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Thank you!!! Replying to Shentu Qiulang, at that time I thought Traditional Chinese looked good, so I tried Traditional Chinese~ I just have some things in my heart but I just can't write them out. I will try my best to write them out, make them longer, and make the whole story come alive! Thanks anyway!!!

Not bad! But, it's just for people who like it, right? Same as above, a little sudden. And why not use simplified Chinese?

Maybe it's because it's a little too short, so I didn't understand it very well, but I think it would be better if it was longer. There must be a reason for the inner struggle, but the writing seemed a bit sudden.

It's a bluff, but there is potential, keep working hard

Do you understand or not? Sweat It feels okay, keep working hard

I just finished reading it~~~ Let me sort out my thoughts~~ Well, BL... And it's not just BL, it's also a "abnormal love" (god, aren't BL all abnormal relationships? I'm so wordy…) As sisters, I would like to give you some advice Well, I personally feel that it should be written as a long chapter, or a medium-length one, which can express some more complex emotions, such as Fan's attachment to Chen, why he feels like that, and some more delicate feelings. There is still room for filling in. You can use it as a framework and fill in some flesh and blood, and it will be good