Once you're lost in the World of Warcraft, there's no coming back with your dignity intact. What bad luck!
I want to take my System and level up, but I'm stuck with a rogue. I'm broke!
In short: I'm really just an AFK player. If you need someone to save the world, please find somebody else.
A guide for readers:
1. The story takes place in a parallel World of Warcraft, and some of the settings differ from the game. Even if you've never played WoW, you can read it as a standalone fantasy story.
2. Since the protagonist is human, her perspective on the faction conflict leans toward the Alliance. Horde folks, please bear with me.
3. Potential triggers or favorite elements: the heroine's soul transmigrates into another body, and she comes with a game System.
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Why should I change my name→_→Isn't the original one good? . The current title of the article is a little bit. . . Stupid
While I was in the VIP room, I read the entire article~ Give yourself a thumbs up! \\(≧▽≦)/~
Although I have never played WOW, I feel that the writing is very nice~ The settings of the male protagonist and female protagonist are very cute~
The ethics chapter is not satisfying at all~ Hehe~ But it's good that I didn't get dealt the cards╮(╯▽╰)╭
When will Lanlan post a new article? What type of article is planned for the next one? Are you still a fan of the game? ~
Come on~~Come on~~Spread flowers
Thassarian, do you dare not be so cute!
Thassarian, do you dare not be so cute!
I miss you QuQ, I will still follow your QuQ
Means I've forgotten who Lereissa is
Well, in the dead of night, I just want to chat casually, so in fact, author girl, you don't need to take this as a comment.
I should first thank the girl for bringing me such a wonderful story, which kept me looking forward to it from beginning to end, and looking forward to more. To be honest, it's really hard to see such a story with adventure as the main line in JJ. Of course, the love that comes naturally also makes me satisfied. Maybe it's because I'm older and I'm no longer interested in the love and hatred of little lolita, haha XD
I played WOW for a short time last year, but the level was not high. I had contact with blood elves and human mages, so I had a certain understanding of the races and professions in WOW, but I was completely confused about the world background, tasks, or well-known NPCs. At that time I just want to go around casually, but I can probably understand some of the little jokes that may only be understood by WOWers. For example, the sentence "Skin off the elf, you are actually a few dwarfs playing in a queue" made me laugh for many days, haha XD
Well, I want to have fun once. So I read this article completely as a fantasy story.
Judging from the overall plot of the story, I prefer the first two.
The first part is better than the plot. The glimpse of the iceberg from the author's writing made me very interested in this task chain. It is probably because the task chain is used as a blueprint to divergence, the whole plot is more interesting. What I'm talking about here is looking at the essence through phenomena. As far as the description is concerned, the first part is indeed relatively jerky and the rhythm is not grasped enough, but I won't mention it for now.
The second part is more emotional. Although it is the author's own original plot, the whole part has a better grasp of the characters' hearts. Although the main plot line is simple and clear, not complicated, the author has mastered the psychology of the characters and controlled the rhythm, which made me feel that the characters are alive, and they are no longer just names or codenames. In fact, in my opinion, this is the chapter that the author has written the most smoothly, maybe because there are no restrictions from the game itself, and it feels like a fish in water, laugh XD.
The third part is a turning point, and there is a blueprint for the mission, so the author seems to have returned to the state of the first part, and his own pace was disrupted, which made me unable to adapt.
I have thought about why whenever it involves task blueprints, I feel a sense of chaotic rhythm, and here is my guess: WOW has a huge world system setting, these task chains are intricately involved, and the structure is too big.
Only describe part of it? No, it cannot be described.
So that's everything? But the battle line is too long, and a single move affects the whole body. Running the map and completing tasks in the game is just a minute-long conversation, but it is completely different to mention it separately in the novel.
Let's sort out the content of Part 3 first:
① The background connects three chapters and three events: preparations (such as a universal tent), meeting the bomb goblin on the way (interaction between the male and female protagonists 1), and arriving at destination A (background introduction and interaction 2)
② Chapter 8 of mission step 1, (cause) the man was kidnapped, (development) rescued most of the people, (connection) lurked to save the male protagonist, (climax) won, the mission shifts to step 2
③ Three chapters of mission step 2, dragon training, dragon training competition, plot connection in the last half chapter
④ The past five chapters of the male protagonist, mainly the dream part, and the final emotional interaction
⑤ Connect scene chapter 2, male and female protagonist interaction, recipe, and lead to task step 3
⑥ In the three chapters of mission step 3, first the heroine acts alone, then the hero saves the beauty, and by the way, he finally confesses his love.
