Longing from Afar

Phew~~~~~It has developed into a long article~~~= =#typos, long comment=long article, sorry, I went crazy trying to make a long comment

^_^ As a short story, it's good, but it can really be developed into a long review, but yes, the plot seems to be a bit unconventional. In fact, many BL stories have this kind of development... (Hey, I'm PIA~~) However, it is really written with a lot of feeling, O(∩_∩)O~ Come on!!! ~

Hoho This is my review!!!!!!! But I still have to say something~~~~Haha It's a bit of a big jump, half a year has passed after so much boasting~~~ Hey, it's time to exaggerate the feeling of the "buddy stage" and create a bit of "ambiguity" that seems to be nothing, maybe it will be more outstanding That~~ I suggest adding an extra story about why he changed from a pure and simple boy to a cute and even enchanting boy after he transferred back to another school. Did his sexual orientation change during this time? What happened? Did he meet someone who played a key role? You can write it down to make the plot clear Very touching