The Village Girl Fights Back

I envy you successful authors and salute you for your hard work.

I really like this article, but I have a small complaint. The heroine's speech is formal, which seems very inconsistent. It feels inconsistent with her identity and the times.

Comment from my unprofessional perspective: I am really satisfied with the male protagonist, it is really good. The writing is very good in the front, but there is a dry feeling in the back. There is a lack of description of the emotions of the characters. I feel that the male protagonist's personality is not described. For example, the background of the male protagonist and how to get to know the female protagonist are all flaws of farming novels. This article can actually be written better. If you learn to write modern words later, or have a clear center, it can be better sublimated.

Alas, no matter what, it's over...

I've been waiting for Jinjiang to refund my money, and then it changed.

Dear, monthly update party, or half-yearly update! !

I thought I was going to give up writing.

Decline! I don't even know what to say. I'm going to take a test this month. I can study from five to ten at most a day without stopping. I think the Chinese people are so hard-working, just forget about this certificate or that certificate, there is still a shelf life after you get it. Well, now, in order not to be eliminated by society, I used my crazy energy to make a surprise attack ten days before the exam. But what really makes me feel sad is that after five attempts, I failed by 2 to 5 points every time. It drove me crazy! Woohoo!

Isn't Nanzhu a slutty guy? It seems unlikely. Playboys are unreliable. Who knows whether this boy's five-year pursuit is due to too much obsession or failure to succeed?

Come on, I really like the author's setting, but how can I put it, the suspense is not enough, and it still feels a bit like a running story.