Reborn in Ordinary Times

I remember that Xu Ma knew that there was room for peach blossoms. Why hasn't it been mentioned at all since then? If Xu's mother was really the kind of person who only cared about her youngest son, she would have mentioned this issue a little bit, right?

In fact, you don't want to write anymore, so it's over like this. The second half has a much different personality than the previous characters...

The writing is good, but there are too many typos>.<

To be honest, I'm disappointed. When I read it earlier, I thought it was well written: Mother Xu's wisdom makes her fortune bit by bit. Since the twins were sent to Shanghai, the writing style has changed. It was written by two people.

It really feels boring. Why is this article so skinny?

The whole article feels very frustrating. This frustration does not refer to the inability to open Golden Finger or something, but the smooth connection of the plot. Maybe the author wants to show the changes of people in different time and environment, but this change often lacks the support of the plot, and the character's personality is a bit split. It feels like the author suddenly felt at a certain stage of writing and changed the character in a hurry. It feels a bit fragmented. In addition, as I said before, the primary and secondary aspects of this article are a bit indifferent. I feel that the female pig's foot is just a clue-like character. The latter may be to release the resentment accumulated in the previous article, and suddenly all the golden fingers are smashed on the female pig's foot. This halo is not consistent with the weight of the female pig in the full text. Finally, the sense of space presence is too low, and it feels quite tasteless. The last few comments I made were a bit angry. Some of them were complaints accumulated from reading a lot of articles. Some of them were really entangled with a good story but an awkward plot. Don't pay too much attention to it. (Is this a long review? Well, 99.99...% Of the time I am very lazy, this time it was just because I was holding back my breath╮(╯_╰)╭)

TOT. . . . . . It's gone. It's so satisfying. T-T

By the way, this article seems to have no feeling. It feels like it is perfunctory, as if it is about to end.

After reading this chapter, I was overwhelmed by the way Xu Lan sacrificed all the other children for one little son. It seemed like all the love and pets were given to this little son. I was really speechless. This was the stupidest thing she did. The more she behaved like this, the colder the other children became, and the less close they were to her little brother.

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