[Reborn!] Falling Cherry Blossoms (Hibari X Original Female Lead)

Are you sure the trident isn't the author's bad taste?

That's great. I want to read it before writing. It's inspiring. Kyouya's character... Well~ don't worry about it

The plot jumped so fast that I didn't even understand it clearly!

Xiaoyijiang, ME is Xiaoxi~~ By the way, if I hadn't clicked on this website, I wouldn't have known you wrote such a short story~~ Childhood sweethearts and such are really wonderful!! And I really like many of the sentences written by Xiaoyi~~Spread flowers~~ I really like the way the first paragraph of this book is written, from reality to memory~~ It's really all kinds of beautiful~~ A very heart-warming article, it's really rare that you don't abuse Xiaoyi TWT~ Xiaoyi only used a few words to describe the longing for each other during the three years, but the feelings are very strong. The writing style is really lovely~~=3= But at the end, the character of Xiaoyi's heroine is a bit like the character of Chenxing in your novel~~ Originally, I understood Yasu Asawa's character to be very lively, cheerful, and strong... Well, I don't know what I'm talking about... It's just the last bit that's a bit strange. I feel like the two heroines overlap = = But I think it's even weirder. I think when the heroine sees Hibari's kidnapper, she might be able to bear it and give Hibari a hug, instead of the latter taking the initiative = = In fact, it's okay for Quedian to take the initiative. I'm so excited~~ [This person has convulsions = =] And what I want to say is that the heroine is not sexy at all. Even if she is really sexy, it doesn't matter. She is not writing about fighting... But, what, I still haven't figured out the reason why the heroine went to Italy. I was shocked that Reborn couldn't read her heart. Many novels say this... I don't understand why the ninth generation asked Reborn to teach her things... But if you ignore these bugs, this short story by Xiaoyi is really beautiful!! As for Hibari, after the obsidian battle, he would probably hate Sakura. The smell on his body... In addition, Reborn came back from ten years later and told the heroine from ten years ago that she died before the battle. I cannot accept this... After ten years of distance, I can say that I have made some progress!! After all, she is Dino's senior sister... She can't be that weak = = So... You know Finally, Xiaoyi, you have so many typos here, it makes me miserable... It shouldn't be both happiness and pain at the same time TwT Well, I've been talking for a long time. Speaking of which, this is the first time I've written a long review for you. Well, if it's a long review, no matter what, keep up the good work, Xiaoyi~~ PS: When will the novel be finished?!!!