⑦ Mission step 4 and seven chapters are basically adventure adventure adventure, I don't want to summarize it.
⑧ Turn on the last chapter, whether it's plot or meat.
Okay, finished sorting it out.
You see, WOW's huge mission system is here. Mission 1 and Mission 4 are the main missions this time. They spend more words and are mainly focused on plot and adventure. Tasks 2 and 3 basically start with a task and end with feelings warming up. Both of them serve. Of course, there are also connecting scenes, which mainly serve the relationship and explain the causes and consequences of some tasks.
If you compare the third part with the first two parts, you will obviously find that the third part is similar to the first part in terms of plot composition - the overall framework is very complex, there are relatively many scene changes, there are many task scenes described, but the characters are unwilling to let go of their emotions.
Very good, after talking so much nonsense, my purpose is finally clear.
Girl, you are using the resources of a planet to build a galaxy!
A task chain described in 9W words can be divided into 4 parts at will, not counting the background introduction and pure emotional interaction chapters. Take a look at the 8 subtitles above. Just the transitions alone can make the protagonist die of overwork!
Such a huge task framework wants both the task to be exciting and the emotions to be natural. Each chapter is filled with things that the author wants to express. Readers will tell you that you will never fall in love again... I think you still have to make a proper choice, either spend more words or pinch it, and you can only choose between tasks and feelings.
In comparison, those added plots that mainly express emotions are relatively smooth, but the mission link... The battle scenes are indeed difficult to describe, especially if you have to follow the plan, and there is no emotional buffer in the middle, it will inevitably feel a bit boring.
People often say that we should be good at grasping the rhythm of writing and choosing the focus of expression. As for how to do it specifically, I don't think I can give any suggestions. Girls should think more about it on their own. I just hope that my thinking will not be limited by the established facts of the game. Being trapped in your thinking will slow you down.
But! The last thing I have to mention is but!
Damn it, the most important thing, the biggest failure is that those subsequent plots that the author thought were unimportant actually turned out to be! Pass! Pass! Change! Become! System announcement ah ah ah ah ah ah! ! !
(Pauses face) I want to express my extreme dissatisfaction with the last chapter of each game. Forget about the meatiness, the plot can actually lighten the mood... Just like the system maintenance when the game is halfway through, my reading always has a strong and irresistible sense of disconnection. This miserable mood is really a history of blood and tears.
Part 4...▽
The fourth part is even more tragic. It's not an exaggeration to say it's a bad ending, right? This time the author gave me a light on the whole story. I'm really, really, really, really sad, sad, sad... (Echo) I really want to crack the author's head open to see the original plan or something (bloody)...
Sorry, the health tank is empty and I need to be revived.
For someone who is obsessed with plot and setting, I feel like I have finished writing most of my nonsense as I write this. What follows is just nonsense - (v)ノ whatever comes to mind, whatever is said.
① I want to express my deep love for Lu Reid - "He suddenly reached out and took off his head, put it on his chest, and bowed exaggeratedly, 'Good day, I am Lu Reid.'" From this moment on, I fell in love with this little skull. Especially regarding the topic of "where are the weapons hidden?", I really thought about it for a while on the train. Is it a space bag, or is it really hidden in the abdomen. Okay, although intellectually I think it is a space bag, what is really cute hidden in the abdomen╰(￣▽￣)╮By the way, in addition to expressing my deep love for this character, I also want to ask, girl, do you feel that you have forgotten something? That's right! This is the follow-up situation of Lureide! Gave it back to Thassarian? I don't remember seeing anything like this.
Regarding the proposition of supporting roles, I talked with a friend. Personally, I feel that the supporting characters (note that they are not minor characters) need to have a timeline in the novel, such as their past, present, and future. They should be briefly mentioned instead of disappearing. For example, Lerisa is relatively successful in the author's description. How are things like Lurid and Bernie, who went to deliver the letter but there is no news, how the letter was delivered? After taking the spell notes, there was no trace of the elf mage. Did the elf mage trouble the heroine, deceived the heroine's vrykul woman, etc... There are many supporting characters in the text that promote the development of the plot, but the girl did not explain them one by one. Of course, explaining one by one sometimes seems too cumbersome, and not every supporting character needs an explanation. Sometimes it is also an explanation to say that there is no news about a certain character's whereabouts; if not, be careful as it will cause a sense of disconnection in the reader. I think it is essential for the entire story to change and grow along with the protagonist's timeline. By the way, my friend said that this type of writing, similar to accidentally hearing news about someone in a corner after a long time, is also very common, and it can also be very touching if it is well crafted.
