" The combination of habit and interrupting updates is very strange. After all, it is not an article. And there are typos - for example, the word "stir" in the penultimate paragraph should be "mix". Well, actually it's not a big problem. In the middle article, An Jiang personally feels that Yohei's feelings for the girl can be seen from the beginning, but the girl, how should I put it, is too slow to warm up! Of course, Chuan Xia Sang also said that this is a slow girl. However, I always felt that there was not enough foreshadowing. The girl didn't understand how she was being teased at first, but then she suddenly understood after holding hands and walking away for a while. The transition felt a bit hasty. And the aspect of autism was thrown out at once, from Yohei's mouth. An Jiang felt that the details of the article about autism were not sufficiently penetrated during this period. Next, let's take a look at Chapter 16. Personally, I think this chapter is quite important. First, I think Rukawa Kaede's writing is quite good. He really just cares about it, and has a slight sadness of missing it. Second, "Fool! Hanamichi will not leave you..." Neither will he. Personally, I think this sentence should be changed to a first-person description in the end, which would be more detailed, like: "I can't do it either," Yangping added this sentence silently in his heart. Wouldn't this make it more immersive? Thirdly, Yohei's temptation is very strange. The word temptation always feels inappropriate. To sum up, in half of the articles I read, the language is impeccable and needs work. An Jiang feels that the biggest problem lies in the transition of details and foreshadowing, so that individual plots will not appear abrupt and have a more sense of substitution. In terms of characterization, the psychological descriptions of the girls and Yohei are very good, but the descriptions in other aspects are relatively weak. There are also some minor nitpicking problems. In fact, I think Chuan Xia-san should have been able to spot it when he read it back. The above points are covered, so I won't go into details. Well~ because I have read a lot of Jing tide's articles, I always feel that the image of Yohei in SD has been finalized. Sometimes An-chan will make mistakes, so I hope you won't be angry. The above are An Jiang's suggestions. Please forgive me for any shortcomings. Thank you again Chuan Xia Sang for your trust, and welcome to visit next time. I wish the article will get better and better~ Also, happy holidays on the upcoming Christmas and New Year's Day! By unheard shop name An Jiang

What about the extra story... Dear... I've been reading your article for more than a week... Where's the meat! There's soup! We have to make up for it in the winter!

It's over. . . It's over. . I thought this was just the beginning. . They expressed their feelings to each other and then were blocked by their family members from eloping together. . .

I made a long comment! Where is my long review? Jinjiang you return my long comment

Growing pains I like Yangping! When I read the first SD book, I was sure that this person was a major supporting character, even more supporting than Rukawa Kaede and Takenori Akagi. When I saw the Mitsui chapter, I really sighed! It turns out that supporting roles can be so cool! I can't guess what kind of girl Yanghei likes this kind of girl, so I'm always surprised when I read Yanghei's articles! I think Sakuragi Nanatsu is a little dull girl when she first appears. She is dull, a bit brother-controlled, a bit autistic, and has a pure heart, just like Sakuragi. I personally feel that she doesn't know how to express love at the beginning, and is a bit cool; not knowing how to express and not being able to love are two different things. She will silently do a lot of things for Sakuragi, and even get hurt for Sakuragi; she will silently care about Yohei, but Yohei sometimes thinks she is indifferent and gets anxious. Sometimes being kind to others secretly is really not a particularly good way to express yourself. In the later period, Xiaoqi grew up. On the one hand, Yangping contributed a lot, but on the other hand, Xiaoqi wanted to grow up! Because she wants to express that she likes Yangping. If she likes someone, she will want to be nice to that person and want that person to pay more attention to her. This is normal love. The most important thing is that Xiaoqi knows how to love herself. She is stronger. Facing her own heart and facing the doubts of others, she knows better what she needs. Only by loving yourself can you love others! Although you are young, girl, you have grown up! Yangping, this Yangping is Yangping, just like the Yangping in my impression. Yohei likes being with Sakuragi. I guess Yohei appreciates Sakuragi's purity, the purity from the heart, and Xiaoqi also has it. Yangping's love is like a breeze blowing on your face, intoxicating and addictive, lingering around you and never dissipating. Yangping will protect the people he cares about. For Xiaoqi, he will look at the problem more comprehensively and minimize risks. For others, this is also a kind of growth. What I have to complain about is that the author is really good at writing the kiss scene, and every aspect from beginning to end is very touching! It feels quite sweet, and my dry heart has been healed! A big hooligan like me loves it! (Haha, that's what I wrote!) As for Sendou Akira, Brother Xian doesn't have much role except to make Yoping jealous~~Tease Xiaoqi~~Please give Brother Xian an explanation. Then there are love action movies, you know! Last but not least, I wrote hundreds of thousands of words to legalize action movies!

Little grapefruit! ! ! ! ! ! ! Congratulations on the completion=333333333= He took a sneak peek and found out that you are indeed a real drama! ! ! ! ╮(╯▽╰)╭ So just wait for the new pit to open, come on! ! !

Don't forget about romantic action movies too! I came here specifically to reply.