+She came to this world to clear her mind, never expecting that losing her memories would draw the attention of the Death Realm's royal family. Tian Wanyi, unaware of her true identity, forced herself on her and got her pregnant. As time passed and events unfolded, her memories returned. She set foot once more on the land where she had lived for so many years and faced the companions who had grown up alongside her. So what? She was already devoted to him. He was the one she had chosen, and she would never spare anyone who tried to hurt him. What is the Death Realm Queen's real purpose? Tian Wanyi's dead brother has returned, and there is the current Death King, as well as family and friends in the world of the Nianshen, memories from a past life, and the people she must protect… She never imagined the bond between them had existed long ago… Now she could never let him go… (Note: Their past bond is explored in the extras.) The entire novel is being revised. So far, revisions are complete through Chapter 5.
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It's too confusing, there are too many characters, and things are too complicated. It's very tiring to read.
The shortcomings of the article... Start from the character setting... The cunning Night King at first... Turned into an overly feminine character... And he always behaves like he doesn't want to be treated as a woman... Maybe the reason for the long update span... The transition is abrupt... In addition... The Night King who has gone through so many things is portrayed as too weak... He cries easily... No matter how you look at it, he should be a strong person and is described as a woman... This is contrary to the reader's psychology... The character's name is difficult to remember... Read this all the way ... To this day, I can't remember who is who... Who is whose attendant... The names are too complicated... A bit like watching Dream of Red Mansions... The relationship is complicated... The explanation is not clear... The story line is unclear... It makes the plot abrupt... And the language is not very proficient... I am very confused to find that every time I nod without denying... Every time there is silence without denying... Can you say something firmly… These are some thoughts I have seen along the way... I just want to say something... If there is something wrong... Please don't mind.
I'm a little dizzy, there are too many people
It's too messy, there are too many characters, things are too complicated, and it's very tiring to read.
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The last sentence is so evil
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There will always be someone who finds this article good, like me
At first, I thought God was a minor sufferer, but it turned out. . .
Recess~~~~~~Gone with the Wind~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~···Author's reply:
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It's too confusing, there are too many characters, and things are too complicated. It's very tiring to read.
The shortcomings of the article... Start from the character setting... The cunning Night King at first... Turned into an overly feminine character... And he always behaves like he doesn't want to be treated as a woman... Maybe the reason for the long update span... The transition is abrupt... In addition... The Night King who has gone through so many things is portrayed as too weak... He cries easily... No matter how you look at it, he should be a strong person and is described as a woman... This is contrary to the reader's psychology... The character's name is difficult to remember... Read this all the way ... To this day, I can't remember who is who... Who is whose attendant... The names are too complicated... A bit like watching Dream of Red Mansions... The relationship is complicated... The explanation is not clear... The story line is unclear... It makes the plot abrupt... And the language is not very proficient... I am very confused to find that every time I nod without denying... Every time there is silence without denying... Can you say something firmly… These are some thoughts I have seen along the way... I just want to say something... If there is something wrong... Please don't mind.
I'm a little dizzy, there are too many people
It's too messy, there are too many characters, things are too complicated, and it's very tiring to read.
Resentment: I lost my phone, so I can't read the article at night.
The last sentence is so evil
Looks good, likes, supports
There will always be someone who finds this article good, like me
At first, I thought God was a minor sufferer, but it turned out. . .
Recess~~~~~~Gone with the Wind~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~···Author's reply: I'm so excited. Some people read Fox's article. Fox is very, very happy to say, thank you for supporting Fox's article. I bow to everyone here!