② Since I mentioned the supporting roles, I also want to talk about the supporting roles. I thought the biggest supporting cast in the whole article was "Stormwind City". As a WOWer, you will feel a sense of familiarity when you hear the description of this town, but is Stormwind City, which is actually mentioned several times throughout the text, really necessary? Because I work more from a fantasy perspective, I probably have different senses than you, girl.
Let's turn our attention to Chapter 3 and take a look. The first two paragraphs are about Storm City and MI7 respectively. I think the main purpose is to introduce the identity and mission of the male protagonist. To draw an analogy, Stormwind City is Washington, and leader Mathias Shore is Obama. Does such a superior head of state really have anything to do with the ordinary citizens of the country? If it were me, the focus of the camera would remove all positive descriptions of Mathias Shore, leaving only the files on the desk and a voice.
③ I still like elves quite a lot. They are very smart and always serious. Occasionally they are bad and will make a little joke. In order to persuade the heroine, I also worried about how to play the emotional card. Although I can't remember where the elf made a joke for the first time, I was shocked at the time, haha XD By the end of the article, maybe because the relationship with the heroine became closer and closer, the overall feeling of the elf became a lot more vivid. I personally like this change in the writing.
The heroine has no outstanding performance, she is ordinary, but she makes me feel very kind and real. For example, she occasionally has a little temper, occasionally becomes a nymphomaniac, her reaction to the betrayal of her friends is not pretentious, she will also be filled with indignation at unfair events, and she secretly despises herself for being dependent on elves... Haha, I don't want to think it's nothing, but when I think about it, there is really a lot to say.
It's not unique, but I like the relatable characterization.
When I looked back at what I had written, I suddenly had the illusion of a wild beast running wild on the grassland..._(:з)∠)_
No matter what, let it go as it has been done, I look forward to seeing you in the new article~
Hello author, the pomegranate jam review has been published, please go to the romance submission section of the jam store to receive the review ヽ(v)ノ
Why should I change my name→_→Isn't the original one good? . The current title of the article is a little bit. . . Stupid
While I was in the VIP room, I read the entire article~ Give yourself a thumbs up! \\(≧▽≦)/~ Although I have never played WOW, I feel that the writing is very nice~ The settings of the male protagonist and female protagonist are very cute~ The ethics chapter is not satisfying at all~ Hehe~ But it's good that I didn't get dealt the cards╮(╯▽╰)╭ When will Lanlan post a new article? What type of article is planned for the next one? Are you still a fan of the game? ~
Come on~~Come on~~Spread flowers
Thassarian, do you dare not be so cute!
Thassarian, do you dare not be so cute!
