One Smile Topples the City

Once upon a time, a girl who dreamed of being a princess was like the girl in "The Fall", looking forward to a prince-like figure appearing in front of her. Of course, the target of this prince was herself. During my lunch break, I read Xunxun's short article. It was very relaxing. The characters' cheerful personalities and funny plot settings were a good start. First, let me talk about the character setting of the heroine. The character of the heroine can be roughly summarized as cheerful, strong, and natural, and the appearance is beautiful and enchanting. Such a heroine setting may be the dream of many men. A dull but smart woman who can still be in the hall will undoubtedly appeal to the taste of most men. However, there are countless such heroines in novels. Before this, there were many successful and famous characters. You are not the only one, which means that you have to be unconventional and have your own unique style. However, so far, it has not been seen that the author focuses on the characteristics of the characters and constantly innovates the content, so that he will gain readers. Secondly, there is the male protagonist. The character of the male protagonist is still the same, falling into the cliché and standard public lover. Gu Chen may be a good man, but he is definitely not a good male protagonist in a novel that can be compared with others. The male protagonist must be in line with public taste, but what also needs to be considered is whether this person is the same as others set him up. The novels will be more or less similar in plot, but this similarity will only make you think, oh, it turns out that this kind of thing can happen in life, not that a fantasy plot will definitely appear in every identical novel. Let's talk about the supporting roles. There is a popular saying nowadays, that is, the male protagonist is for the female protagonist to love, the male supporting role is for the audience and readers to love, and the second female protagonist is for everyone to hate. There is another type of second female lead who is a silent dedication type, or a foil type for the heroine. This is what Xunxun's novel looks like. Yangyang is a lively girl who values ​​her friends and is a bit of a nymphomaniac. She is a girl you can see everywhere in daily life and is very friendly. However, there are not many articles about kissing, so I can't tell why, but the final outcome is that the two are happily together. Finally, let me tell you the whole story. The storyline is just an online game article. I don't read many such articles. I have read "A Smile Is Alluring" and "Red Luan Star Moves". The storylines are good, but the background settings are different. With Zhuyu at the forefront, if a girl wants to come up with her article, she must have her own characteristics and be innovative! There are many types of online game writing. This one belongs to the relaxed romance genre. Girls can take other routes, and they don't necessarily have to copy the routes of their predecessors. Come on! To sum up, the girl seems to be a novice, and mistakes are inevitable, and she can just correct them in the future. Moreover, her writing style is still relatively raw, and she is not detailed enough in many descriptions, and she cannot grasp the general summary. The description of the situation needs to be strengthened, the characterization is not strong enough, and more efforts are needed. The article belongs to the warm-hearted style. Think more about things in life and don't stop at one novel. I guess the girl must be a fan of Gu Man! This kind of style is Gu Man's at first glance. I can't say that Gu Man is the originator, but among the articles of this type that I know, Gu Man is considered an outstanding one! Girl, if the revolution is successful, it still needs hard work, come on! ——The 12th Brothel—— byChongxiaoqi

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