
[Shinsengumi] A Xiu
[新撰组]阿秀
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 9k Words
- Genre
- Romance
- Era
- Ancient Era
- Updated
- 14y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
4Chapters
12Favorites
10.0Score
1.1kClicks per chapter
4Comments
More by this author
After Becoming the Cauldron Female Supporting Character
I'm the Only Earthling in the Entire Galaxy
The Major General Is an Omega
Interstellar Idol for All
After Becoming a Cannon-Fodder, I Got a Happy Ending with the Villain
A Guide to Surviving in Space
The Anti-Transmigration Plan
A Cannon Fodder Nobody in the 1970s [Book Transmigration]
The Blacksmith's Sweet Little Wife
Transmigrating to Become a Contract Wife
The Unbetrothed Legitimate Daughter
The Village Girl Fights Back
Reader comments 2
Translated by Google Translate
Almost all of Souji's writings are bad, so I like Sougo, the S-star prince!
I haven't seen any articles written by Shinsengumi. I'm so excited. Author, you are a good person~~~! But the author, I suggest you correct some important historical loopholes (all of them are easy to correct)... First of all, from the beginning of the Nara period to the end of the Edo period, Tokyo was called Edo (belonging to Kanto and the residence of the Emperor of Japan) Secondly, the location of the Shinsengakuten is not Edo but Kyoto. According to current theory, it belongs to Kansai and is the city where the generals who hold the real power are located. Third, Okita Souji's changed name is Fujiwara Sojiro. When introducing him to outsiders, he always uses this name, or simply calls him Sojiro. Fourth, before the success of the Meiji Restoration, civilians did not have surnames, only first names. Only samurai and nobles were allowed to have surnames. Fifth, what does the third year of Xingqing refer to...? If I am correct, this should be 1867. The Japanese era name at that time was Keio, not Xingqing. The sixth and seventh oil paths are again...? It is recommended to use XX town or XX house instead. Seventh, Kikuichi Monji Norimune actually wields a Gongpin sword, which is not suitable for combat... Therefore, in many fan fiction, the sword used by Souji for combat is Kaga Kiyomitsu. Talk. Why was my first reaction to the scene where Souji rescued Axiu the fight at the Shijo Bridge? And when Souji was attacked later, my first reaction was Yu Ling Guards... And the author's portrayal of Axiu is very consistent with the characteristics of women of that era in anime, especially the heroine's identity as an ordinary girl, but is the overall progress a bit too fast? In fact, girls of that era were not that innocent... I also recommend stating the time at the beginning of the article. If I hadn't seen the reminder of the third year of Keio later, I would have always thought that the time setting of this article should be the first year of Yuanji... Finally, big cheers to the author!! The article is really good