I miss you QuQ, I will still follow your QuQ
Means I've forgotten who Lereissa is
Well, in the dead of night, I just want to chat casually, so in fact, author girl, you don't need to take this as a comment. I should first thank the girl for bringing me such a wonderful story, which kept me looking forward to it from beginning to end, and looking forward to more. To be honest, it's really hard to see such a story with adventure as the main line in JJ. Of course, the love that comes naturally also makes me satisfied. Maybe it's because I'm older and I'm no longer interested in the love and hatred of little lolita, haha XD I played WOW for a short time last year, but the level was not high. I had contact with blood elves and human mages, so I had a certain understanding of the races and professions in WOW, but I was completely confused about the world background, tasks, or well-known NPCs. At that time I just want to go around casually, but I can probably understand some of the little jokes that may only be understood by WOWers. For example, the sentence "Skin off the elf, you are actually a few dwarfs playing in a queue" made me laugh for many days, haha XD Well, I want to have fun once. So I read this article completely as a fantasy story. Judging from the overall plot of the story, I prefer the first two. The first part is better than the plot. The glimpse of the iceberg from the author's writing made me very interested in this task chain. It is probably because the task chain is used as a blueprint to divergence, the whole plot is more interesting. What I'm talking about here is looking at the essence through phenomena. As far as the description is concerned, the first part is indeed relatively jerky and the rhythm is not grasped enough, but I won't mention it for now. The second part is more emotional. Although it is the author's own original plot, the whole part has a better grasp of the characters' hearts. Although the main plot line is simple and clear, not complicated, the author has mastered the psychology of the characters and controlled the rhythm, which made me feel that the characters are alive, and they are no longer just names or codenames. In fact, in my opinion, this is the chapter that the author has written the most smoothly, maybe because there are no restrictions from the game itself, and it feels like a fish in water, laugh XD. The third part is a turning point, and there is a blueprint for the mission, so the author seems to have returned to the state of the first part, and his own pace was disrupted, which made me unable to adapt. I have thought about why whenever it involves task blueprints, I feel a sense of chaotic rhythm, and here is my guess: WOW has a huge world system setting, these task chains are intricately involved, and the structure is too big. Only describe part of it? No, it cannot be described. So that's everything? But the battle line is too long, and a single move affects the whole body. Running the map and completing tasks in the game is just a minute-long conversation, but it is completely different to mention it separately in the novel. Let's sort out the content of Part 3 first: ① The background connects three chapters and three events: preparations (such as a universal tent), meeting the bomb goblin on the way (interaction between the male and female protagonists 1), and arriving at destination A (background introduction and interaction 2) ② Chapter 8 of mission step 1, (cause) the man was kidnapped, (development) rescued most of the people, (connection) lurked to save the male protagonist, (climax) won, the mission shifts to step 2 ③ Three chapters of mission step 2, dragon training, dragon training competition, plot connection in the last half chapter ④ The past five chapters of the male protagonist, mainly the dream part, and the final emotional interaction ⑤ Connect scene chapter 2, male and female protagonist interaction, recipe, and lead to task step 3 ⑥ In the three chapters of mission step 3, first the heroine acts alone, then the hero saves the beauty, and by the way, he finally confesses his love. ⑦ Mission step 4 and seven chapters are basically adventure adventure adventure, I don't want to summarize it. ⑧ Turn on the last chapter, whether it's plot or meat. Okay, finished sorting it out. You see, WOW's huge mission system is here. Mission 1 and Mission 4 are the main missions this time. They spend more words and are mainly focused on plot and adventure. Tasks 2 and 3 basically start with a task and end with feelings warming up. Both of them serve. Of course, there are also connecting scenes, which mainly serve the relationship and explain the causes and consequences of some tasks. If you compare the third part with the first two parts, you will obviously find that the third part is similar to the first part in terms of plot composition - the overall framework is very complex, there are relatively many scene changes, there are many task scenes described, but the characters are unwilling to let go of their emotions. Very good, after talking so much nonsense, my purpose is finally clear. Girl, you are using the resources of a planet to build a galaxy! A task chain described in 9W words can be divided into 4 parts at will, not counting the background introduction and pure emotional interaction chapters. Take a look at the 8 subtitles above. Just the transitions alone can make the protagonist die of overwork! Such a huge task framework wants both the task to be exciting and the emotions to be natural. Each chapter is filled with things that the author wants to express. Readers will tell you that you will never fall in love again... I think you still have to make a proper choice, either spend more words or pinch it, and you can only choose between tasks and feelings. In comparison, those added plots that mainly express emotions are relatively smooth, but the mission link... The battle scenes are indeed difficult to describe, especially if you have to follow the plan, and there is no emotional buffer in the middle, it will inevitably feel a bit boring. People often say that we should be good at grasping the rhythm of writing and choosing the focus of expression. As for how to do it specifically, I don't think I can give any suggestions. Girls should think more about it on their own. I just hope that my thinking will not be limited by the established facts of the game. Being trapped in your thinking will slow you down. But! The last thing I have to mention is but! Damn it, the most important thing, the biggest failure is that those subsequent plots that the author thought were unimportant actually turned out to be! Pass! Pass! Change! Become! System announcement ah ah ah ah ah ah! ! ! (Pauses face) I want to express my extreme dissatisfaction with the last chapter of each game. Forget about the meatiness, the plot can actually lighten the mood... Just like the system maintenance when the game is halfway through, my reading always has a strong and irresistible sense of disconnection. This miserable mood is really a history of blood and tears. Part 4...▽ The fourth part is even more tragic. It's not an exaggeration to say it's a bad ending, right? This time the author gave me a light on the whole story. I'm really, really, really, really sad, sad, sad... (Echo) I really want to crack the author's head open to see the original plan or something (bloody)... Sorry, the health tank is empty and I need to be revived. For someone who is obsessed with plot and setting, I feel like I have finished writing most of my nonsense as I write this. What follows is just nonsense - (v)ノ whatever comes to mind, whatever is said. ① I want to express my deep love for Lu Reid - "He suddenly reached out and took off his head, put it on his chest, and bowed exaggeratedly, 'Good day, I am Lu Reid.'" From this moment on, I fell in love with this little skull. Especially regarding the topic of "where are the weapons hidden?", I really thought about it for a while on the train. Is it a space bag, or is it really hidden in the abdomen. Okay, although intellectually I think it is a space bag, what is really cute hidden in the abdomen╰(￣▽￣)╮By the way, in addition to expressing my deep love for this character, I also want to ask, girl, do you feel that you have forgotten something? That's right! This is the follow-up situation of Lureide! Gave it back to Thassarian? I don't remember seeing anything like this. Regarding the proposition of supporting roles, I talked with a friend. Personally, I feel that the supporting characters (note that they are not minor characters) need to have a timeline in the novel, such as their past, present, and future. They should be briefly mentioned instead of disappearing. For example, Lerisa is relatively successful in the author's description. How are things like Lurid and Bernie, who went to deliver the letter but there is no news, how the letter was delivered? After taking the spell notes, there was no trace of the elf mage. Did the elf mage trouble the heroine, deceived the heroine's vrykul woman, etc... There are many supporting characters in the text that promote the development of the plot, but the girl did not explain them one by one. Of course, explaining one by one sometimes seems too cumbersome, and not every supporting character needs an explanation. Sometimes it is also an explanation to say that there is no news about a certain character's whereabouts; if not, be careful as it will cause a sense of disconnection in the reader. I think it is essential for the entire story to change and grow along with the protagonist's timeline. By the way, my friend said that this type of writing, similar to accidentally hearing news about someone in a corner after a long time, is also very common, and it can also be very touching if it is well crafted. ② Since I mentioned the supporting roles, I also want to talk about the supporting roles. I thought the biggest supporting cast in the whole article was "Stormwind City". As a WOWer, you will feel a sense of familiarity when you hear the description of this town, but is Stormwind City, which is actually mentioned several times throughout the text, really necessary? Because I work more from a fantasy perspective, I probably have different senses than you, girl. Let's turn our attention to Chapter 3 and take a look. The first two paragraphs are about Storm City and MI7 respectively. I think the main purpose is to introduce the identity and mission of the male protagonist. To draw an analogy, Stormwind City is Washington, and leader Mathias Shore is Obama. Does such a superior head of state really have anything to do with the ordinary citizens of the country? If it were me, the focus of the camera would remove all positive descriptions of Mathias Shore, leaving only the files on the desk and a voice. ③ I still like elves quite a lot. They are very smart and always serious. Occasionally they are bad and will make a little joke. In order to persuade the heroine, I also worried about how to play the emotional card. Although I can't remember where the elf made a joke for the first time, I was shocked at the time, haha XD By the end of the article, maybe because the relationship with the heroine became closer and closer, the overall feeling of the elf became a lot more vivid. I personally like this change in the writing. The heroine has no outstanding performance, she is ordinary, but she makes me feel very kind and real. For example, she occasionally has a little temper, occasionally becomes a nymphomaniac, her reaction to the betrayal of her friends is not pretentious, she will also be filled with indignation at unfair events, and she secretly despises herself for being dependent on elves... Haha, I don't want to think it's nothing, but when I think about it, there is really a lot to say. It's not unique, but I like the relatable characterization. When I looked back at what I had written, I suddenly had the illusion of a wild beast running wild on the grassland..._(:з)∠)_ No matter what, let it go as it has been done, I look forward to seeing you in the new article~
Hello author, the pomegranate jam review has been published, please go to the romance submission section of the jam store to receive the review ヽ(v)ノ
Bah, bah, bah, bah, bah, bah, bah, bah, bah! Dissatisfied -0-